Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Sally woke up and grabbed her phone as fast as she could. she texted mike, saying she had a surprise for him. She got on her robe and had a shower.

Sally looked down at her feet wondering what to wear. Finally she figured it out and had breakfest. She had already called her job so she could have a day off.

MEANWHILE…..

Mike picked up his phone as soon as he saw the text and called lucy. “Lucy! Sally says she has a surprise for me and, and, and!!!” Mike yelled into his phone, “What???!!!” Lucy yelled, “Sally is coming here!” He shreiked into the phone. Lucy was silent. “OH…. your imaginary slut is coming to visit you! oooooooo!” Lucy said sarcasticly. “Just come over here,” Mike said angrily.

Lucy quickly walked over. Mike answered the door himself. He grabbed lucy’s arm and dragged her into his bedroom. “Why did you want me here again?” Lucy asked, “Well your a girl right…” He said nervously, “WHATS THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN?!” Lucy yelled, “nothing, nothing, pretend i said nothing! but I need your help to tell me what to say.” “You mean you want me to tell you what to say on your ‘date’,” Lucy asked, “well….kinda…” Mike shyly said. “NO WAY! Call Paulo not me!” she said, kicked him in the stomach and left.

“Well that went well,” Lilly said scarcasticly. Mike sat on his bed sighing. “Wait, Paulo! he knows tons ‘bout girls!” He yelled. He called paulo and he arrived right away. “So, Sally is coming over?” He asked, “And you want me to tell you what to say?” “y-yeah..” Mike relpied, “awsome!” Paulo yelled.

“Start off by calling her.” paulo said, so he called her. “Greet her,” Paulo said, “Uhh Hi sally…” Mike nervously said, “Hi mike!” Sally yelled, “say; I was wondering, would you like to meet me at the park?” Paulo said, “Umm I was wondering, would you like to meet me at the p-park?” Mike shivered, “Sure mike!”


To be continued

Wait.
Who is Sally?

I kicked Sandy out.

Uhhh

Uhhhhhhhhhhhh

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Yes, a nice tasty glass of Uhhhh for Ace, and what will Sally have?

Oops, guess i wrote Sally instead of Sandy, Sorry guys!

…xD

lol.

your fail can has fail

Everyone makes mistakes

Hmmm.
Never heard of a Sally.

Also, when having people speak in a convo, make every person who speaks a new paragraph.
As such-

“Jerk!” Lucy barked, bending her ears to her scalp as she scolded the grey cat.
“EERRRRGH ANGST RESPONSE I WUV SAHNNNNDY NO UEWWWWW.” Mike, King of Angst retorted, holding his arms against his sides, shaking fists.
“lowut.” Lucy blankly stared.

Geddit?
“

*injects Jinx with a serum, knocking them out cold*
Bring in the team, we have another test subject ready for rehabilitation… Looks like Susan’s lonely days will be slightly less lonely…

@Maddy It’s cool, everyone does make such mistakes.