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Candybooru image #8439, tagged with JayGamer_(Artist) Sandy

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Comment ID #61000

i haven't been uploading because i forgot how to procrastinate, but now it's the holidays so DRAWDRAWDRAW
I'm trying out a new style sorta thing, so CRITICISE AWAAAAY
(please)

JayGamer on April 14, 2014.

Comment ID #61001

It's so Cute :love: :love: :love:

_sorry_girl_ on April 14, 2014.

Comment ID #61002

Awwwwww that's adorable!! I really adore the style, though if you want me to critique I feel the legs and arms are a bit too long comparable to the body? The crotch sorta feels.. drawn in like it was picked there with no prior body planning, like is there a sketch of the body before the limbs are added? That can help a lot. Probably just me though, but something about it gives me that vibe. I still really like it!!

Sorry if what I say makes no sense, but with the new style I've been trying out I keep falling into that problem, like the body just feels too short and I'd redraw it. Helps to draw the shape first!

Taeshi on April 14, 2014.

Comment ID #61004

It's cute. And yea long legs and arms. The head and face look really nice and detailed.

bluefox on April 14, 2014.

Comment ID #61006

Alright criticism it is,
You have a very nice clean style, the lines are clean and you did a great job at getting the light source down. The shadows are nicely in place and the style you have is cute and cartoony its really refreshing.
As said before the proportions of parts of the body are essential
The arms are fine, if the character was standing upwards the arms would comfortably rest at the hips as intended so thats good
The legs seem to be ok too however the torso is the only issue that can be solved easily
Its really short well stumpy, can't find the word, but it feels odd because of how it doesn't keep some proportion it just feels as if the leg is going to connect to the neck and the breast is just sitting there. You should just lengthen the torso just a bit to show so that it still has some body ratio. It doesn't have to be too much either just enough so that the legs don't appear to be connected to the breast or neck. But besides that your style is clean, sweet, and adorable. The colors very nice the shadows and highlights are well done and I can't wait to see more of this style.
I hope this helped and if I came off rude im sorry ><"

imp on April 15, 2014.

Comment ID #61010

Hey all,
Thank you SO much for the criticism! This image was a bit of an experiment; the body proportions are obviously the biggest problem according to you guys, so I'll work on resizing the torso and limbs while still trying to keep the particular cartoony style I'm trying to achieve.
Once again, thanks guys.
(Also Imp, you didn't come off as rude, don't worry :P

JayGamer on April 15, 2014.

Comment ID #61015

CUTECUTEUCUUTEUCUTEUCUTE

Striife on April 15, 2014.

Comment ID #61031

The proportions aren't a problem, I think it adds a new set of variety to Candybooru

Rcrssmn on April 15, 2014.