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39. Rising Temperature, chapter posted 5/27/07

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Rising Temperature — Page 14
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Taeshi’s Commentary On This Page

The date is set.. tomorrow’s gonna be quite a party!

And by tomorrow, I mean several weeks in real life.. less, hopefully. This is the end of our chapter.. left on another delicious cliffhanger.. but yeah. Next time will be the prom! See Paulo and Tess in their formal getup.. and watch Mike and Daisy off at a carnival. And many more dramatic things will happen in the arc finale! Stay tuned!

I actually feel quite proud of this chapter.. it’s so dramatic and intense, but it was pulled off well for the most part, bar some areas. Let’s hope I don’t regret saying that like when I praised the horror of “Follow Me”!

See you!

10 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #2158

ahh that argument was definently the highlight of this chapter for me.
Abbey irritated about mikes seeming ignorance of daisys problems. I really don’t think mike was the right person to help her out with that anyway, it should have been paulo. (or even abbey, if he’d man’d up a bit)
the more mike helps when she’s in that vulnerable state the more attached she (and girls in general, for that) would get. :(

damn i love bittersweet! keep it up!!

lynchy226 March 29, 2010, 10:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #2496

I thought it was pretty clear why it should have been Mike to console her rather than Abbey, since it was mainly Mike who she was having the problems with. I just think Sephiroth Cat’s interference here might have thrown a spanner in the works… Sandy and Mike could really have long-term potential, more than the others give them credit for. But aside from perhaps Lucy, they really wouldn’t know, would they?

All that aside, Sephiroth Cat sees all… lurking in the shadows…
I still don’t trust him (¬_¬;)

waffle911 April 4, 2010, 1:07 PM EST.

Comment ID #9147

daisy needs to get it in her mind to BE FRIENDS, not lovers….

bored April 27, 2010, 3:02 AM EST.

Comment ID #18180

wait, i think i get ito now. wat ever his name is wanst after daisy hes after some one else and is useding daisy to do.

zes May 8, 2010, 3:33 PM EST.

Comment ID #43733

In panel 14, is that a face in Mike’s eye?

this guy June 14, 2010, 6:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #59324

lol. in panel 13 mike looks like carter but with a scarf, eyebrows, and a frown

:3:pq: July 13, 2010, 9:56 PM EST.

Comment ID #60158

Daisy is starting to freak me out a bit (fatal attraction) and the Abbey/Mike thing makes it seem like Abbey is putting too much of whats happening on Mike.

Kori July 16, 2010, 5:16 AM EST.

Comment ID #60489

damn ffc! daisy is trying to do things to mikes bad place……. stay off the ferris wheel…….

stranger July 17, 2010, 12:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #62460

uh oh that…sephiroth looking guy is there dun dun dunnnnn

lt_amazil July 22, 2010, 9:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #82571

She can be quite the scheming harpy. Bet Lucy will show up unexpectedly :D

Lax August 27, 2010, 8:58 AM EST.

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