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Candybooru image #7158, tagged with Augustus Cool-Lens_(Artist) Lucy human

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Comment ID #55044

I like the idea, but Aug's face looks really creepy.

Oso-De-Clare 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55046

pretty amazing

eniena 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55055

Great pict, but Augustus' face is weird...

Volgrand 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55065

Could you give some constructive criticism instead of his face is weird/creepy, It would really help me out in becoming a good artist.

Cool-Lens 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55068

I think they are talking about his black eyeball...

eniena 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55069

Eniena,
That's just the color of the eye tho. lol The rest is hid by the hair.

Cool-Lens 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55074

The shape of the mouth makes it look a bit like lip-biting, like he's enjoying it. and the black eye is a bit off, too. Doesn't go well with the rest of the shading. (for his eye to be that dark, the left half of his face should be quite shaded, too). He also does have a big nose, but I'm guessing this is part of your style with the long fingers and stuff like that, too.

It's still a very nice drawing, and not a very usual style here in the booru. Kinda reminds me of some impressionist paintings (am i getting the right term here? might be confusing with something else).

If she's uncocious / dead, aybe her left arm should be hanging lower, shouldn't it?

On a different note, human Lucy can't fall on her feet.

Migrant 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55080

You are right about the lip biting, I was trying to aim for clenched teeth, but I'm not really good at teeth or mouths in particular. For the eye, I'll try to lighten the shading of it a bit. I tried to fix that nose so many times that I gave up on that part XP. I've been working on hands for quite some time, haven't got the hang of it yet.

I do know what you mean! I think you got the right term but not too sure myself.

I was thinking that too but the left arm is kind of resting on her butt, somewhat but yes it should be lower.

But Thank you so much Migrant, for the critism!!

Cool-Lens 1 year ago.

Comment ID #55098

It's Lucis and Aughead. :smirk:

Geist 1 year ago.