79. Critical Hit, page posted 9/24/13

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Critical Hit — Page 9
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Veronica’s Commentary

Amaya keeps taking Sue’s clipboard, they’re sharing.

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51 Reader Comments On This Page

Comment ID #260180

Amaya is so cute and helpful. She picked up mikes clip bord for him. Sue is going to be freaking out this whole chapter because paulo and david have to touch every thing. I wouldn’t be surprised if sue slaps one of them before this is over.

Blue fox September 24, 2013, 1:04 PM EST.

Comment ID #260191

Mike’s stressed, Sue’s stressed, Paulo and Davind are CAUSING stress… and Amaya’s being nice. Don’t think she’s stressed out at all.
Way to be above the influence, Amaya. Hopefully you’ll be a positive example and show them how it’s done. Without any words, either. Show through action! :D
…still annoyed that Paulo got away with messing up Mike’s experience, though. :/

Oceanus92 September 24, 2013, 1:38 PM EST.

Comment ID #260194

Alright, I’m getting a titanic foreshadow that Sue is going to snap at Paulo and David big time. Amaya might save the day .u.

Please, Paulo, PLEASE get your mind right for once! And David- well, he’ll always be David no matter what..

ResidentEddy September 24, 2013, 1:56 PM EST.

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