Okay, here's some constructive criticism. First off, the spiral on her tail isn't connected to her tail. She only has a spiral on one of her cheeks...why? I'd suggested just putting a spiral on the top of her head, not on either cheek. The pearl necklace should extend past her outline. The eye line is pretty thick, but that's fine as long as that's what you were going for. I really like the shape of her head the way you drew it. The way you did the little cheek puffs are wonderful! Your outlines for the head and tail are fairly smooth, which is nice. Keep on drawing! <3
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Hello BCB fanbase and/or Admins! This is my first time uploading something here, so please leave constructive critisim, maybe? For my first picture I decided to draw Dasiy! She's one of my favorites. (Look at that cutie, lol.) I can NOT draw backgrounds, so thats why it's crappy. ~NinjaFox
NinjaFox on May 29, 2012.