45. Intervention, chapter posted 1/10/09

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Intervention — Page 3
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Veronica’s Commentary

I don’t really know what I was trying to do with the last panel.

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34 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #48

I can see what your trying to do in the last pannel

to me it looks like it represent they’re walking away from the probleme and putting it behind them

mat not matt *seadogs123* November 10, 2009, 1:28 AM EST.

Comment ID #2557

^^^THIS
I VOTE FOR THIS

waffle911 April 4, 2010, 6:22 PM EST.

Comment ID #2725

Oibously the last panel shows how it dissappears and they just go back like nothing hapened, hence why “there is no panel”

Loyal Reader April 6, 2010, 7:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #4755

I KNOW WHAt happened in that last panel. Your hand OBVIOUSLY seizured uncontrollably while simply trying to shade in the ground. Either that, or they’re about to get hit by a ninja mudslide. Either way works for me.

Cedric Bale April 16, 2010, 8:05 AM EST.

Comment ID #5385

The last panel is his toilet feet leaving a trail behind him.

Dilts April 18, 2010, 6:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #6019

Zach is really tall. REALLY tall.

Le Biologist April 20, 2010, 1:14 AM EST.

Comment ID #6244

I Dont get what was so bad about what mike and lucy were doing……………..its not like they were kissing or anything!

Dana April 20, 2010, 8:34 PM EST.

Comment ID #6681

@Le Biologist: Well Micheal is only like 14 or 15 he hasn’t reached his full height.

Daborior April 21, 2010, 7:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #20945

The universe is falling apart behind them.

This could get ugly

WingedFox May 13, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #28828

@WingedFox
Don’t look back!

Cuddle Bear May 27, 2010, 4:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #45806

Why not?

(looks back)

HOLY SHI…(cuts off as the very fabric of his being is torn apart)

this guy June 17, 2010, 8:52 PM EST.

Comment ID #60035

If Zach were Paulo; he probably would’ve retorted ” She won’t let me know her” xD…though anyone could say such, cause she pushes people away from fear of being hurt.

Random July 15, 2010, 11:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #60506

i know i know

they killed lucy and zach is gonna rape mike

cookeh July 17, 2010, 1:50 AM EST.

Comment ID #67458

toilet feeeet

j the fourth July 30, 2010, 2:46 PM EST.

Comment ID #74047

They’re slow motion running away from a poop tsunami.

Obi August 13, 2010, 12:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #110915

Damn it Mike, stop being a little B#tch and love her damn it. Then again, if that happens, the whole story kind of stops.

John October 25, 2010, 4:26 PM EST.

Comment ID #128704

The fabric of reality is tearing behind them. We’re just seeing the usual epic walk from a side angle, rather than the front. *exaggerated running*

SushiJaguar November 18, 2010, 6:53 AM EST.

Comment ID #132199

i didn’t know that mike and Zach walk like a bunch of revving ATVs

lolwut November 23, 2010, 4:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #151182

… where is the pedo beat down?

furrypanther March 10, 2011, 4:59 AM EST.

Comment ID #162003

So they’re walking back… without Lucy?… what heros!

? May 19, 2011, 3:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #162403

The last panel looks just plain awful. Sorry, but it’s true. :(

@John

Life goes on, even if you aren’t loved by someone. Sure, Lucy would be upset, but she would get over it. If not, then the story still wouldn’t completely stop. She has other friends, and there’s plenty of other fish in the sea…Most notably Paulo. :)

NintendoSegaSonyGuy May 20, 2011, 10:15 PM EST.

Comment ID #164028

Mike should be taller than that… Unless he’s just really short. They’re in tenth grade, yes? Is he supposed to grow another foot in the next two years or something? :/

Side note: it looks like pedocat is reaching for Mike’s tail. *shot*

Luna May 29, 2011, 8:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #167445

I love that last panel.

Ben June 16, 2011, 8:13 AM EST.

Comment ID #170951

I thought Mike was gonna go all hulk on him, then I noticed that even though Zack’s a nerdy dude, Mike still wouldn’t stand much of a chance.

lolagedifference

Fuzzles July 6, 2011, 11:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #172955

…”The grounds of which the White and the Grey have risen. The Intervention spied on the two and witnessed a forbidden scene. The Grey spotted him, and lead himself to the spy. The story not to be elaborated on, the relationship of Grey and White is to be close but never together. Intervention understood this play, and requested a wipe out of the memory of the event.

As they walk away from the scene, the unseen clockwork tolls away the happening and lifts the Black Void into the reality, destroying the remnants of something that never was.”

-The Forgotten Tao: Intervention Exists

something san wrote a while back -_-
it’s scarcely close to this

Sankuxi July 16, 2011, 4:01 PM EST.

Comment ID #173833

The blackness of the last panel symbolizes forgetting what happened maybe? o.0

TehLulzinator July 24, 2011, 4:12 AM EST.

Comment ID #176894

To me it looks like the drawer accidentaly poured some paint on the paper and said, “Hmm, doesn’t make too much sense but it looks cool! :D

paulosawesome August 13, 2011, 9:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #177615

where is lucy?

MC August 19, 2011, 3:15 AM EST.

Comment ID #184068

They’re clearly waterskiing in the last panel.

Me October 5, 2011, 12:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #185412

…Is Zach going to end up being related to Lucy?

FireflyFuneral October 13, 2011, 2:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #212634

They’re dragging the ground…

Sycrin March 25, 2012, 8:09 AM EST.

Comment ID #226826

Its the hole in Lucy’s heart growing! Like you have any better ideas XD

Someone August 31, 2012, 11:13 PM EST.

Comment ID #228495

I love how the characters arms can meld into their bodies when not needed 8-D

Kai September 15, 2012, 1:31 PM EST.

Comment ID #246589

Metaphor for the fact that mike has started unknowingly burning his bridges?past point of no return?

Curtis May 27, 2013, 12:10 AM EST.

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