69. At Loose Ends, page posted 2/24/12

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At Loose Ends — Page 24
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Comment ID #210275

Aww, poor Abbey. For how long will he be plagued by the shadows of his Father and the past that comes with it? Hopefully, after this chapter, he’ll feel a little better about everything :D

A bit of closure really helps when it comes to stuff like this. Just really hope his mother is okay. Starting to doubt it though. D:

Some Lone Keystrokes February 24, 2012, 12:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #210297

Alright, well the beatings and constant disrespect were tolerable because she had some good memories of him. But when you add CHEATING to the mix…Well all those black eyes and broken wrists suddenly carry a bit more weight don’t they? She’s gonna get hurt more too. Not happy about that. At least she stood up to him in the end. Though a more roundabout approach may have ended a bit better for her…
And damn it kills me to see how much this affected Abbey. He’s a good kid. Has strong morals, convictions, and a damn decent attitude. Just inherited a lot of problems that he may not have been ready to shoulder. Especially with having to care for his sister so much over the years. I have every hope that he’ll be ok in the long run though, even if the one thing he got from his father was his temper.

Kroth February 24, 2012, 12:14 AM EST.

Comment ID #210337

I’ve known some amazing people that have come from horrible situations, some so much worse than this even.. Funny part is, they’re the ones who, even among the rest of everyone with the perfect lives, became the people to look up to, the people to admire, the people with general goodness and love in their hearts, even though life, from a young age, showed them nothing but hate and cruelty. If they could make it, I have every confidence in Abbey.

Rii February 24, 2012, 3:07 AM EST.

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