Bittersweet Candy Bowl

whoo susan here again with yet another work, probably going to be the longest of any BCB works I have ever done, and the reason I uploaded it to Fanfiction.net instead of posting it here like the lazy anus that I am.

Here it is!

So please, enjoy and give me feedback~

Love it, thank you for writing this Susan and also at the beginning “suitcase” haha. Yep, I read kinda fast heh I’m currently at the second paragraph and I liked it

Hahahahaha. Well written as always. Though I’m noticing that you really do love the word cantankerous :p

I still feel like you’re struggling a little with some of the character interplay (specifically between Mike & Sandy), but it’s getting better.

Also, Rickter is in the US in the regular cannon. It’s a state or two away from Roseville, so I found it mildly amusing to see you place it in England hahaha.

fuuuuu

It always seemed so European to me hnnnngh

I liked it. Hope you update soon.

I like what I see so far Susan. Sandy isn’t a total bitch yet in this one and she isn’t crazy so that’s good. Keep up the good writing, you’re getting better all the time.

For argument’s sake, let’s say that Rickter is in England. I mean, it might as well be considering all the shit it puts Mike through.

Susan, this is awesome. I’m going to be out of town for the next three days, so I will be back Sunday night to read the rest of this.

On an amusing side note, this entire scenario actually happened to me.

I’m gonna take a wild guess and say this is the idea I gave you.

Good writing there Susan. It’s good stuff like this that make the days between BCB updates shorter.

No, David, your idea will see light soon.

This is my own with good help from Maverik <3

I loved it WIsh I could write like this… Three weeks on and my Amaya fanfic is no nmearer to completion ;/

another chapter is up~

This is so fucking awesome~

I did say wild guess. I mean it involves Mike x Sandy, and a letter. Whatever, it’s my dumb side at work. Not David levels of dumb, but still dumb.

Nice double point of view thing. Can’t wait for more, even if we all know how it will probably end.

I like the interactions between Mike and Sandy. It just screams British. Also the subtle irony of it all. Mike says he loves Sandy for years and years, and now they are in what seems to be a strained relationship. Compared to Lucy and Paulo’s engagement, it just has this nice reversal of expectations as to what their relationships would seem to be and dear lord I need to take a break from Literature studies.
Great as always, interested to see where you take it from here.

Oho, I see where you are going with this Miss-Susan-MikexLucy

New chapter is up~

Noone saw that comming.

*turns sarcasm mode off*

Yay for more shipping to read!

Wow. Now I am really interested to see where you take this.

Hooray for more romance! Hooray for drama! Hooray for French food! Hooray for all!

I am going to kill one puppy for every eight hours you don’t finish this.

Well, technically Jesus does the dirty work, I suppose.

i will assist jerk by killing one baby every 4 hours you do not finish this.

This is a very good series. I hope you update it soon. And by soon, I mean now.

1. Update this.
2. Get in the Random Chat thread.
3. ???
4. PROPHET

*dies for your sins*

i see what you did there jerk…

also, i have killed 6.35 infants. only you can stop human flesh fires.

sorry guys but I have to finish The Siren’s Song first