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Candybooru image #3826, tagged with Lucy MattyBatty0_(Artist) Mike MikexLucy

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Comment ID #30332

Been wanting to make a fanart for a long time now, any criticism welcome, is pretty good for a first attempt. :)

MattyBatty0 on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30335

At first I was like D:
Then i was like :O
Now I'm like :3

Anonymous #1 on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30344

Hey, that's awesome!

Well done!

Starwatcher on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30346

The lines are really wobbly, don't be afraid to go over them again in eraser and smoothing the lineart. You could always use a smaller point and build up from there. Like I tend to use thin pens and then going over them and thickening them. I don't know what this program is and if you can zoom in, but drawing while zoomed is a great way to help not make the lineart look blobby.

Taeshi on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30347

Lucy now sees the truth of things to come...

Fayt on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30352

Halfway through I was kicking myself for using such thick lines, am definitely going to do that differently if I try again, the wobbly lines are going to be hard to improve on though since they were partly due to repeated trial and error deleting and redrawing over and over, that and this whole thing was done with a mouse in photoshop :P

MattyBatty0 on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30360

Well, the art is not magnificent, but the thing you are trying to do with it most certainly is. The idea is great. ^_^

Anonymous #2 on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30381

Cool concept bro.

Anialator on June 27, 2011.

Comment ID #30410

I second that!

Anonymous #3 on June 28, 2011.

Comment ID #30436

Ooo. I like! I'm not very good at criticizing artwork since I'm not exactly the best at art. haha but i do like it!

keninja86 on June 28, 2011.

Comment ID #30468

Haha Mr. Butterfly

I see what you did

Anonymous #4 on June 28, 2011.

Comment ID #30501

Stop being a jerk Mike.

Nice Messege Dude.

This be KimmyKirby.

Anonymous #5 on June 28, 2011.

Comment ID #30611

Very nice work, I especially like the expression on Lucy.

snoregore on June 29, 2011.

Comment ID #30612

Great.

You had a really good start. But I repeat what Taeshi said, don't be afraid to erase and redraw lines more smoothly.

I can suggest using Photoshop/SAI and have a layer for the sketch, so you can draw over it in another layer, doing smoother lines.

Another good thing to use is photoshop/gimp's pen tool. Just place the vectors over the sketch and trace them. ^^

zoestell37 on June 29, 2011.

Comment ID #32228

Never seen a bteetr post! ICOCBW

Anonymous #6 on July 13, 2011.

Comment ID #40863

This scene is just 100% angst, so equally BCB-worthy :)

TehLulzinator on November 9, 2011.