This is not where the story is going to be posted, but it will prepare for it. Any characters you want in, particular story line wanted, or even funny jokes that will leave the story more enjoyable to readers is appreciated.
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Brave The Elements(Story)
Comment ID #116631
Comment ID #116632
THIS STORY WILL NOT CONTAIN NSFW CONTENT.
DONT EVEN TRY IT.
Thanks
Comment ID #116633
I think you should use puns.
Comment ID #116638
I was imagining punching David so hard that he hits a mountain with enough force to bring the mountain crumbling down. And strangely, David would survive like when Yashi is shot out of a building into oblivion.
Comment ID #116641
……. That works too.
Comment ID #116653
A fire character walking over something hot and the others hopping, trying not to get burned.
Comment ID #116657
You mean Paulo.
Comment ID #116664
Thought he was fire, just wasn’t sure.
Comment ID #116668
Yeah.
Im afraid your the only person to respond to this.
It makes me think that people either are waiting for me to shut up and start writing or they just dont like it.
Comment ID #117016
I could advertise on the Random Chat.
Comment ID #117019
Don’t even think about it, Dark.
And write, away, I shall look forward to it ^_^
Comment ID #117021
<_< >_>
Don’t think about what?
Comment ID #117056
If you advertise, it would make me look desperate for attention.
Comment ID #117057
Thanks anyway.
Comment ID #117060
No, it would make Dark look like a sad fanboy. Just saying. ^_^
Comment ID #117066
I am a fan of many things. I am a boy. But i’m not a damn FANBOY!
Comment ID #117071
I LOVE BUTTING IN ON CONVERSATIONS!!!
Yeah…
A person is not a fanboy unless one admits it.
Comment ID #117198
I got this idea from a fanfic I read.
Can you imput parts in the story where a character is singing something? (as in a real song)
Comment ID #117275
yeah
Comment ID #117280
Is that a “That’s a good idea.” or “That’s a bad idea.”?
Comment ID #117285
Good good
Comment ID #117298
I’ve just been waiting.
you had a whole nother thread to get stuff figured out.
If you werent ready you should have asked questions on that thread
Comment ID #117305
i know, i know
Comment ID #117308
You could have the Breaking Benjamin song Blow Me Away for the battle scenes.
Comment ID #117325
…or Linkin Park or Through The Fire and The Flames
Comment ID #117351
Little Wonders by Rob Thomas for the romantic parts.
Comment ID #117360
YEAH, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
Comment ID #117842
For the calmer parts Bobby Mcferrin’s Don’t Worry Be Happy or Rusted Root’s On my Way.
Comment ID #118667
@Dotzrus Just so you know Sanity and Sadness are loyal to their leader.
Comment ID #118680
Dominic is not their leader though.
Comment ID #118682
……. To Dominic then….. when they meet and get to know him.
Comment ID #118684
Still not, they all serve Chaos, who is a large entity, like a deity, looks like a giant eyeball, sometimes.
Comment ID #119131
I wouldn’t think that chaos’s form would be exact. You’d think it would change form much like a regular Elemental in order to live to it’s expectations.
Comment ID #119285
Chaos, the living essence thing, actually lives in one of those ‘in between time and space’ dimensions.
Comment ID #119450
Update:
Anger:
Animal-like in actions when angered.
Can speak normally when calm and when angered.
When angered will lengthen S’es and hisses at people.
Sadness:
Very blunt
Light:
Thinks deeply about many things.
Sanity: Good in Strategy and Recon.
Comment ID #119460
Just read the latest chapters.
Sadness is not that sad. He normally cries when alone, though your version of how he speaks and how much is good. Just less crying unless he is alone. (Or at least thinks he’s alone till someone walks in on him crying or something)
Comment ID #119467
Thanks
Comment ID #120413
Here ya go.
Name:
Form X
Description:
Created by the combining of Light, Dark, Sadness, and Anger into one being. Wishes to form Chaos and Unity to rule all.
Form:
Black shirt.
White trench coat.
Deep blue pants with wide legs covering feet.
Black shoes.
Black fingerless gloves with white pads.
Wide brim fedora mostly black with a white band.
Goggles one lens blue the other red.
Black shoes with retractable spikes.
Right arm green.
Left arm blue.
Right leg yellow.
Left leg red.
Rest of right half white.
Rest of left half dark gray.
Elements:
All
Abilities:
Technological master.
Ace in all weapons.
Right arm:
Top of forearm can slide background releasing a sword connected to arm.
Bottom of forearm can slide back releasing a gun connected to arm.
Left arm:
Top of forearm can slide back releasing a gear shaped shield.
Faction:
Unknown
Comment ID #120456
IT’S A RAINBOW!!!
lol
Nice Final Boss-like character,
I thought that Sanity and Insanity had to fuse into him too.
Comment ID #134631
I knew I forgot something! Here is more on Form X.
Goes with
Abilities:
Four panels on his back can move allowing four mechanical legs to extend. These legs are colored silver and capable of walking. The tips can become sawblades for attacking.
Two wings can form on his back for flight. The main section of the wings (The arm-like part on a bat.) is colored black. The thinner section is colored white.
Comment ID #134645
Sounds more and more like a cyborg.
Head back to the forum index.
Comment ID #116628
Alright…
I am going to write a long term story based of Elements, BCB characters, and other combinations of Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Romantic, Action, Adventure, Imagination based of a game I played when I was young that still stronly lingers in my memory to this day.
The link to the other Forum is where discuss on the general fantasy of Elements and Cosmetic Orders and other stuff related to that topic. Post there if you want to comment the general idea of topic and not the story.
Thanks
Dotzrus November 2, 2010, 12:59 AM EST.