What did I misspell?
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The Move, A realistic Fan Fiction By Hen Barrison
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drasticly elevenish youger
drastically eleven-ish younger
Many of your sentences are grammatically awkward as well, but I’m not going to point them out because I’m too pissed at you for making me dig through your last post for spelling errors instead of just doing it yourself. ![]()
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sorry, I knew about drastically when I right clicked It never gave me that spelling.
same for eleven-ish.
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Hell yeah! Paulo and David!
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I figured people would like that.
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IT LIVES! IT LIVES!
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I’m gonna put this out here now. I’m going to be unable to work on this for quite some time now that my laptops adapter is broken, so don’t expect any updates any time soon. Sorry.
Head back to the forum index.
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Interesting idea, mediocre execution. I would suggest some serious editing (go through it with spell-check at the very least).
It would furthermore seem that the improvement from your last posts to this one was minimal if existent. Please try to work in some of the suggestions that Maverik posted. They were mostly good ones.
Criticical *Ninja October 17, 2010, 10:44 PM EST.