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Dotzrus November 2, 2010, 12:50 AM EST.

Comment ID #118150

Elections are finally over, no more damn commercials for two years

Dotzrus November 4, 2010, 12:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #118158

Dotzrus November 4, 2010, 1:03 AM EST.

Comment ID #118265

hey, I found this Forum! Odd that I didn’t see it when scrolling down the Forum page the first time.

Anyway, I just wanted to point out that, yes, while Space and Time are technically constants apart from any basic dimension, I’d think that it’d be pretty cool to have a Non-Dimensional Faction made up of just the deities of Space and Time, maybe even the deity forms of solid Factions, known as Unity, Chaos, Good, and Evil. Basically straight up gods, just physical in another dimension apart from our own. Maybe they could be designed and added in a climactic part of the story, only taking on physical forms when absolutely needed, such as if a “balance of the universe,” or something of the like, is disrupted. This would be possible if one of them suddenly became more powerful than another.

Actually, I’m just throwing this whole idea out there, but what if having all of the characters of our storyline here joining a single faction is the straw that throws the faction into greater power than the others. Then, in trying to balance it out, one or more of the other deities come into the physical dimension to correct it. That’s just an idea.

Baeleox November 4, 2010, 4:36 AM EST.

Comment ID #118268

Oh, and I want to do a character bio, even if he would only exist for 1 sentence of the story.

Name:
Chase

Description:
Lost his power of speech when it his vocal chords were lost at some point during a war with other factions. He speaks by telepathy, but most is good enough at it that people feel like they understand him and can confide in him easily. Utilizing this, he has an incredible knowledge of nearly everything and has mastered controlling people of their own free will, but he never uses this unless forced to. He’s easily fixed his voice, but he hasn’t spoken a word to anyone in 7 years. He’s 15 years old by BCB Earth years.

Form:
A light turquoise tinge in his grey fur. He has a scar on his chest where his vocal chords were removed which he mostly covers with a black jacket with strange blue markings on the arms. His eyes change color based on his mood, a helpful part with him being unable to speak.

Elements:
He focuses mainly in air based tactics, from flying to Aerial Displacement (teleporting). His main attacks are pressurizing the air around his opponent to slow or stop their movement, then crush or slice them with the thickened air. He can take a hit, but his speed is unnaturally fast, even for an Elemental.

Faction:
Chaos.

Baeleox November 4, 2010, 4:47 AM EST.

Comment ID #118324

Very good, I like it.

Dotzrus November 4, 2010, 11:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #118819

Actually, I just realized some things that I messed up. When I say he’s 15 years old by BCB Earth years, I mean that his FORM is of a 15 year old. He’s had a few thousand years of practicing his talents. Also, in the form part I said that his fur is light turquoise. His hair is the same color in human form.

Baeleox November 5, 2010, 12:16 AM EST.

Comment ID #118821

Thank you, I’m glad you like it, though.

Baeleox November 5, 2010, 12:16 AM EST.

Comment ID #118860

just wondering, what about a electric power? i aways loved the thought of burning or shocking things (not crazy, just… i have no answer) and i did’t see a electric power listed before.

Domafari November 5, 2010, 12:51 AM EST.

Comment ID #118865

yes there is the Electricity Element.

Dotzrus November 5, 2010, 12:58 AM EST.

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