She been told twice.

She been told twice.
Lucy punched him one to many times
FINISH HER
Critical hit for 9999 internal damage
o my O__O
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wow... that's....
...totally what shoulda happened sooner
Or not!
I'm confused. What did lucy do?
*cries* thats not how to sex
Hello i'm 12 and what is this?
it's violence ma boy
nice one... cue Abbey with a huge roundhouse kick in Mike's face!!!
damn someone shot his *** blow him the **** away
wow... sad part is i expected this... all that locked up anger.... Mike will end up a Psychopath when it explodes.... First Lucy... Then Paulo... Then the others...
(I Type into the comment box): OMG!!! SOMEONE F*$#EN SAVE HER!!!!! (Lucy stumbles up stairs and collapses) *Thud* (I Turn around in my chair) Me: "What the..." (Eyes widen as Mike comes up the stairs and looks at me with an evil grin) Mike: "Your next!" (I stand up and quickly throw the chair at Mike knocking him over) Me: "No I'm Not!" (I grab my car keys and make a run for the back door in the kitchen) (Mike quickly recovers and rips up the chair like a piece of paper, he picks up the chair legs and throws them at me) Mike: "where do you think you're going?" (Just before entering the kitchen, a leg hits me in the face, another hits my ankle, causing me lose my balance) Me: "AHHH!" (Mike throws another chair leg with all his strength) (I almost regained my balance when yet another leg hits me in the gut like it's punching me) Me: "Oof!" (It sends me crashing through the sliding door in the dinning room and into the sundeck railing) *Smash* (Thoughts: everything... spinning...) (Mike walks up and his evil smile grows bigger, unaware that Lucy, who is slightly shocked and barely able to stand, is a few steps behind him, watching) *Crack* (Thoughts: deck.... collapsing...) Me: "help...". (I try getting up but the deck gives way) *Smash* (I land on my mom's car, and fall onto the pavement) Me: "gotta.... get up..." (Thoughts: gotta... get to... car...) (Mike's smile grows even bigger, but it fades when he turns around because he sees Lucy running around the corner to the stairs, and Mike bolts after her) Mike: "Lucy, you can run but you can't hide!" (Lucy trips on a shoe at the bottom of the stairs and stumbles through the open front door and somehow it closes right in Mike's face) Mike: "OW!" Lucy: "Serves him right." (I try getting up but I fall to my knees, I get back up but almost lose my balance and take a step back to avoid falling down again, but a sharp pain shots through my ankle) Me: "Ow!" (I fall backwards and slam my back against my mom's car) Me: "I think that idiot sprained my ankle!" (I feel something wet trickle down my forehead, I wipe it off and find that it's blood, but it slips my mind when I hear someone's voice) Lucy: "Are you ok?" (I turn around) Me: "I uh.... yeah, I'm fine" Lucy: "Good, but who are you?" Me: "Why do you want to know?" Lucy: "So I know who you are." Me: "...." Lucy: "Uh... I'll try something else, what are you?" Me: "Run." Lucy: "What?" Me: "RUN!" (Mike punches Lucy in the back knocking her down, but she recovers and runs away, Mike starts running after her but notices me and stops, staring at me with a blank expression that quickly turns to a scary looking grin) Me: "Oh no..." (Mike starts walking toward me ever so slowly-) Mike: "Oh yes." (-as if he's Michael Myers, then again, his full first name is Michael) Me: "Ah S*$#!" (I start to run to my car when I remember my sprained ankle, but it's too late, a sharp pain shots through my ankle) Me: "Ow!" (I stumble and fall to the pavement a couple of feet from the car, the impact loosened my grip on my keys, that I had managed to hold onto since I took them from the desk I was sitting at before all of this, the keys slip out of my hand and skip under my car, I try to grab them from under the car but I can't reach them,Then came the voice) Mike: "You're mine!" (I turn my head to look at him and see that he's going to kick me, so I roll out of the way and instead of hitting me, he kicks my car) Mike: "Ow! My foot!" (I get up and limp behind him) Me: "I've said it before and I'll say it again,'No I'm Not!'" (I punch him in the back of the head and he falls to his knees in pain) Mike: "Ow my head...." (I crush his face on the pavement with my foot, I drag him into my back yard and open the gate separating my backyard from a forest-like park, I drag Mike through the gate and toss him onto a dead thorn bush,) (Thoughts: I don't care what he does when he wakes up, (shows me driving) as long as he stays the hell out of my life and doesn't beat the living crap out anyone, I can with it) (scene suddenly changes to car that drove off a bridge and landed upside down with the horn going) (or maybe, I won't.)
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I give up on it!
Fail of a ridiculous fanstory...
Actually it wasnt too horrible
B for effort
Needs linebreaks.
@Ebg17 types: What *didn't* she do? ![]()
Hey, you guys need to stop jumping to conclusions. Maybe Lucy has been replaced with an evil clone in this picture that is trying to fool Mike, but he sees through her deception, which is why he's grinning (because, y'know, he feels smart)
umm...
Lucy gave Mike to much crap to deal with this time....
That is f-ed up.
hey, anonymous person that wrote the long comment..
awesome story type thing
i give it a B+
this is fu*ked up
i hate guys that hit girls.
omg miguel es un hijo de toda su perra madre ese culero cabrón y que si va a estar asiendo sus mamadas que se lo haga a la cabrona de sandy
Fu*k you, Mike.
FATALITY...
This is some ****ed up ****.
Abused Lucy sears my soul.
GIRL HITTING IS NOT COOL!
"You shouldn't hit girls"
What a hypocrite
... In all honesty... This is expected: Lucy's constant abuse ends up slowly deteriorating Micheal's sanity until he snaps and the only "justice" he finds is to return the pain and send the message to stop the abuse because he can return it.
Lucy has stopped BEING violent overall. Expected? Riiiight.
if i ever saw somthing like this i would half to run a sword through his chest. a man should never lay hand to a lady.
Kickash
NUUUUUUUUUUUU
MIKE DUN LIEK HITTING GIRLS THO
DOES NOT COMPUTE
jajajajajaja ni en tus sueños
This is..............ridiculous....... ![]()
Hey Mike didn't your mother ever teach you not to hit girls?
@Anon 15
Awesome Story! I Give It A B+
Drawing:
. . This Is Just Sad. .
wtf anonymous?? anyhoos... gawd mike
i bet sandy made mike do that and for a reward... mike no longer being a virgin lolz
Here's a theory...
That's not really Mike.
It's a fan-made imposter who is all about MikexSandy and is doing everything in his power to make it work. I mean clearly this is true. Why else would "Mike" ignore Sandy when she calls out to him and for being an honorable guy, why would he hit Lucy when he beat the crap out of the last guy who hit Lucy?
(The bar scene bit)
That's not Mike...It's an imposter...
She should have made him that sandwich
Sandy does not apporve
These long comments be long
I approve.
Comment ID #156
WHAT THE ****! REALLY
Anonymous #1 3 years ago.