14. Field Day, chapter posted 8/4/06
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Author Commentary
Welcome the new character ******! She’s the creation of Shinoka.. and you can see her DA page at creamynoka.deviantart.com. If there was one incentive to making this particular chapter, it was because I had a great idea on how to introduce ******.. considering how much of a klutz she is. You’ll see stuff with her soon enough.. the subject was mainly about her.
And still, I haven’t finalized heights so David continues to be shorter than Paulo. He’s growing, though.. maybe I can just say he took a puberty boost and that’s why he’s so tall now! Apparently, ****** is the same height as David, making her the tallest female! Wauughh.

34 Reader Comments On This Page
Comment ID #1551
Ovaries
Gotta love David at times like that.
Grapez March 16, 2010, 10:52 AM EST.
Comment ID #5738
i would say sumtin like that if i knew wat was going on >.>
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bored as hell April 19, 2010, 7:34 AM EST.
Comment ID #7048
WOW. that is a There She Is! momment.
MacGyver Adrian Caboose April 22, 2010, 10:27 AM EST.
Comment ID #7847
this is a u r high! moment
bored April 24, 2010, 8:04 AM EST.
Comment ID #8640
…**** it, he’s not going to stop anytime soon.
UNIT2960 April 26, 2010, 3:08 AM EST.
Comment ID #20226
Hooray for inner thinking said out loud!
this guy May 11, 2010, 6:52 PM EST.
Comment ID #60599
lol, ovaries
that was so random that i choked on my laughter lolz
AznGuy July 17, 2010, 1:35 PM EST.
Comment ID #68865
Ovarieeeeeeeeeeeees!
I rofled so much.
Btw, I do loooooooove ******. ^.^
Vetus August 2, 2010, 11:53 PM EST.
Comment ID #73212
Omg! His facial expression makes it all the better
HILLARIOUS!
Sandra August 11, 2010, 1:46 PM EST.
Comment ID #78655
My respect for David has grown ten-fold.Nuff said.
Mr.Red August 19, 2010, 7:24 PM EST.
Comment ID #80161
Uh… WHAT???
Cody August 22, 2010, 7:50 PM EST.
Comment ID #81062
OMGICANTSTOPLAUGHINGNOWMYSTOMACHHURTSARGGHHHHH!!!
Kenny August 24, 2010, 10:21 AM EST.
Comment ID #127304
Uh, did he go even farther the line? Poor David, so messed up.
josue hernandez November 17, 2010, 2:01 AM EST.
Comment ID #127582
The dog with the best comments makes a return! Comedy!
SushiJaguar November 17, 2010, 6:53 AM EST.
Comment ID #137881
Silly David
Ihavepants7 December 22, 2010, 1:41 AM EST.
Comment ID #139313
You sure overthink your issues with height, maybe they are standing on really uneven ground? I don’t really see it as a problem, we can differentiate who is who with their heights changing and so let their height change instead of worrying about it so much? Or not, it’s all good.
felinoel December 28, 2010, 9:25 PM EST.
Comment ID #150966
… the hell just happened?
Lastingimage March 9, 2011, 5:40 AM EST.
Comment ID #157174
lol watch pannel 10 and 11 it looks like David has long hair whahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Call Me God April 16, 2011, 8:36 PM EST.
Comment ID #157175
OMFG THIS IS FREAKI’N HILLARIOUSE I CANT STOP LAUGHING ABOUT DAVID HE’S SUCH AN IDIOT OMFG!!!!!!! WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Call Me God April 16, 2011, 8:38 PM EST.
Comment ID #159570
know love is blind ,BUT stupid to
CRAZY April 30, 2011, 8:14 AM EST.
Comment ID #160980
ovaries 8D
Nasu May 12, 2011, 2:03 AM EST.
Comment ID #161274
Ovaries
Hoheh May 14, 2011, 5:21 PM EST.
Comment ID #165654
Is ****** a cuss word now?
Rosemarie June 6, 2011, 5:24 AM EST.
Comment ID #171612
OMG HELP LUCY
BlackAngel July 9, 2011, 2:15 AM EST.
Comment ID #177266
Anyone notice Mike saying “You sure do have nice ovaries” at the end?
Connor August 16, 2011, 10:18 PM EST.
Comment ID #178957
Ahaha, re-reading this is awesome, because even you’ve blanked out ******’s name. man that is such an awesome retcon. Waiting for my volume 1 book, i’m wondering if she’s been scratched out or censored.
cynical175 August 26, 2011, 12:31 PM EST.
Comment ID #182681
and here began the catchpfrase he will always be remebered by….ovaries lol
huh September 21, 2011, 1:52 PM EST.
Comment ID #197723
FALCON BLOCK!!!!!
The awesome one December 8, 2011, 4:08 AM EST.
Comment ID #214727
Tao YOU SAW THAT
Gary on not cool April 20, 2012, 2:55 AM EST.
Comment ID #229460
Ovaries
April September 29, 2012, 12:20 PM EST.
Comment ID #244872
I just noticed that in your comments it counts “******” as a swear…
IForgotMyUsername May 4, 2013, 12:57 AM EST.
Comment ID #244874
i meant to say kiz… una
IForgotMyUsername May 4, 2013, 12:58 AM EST.
Comment ID #245735
WHY IS ****** A FILTERED WORD
******
******
******
WHY
silveryogurt May 15, 2013, 5:29 AM EST.
Comment ID #246019
Greatest smooth opening ever david, greatest smooth opening ever
Misanthrope 4 hours ago.