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Comment ID #112690

Hi I’m maddypd! This is a thing were I will write the begining of a BCB story (that is made up) and you continue it. you continue it from the story I wrote and then one 10 have been made I will take 2-4 of the best ones and you guys and continue on from that! SO here’s the story.


Story: Lucy woke up and looked out her window. She walked downstairs and went to the park. She saw someone sitting at the tree her and mike always sat at. She …….. NOW YOU WRITE YOUR PART!

MaddyPD October 27, 2010, 8:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #113000

she dashed to the tree, and found michael there, reading a book. ‘may i join you?’ ask lucy. ‘yes, of course’ mike answered.

01-10010-1011 October 28, 2010, 2:32 AM EST.

Comment ID #113099

As Lucy sat herself next to Michael, the tree they were sitting in spontaneously burst into flames.

ANinnyMouse October 28, 2010, 4:26 AM EST.

Comment ID #113103

“Veronica, do you think that is really a good idea? It seems out of place,” said SuitCase. Taeshi sighed and began to erase the flaming tree. “I guess you’re right, Oliver. But I would have like to see the reaction it would have provoked.” She replaced the empty spot on the page where the burning tree had been with a normal one, and then moved on.

Vanilla*Ninja October 28, 2010, 4:29 AM EST.

Comment ID #113142

Lucy rubbed her eyes and blinked twice “did this tree just…no…nevermind”

Mike looked over at her, confused. “What are you talking about?”

Lucy blushed slightly, embarassed for acting foolish. But as usual she covered it well. “Doesnt matter. So what stupid book are you reading?”

Trev October 28, 2010, 5:42 AM EST.

Comment ID #113213

“It’s not stupid,” grumbled the Korat. “It’s homework.”

“Boring,” retorted Lucy. She stood up, and grabbed a branch at a comfortable height. Then, she climbed into the tree’s crown, as Michael watched her with a mix of bemusement and amusement. The Khao Manee looked down at him from her perch, and said with a taunting tone: “Let’s have a tree climbing contest!”

ILB October 28, 2010, 11:29 AM EST.

Comment ID #113598

Mike then jumped on Lucy, and proceeded to buttrape her.

Grass October 29, 2010, 1:58 AM EST.

Comment ID #113730

^Really -.-
At her best attempt to resist the rape… she tried to get away. But Mike is holding years of angst in him. But then….

DemonKat October 29, 2010, 4:37 AM EST.

Comment ID #113885

That’s Start to being awkward…

Continue the story :
…Lucy Realize that It wasn’t Mike who Pretend to buttrape her but it’s Paulo!?!
she Decide to Back-headbutt Paulo and kick his…..
(funny thought)

Bloodyspare October 29, 2010, 1:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #113889

…Clitoris (!?), which led to some surprising revalations for the readers.
It was at this point that Sandy turned up, and she…

sammy October 29, 2010, 1:48 PM EST.

Comment ID #113894

….ate the heart of a newborn baby lamb. Mike was shocked, but instead of feeling disgusted, he…..

Gabriel Kaxbe October 29, 2010, 1:58 PM EST.

Comment ID #113897

…became aroused at the thought of Sandy reenacting her part from the “Love me” fanfic. It was at this point that he woke up to a frantic Blur screaming in his face. Relieved that it was all a dream, he then proceeded to…

Sean October 29, 2010, 2:15 PM EST.

Comment ID #113900

….masturbate furiously. He closed his eyes, imagining that he was one a beach having sex with….

Gabriel Kaxbe October 29, 2010, 2:28 PM EST.

Comment ID #113913

… nobody at all.


Come on. Put some effort into it, folks. ^_^

ILB October 29, 2010, 3:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #113919

I tried…

:(

Sean October 29, 2010, 3:20 PM EST.

Comment ID #113924

Yes, you did. The other five (or possibly six) did not. ^_^

ILB October 29, 2010, 3:40 PM EST.

Comment ID #113929

Okay, continuing the story:

Mike readied the bath and started preparing his bag for school. His pile of books fell over and that’s when he noticed…

Gabriel Kaxbe October 29, 2010, 3:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #113936

An unopened letter from Lucy. He paused for a moment before reaching for a nearby letter opener for slicing the envelope open and pulling out the note. His eyes went wide as he read the letter, which said…

Sean October 29, 2010, 3:51 PM EST.

Comment ID #113943

[not the continue story]
hmm……. what are Lucy supposed to write to Mike that make his eye grew wide?

[my continue story…. (not the best idea…. you can skip and re-write it if you want….)]
…..Dear Mike…
………I don’t know what if you have free time to hang out with me at the theatre…. I want to…

But before he could read it clearly, Yashy Smash and opened the door Which instantly make Mike Shocked that the letter fell if his hand…
Yashy : Flea!! Help!
Mike : What Happened Yashy?
Yashy : Mommy…. Mommy…
Mike : (Shocked!) What Happened to Lucy?!? (run out of his room to stair)
Mike was shocked… stunned cold…. he saw Lucy Lying on the floor The shoe that on the top of stair explain that she’s fell from top of stair… and then Mike Shout…

Bloodyspare October 29, 2010, 4:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #117463

Lucccyyyy
he ran down to help her and carried her to his bed and cared for her. She woke up and…

DemonKat November 3, 2010, 2:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #117465

Quickly punched him in the face for leaning over her, mike barely had time to explain himself before…

Morlair November 3, 2010, 2:50 AM EST.

Comment ID #117686

…he flown across the room by Lucy’s Falcon Punch! But Yashy save him by telling the truth before the punch hit Mike’s face….
Lucy : (after listened yashy speech) …Oh!…(lower her fist)…sorry Mike….
Mike : it’ okay… and where is th letter? (searching for the letter he drop)
Then… someone shout from front of house…
David : Mike! Lucy! are you prepare for the camping yet?
Mike : camping?
And then……

Bloodyspare November 3, 2010, 2:13 PM EST.

Comment ID #134547

Paulo burst in, somehow knocking the door in, which barely missed mike and lucy. he was dressed in a hunter’s uniform, only with a dart blower.
Paulo: Hey guys! You both ready to go and test your skills in the woods?!
*phone rings*
Paulo: *picks it up, puts on speaker* hello?
Tess: oh, hey Paulo! i hope you remembered that the trip is a regular camping trip in the woods, and that you didnt spend all your money on buying a dumb hunter’s outfit. Remember, it was to but food and supplies. we wont be sharing.
Paulo: uh… *frowns, then laughs in embarrassment* well-
Tess: PAULO!
yashy, Chirpy, Lily, Lucy and Mike: can someone please explain whats going on?!

Kitsonpaw Hernandez November 28, 2010, 4:28 AM EST.

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