Bittersweet Candy Bowl

To SuitCase: Actually it base on Furthia High and a Animes Call Gundam Seed/Destiny And Gundam 00 , i only trying to make a action-drama Comic that is really dificult and i also i want to add Comedy to a Action Comic like Exterminatus Now

To Migrant: And it always Human boy who get a furry Girl well i want the Opposite of it that( Furry Boy with a Human Girl) , and the amnesia thing is a great idea but it be to much like Furthia High wich my story was inspire that Comic, i dont want my comic to be a “Reverse Furthia High comic” and i having Difficulty with the Comic Name, i was working with “Zero Destiny” or “ANTHROS” etc

To Cloud: Actually like i say to SuitCase like half way or near the end The Characters wear Power Suit wich resmeble Gundams in the Wars Betweent Furrys(Anthros) and Human(The Power Suit Idea was from Metroid but since it base from Gundams it be call “Mobile Suits” or i think of aname for it)

To Sammy: no i mean i m a Hard Core Furry Fan tht is all

To all in General: I dont mind is there bad critics of my idea infact i m glad to know wat to make it better so thnx to all who have reply So far in my situation

What i trying to make here is a deep Story about the Furry(Anthros) and Humans

And have Jokes about Comics along the way That my Fursona Interview others famous Furrys
in the segment “Special Guest Comics” or something idk i like being random

What tht soppose to mean tht i dont have originality?? T~T

ITT: Taeshi grades everyone present based on relevance.

Raxki. You are officially my arch-nemesis now.

The five-letter, two-voweled screenname with an “x” in the middle makes it clear. You are my enemy. I am calling you out. You have a month to prepare yourself. On December the 2nd we shall do battle.

Kaxbe vs. Raxki

ONLY ONE OF US DESERVES OUR “X”.

Welcome!

edit: to many people commented at once ignore this.

O.O WAIT WHAT?!?!?!?!? …….
Ok……First Time tht My Name bring me a something like this T~T

To Taeshi: well i can Argue with you since you a Poud in this and i understand i know i say i dont mind bad reviews but somehing it feel bad tht the ideas one is making is awful,But thnx i will Find another way to make it more original

Went i make my Test Strips may i allow to post it here so i can see your ppl opinion?

I know, Taeshi, I was just fucking around.

Suitcase trolls but trolling doesn’t define him. I just figure that he hides his emotions behind a terse wall, but in reality he is filled with love.

(For Vero and Apple products.)

Step 1: Think up a story
Step 2: Think up characters that people can relate to
Step 3: Think of something that will make your comic stand out
Step 4: Plan out chapters ahead of time yet keeping them flexible to change
Step 5: Draw

Comic making is mostly planning.

I HOPE YOU LEARN FROM THIS, ARCH-NEMESIS.

To Kaxbe: Easier say that done…..and helping ur enemy no wonder u gonna lose
unleast we have a Friendly Arch Nemesis relantion ship o.o

to Jerk: ok

Gabe is already in a relationship~

Suitcase has a heart of gold, hidden under a soul of basalt and skin of granite.

A story edited three times looks nothing like its finished copy.
Nothing.
Different formatting.
Different styles.
Different main characters sometimes.
Just start writing.
Infuse every third page with badass epiphanies you had about things that could happen in your story while you’re supposed to be working.
Keep your original copy up but recreate the whole thing after finishing at least once.


@ taishie. what do you think a troll is?

Dirt i trying to understand most of what your traying to Say

To jerk: oh ok o.o…

Raxki: This is not Foe Yay. Anyways, most things are easier said than done. I am currently rewriting a webcomic idea that I had after doing a few comic pages of the characters to experiment with how they interact with each other. Because I did that, I discovered that my story didn’t focus on a centric group of characters and I was sacrificing character relatability with the audience for making the situation seem “real” by adding different characters belonging to different cliques which still interact with each other much like a real life human network.
Look, if you want a good example of this which is NOT Taeshi’s work, look at One Piece. Oda has had most of his story planned eons in advance while still leaving tons of room for modifications (characters like Franky, Brooke, and Iva weren’t even in his original story draft!!)

Jerk: I know~ And she is awesooooommmmmeeeee~ Also, in five years…

and i planing it all together putting all the pieces on there place it not a croosover or anything like that like tht.

hay Raxki…

listen,i’m never for baggin’ on people on forums…
and i’m sorry for my bad spelling in advance,…
but,it sounds like what you have here is some bad unoriginal idias mixd with some vary bad original ones…

you have a bad idia…
and your getting bad advice…

i honestly think that any story can be made into a good story.
a good writers job is not allways to thing of a new idia,but rather to use old idias to tell a new story.
you dont seem to be trying to do that.
i think the problem starts with you thinking that “furry” is an integral part of the plot.
when its really only an art style. (a bad one,some would say.)
just think about it,would BCB or better days be any less good if it was about humens ?

look,in a way your of to a good start.
you have some good role models.
jay nylon… who get and undeserved bad rep.
maybe cuz hes too republican in his comics,,, or maybe cuz hes a raceist dickweed…
who can say ?
but he dose tell a good story in his comic.
and lil, who isn’t being very nice to you right now,..
but all an all is a good person with a grate comic.

listen,don’t let this stop you from makeing a comic.
you might do well and you might do poorly.
but try to thing of a way to make your story special,

no harsh feeling.
and i wish you good luck.

@ Taeshi: Hm. If you say so. I just said that because I could’ve sworn I heard him once say something along the lines that he was just trolling, but maybe not. My memory is not what you would call reliable.

GEE GABE WHAT HAPPENS IN FIVE YEARS >8[

To Kaxbe: and How you discovered that your story didn’t focus on a centric group ?

I’m just saying to put a bit more thought into the story.

And Raxki, you’d better prepare for the battle. YOU HAVE ONE MONTH.

EDIT:
It was more like I realized that I had too many characters that I planned out stories for, problems to deal with, etc… After doing a few rewrites, I found a way for them to still be “involved” in the story while still keeping them out of the main focus of the comic. I narrowed it down to about eight characters that I care the most about as being the main focus. Of course, I’m not drawing it YET. I still have tons of work on Larken Comics and Meet the Boss to do.

To Odd Guy: Wow i took tht very nice and hard but it since your Trying to help i apreciated it all. just wait until you and others see my Test Comics maybe your not getting what i trying to make. i not copying somebody Ideas just “Transfoming “tht Idea in to something new maybe u see it in the way i not seen it.

This part means that shit’s going to be very very very very different from whatever you set out to make(A story edited three times looks nothing like its finished copy. Nothing. Different formatting. Different styles. Different main characters sometimes.)

Just start writing. (Just start writing.)

Keep thinking about what you could have or could have had happen and use that stuff.(Infuse every third page with badass epiphanies you had about things that could happen in your story while you’re supposed to be working.)

Here I am recommending the usage of an archive and also I am recommending taking multiple tries at your story. (Keep your original copy up but recreate the whole thing after finishing at least once.)

To Kaxbe: ok i will think of tht you have a good point there thnx

To Dirt: oh i got yes i see your point of View now thnx

To dirt: man what a idiot tht i did not get the first Time. i need a Editor T.T

i would love to see it when your done.

To Kaxbe: ummmmmmmmm What form of battle you want to annihiated your sorry Donkey Butt?

HEY, NEMESIS

There is this nifty thing called an “Edit” button which you can use to edit posts that you have already made.

EDIT:
Like I would tell my nemesis that information. Just be prepared.

No, you don’t need an editor.
you just have to know that your finnished product will be totaly different from your original goal regardless of if you get an editor.
Have a editor if you want.
Just know that once you compleat your first copy your not done.

To OddGuy:yes but may allow it to post it here a Test Comic and the Story Script? or another place for to be view like here?

to Kaxbe : your asking for it assface ….

@Raxki: (^__^)

To odd Guy: Ok make the Story Script, kept the Original version and Make a Edit version of later got it

dont ask me,i’m not a mod or nothing…
but yeah,post it here.

ok thnx. and thnx for the tips everyone is telling me i really apreciated it all

Edit: Offtopic gonna stay with BCB until the end

*Talking to My self*Man this be the biggest creation i done this Human And Anthro Comic will be hard to make, fix all the plot holes make everythinh fall into places,but is something i like that want to make it not be the best comic out there but i will Try My Best To Make it real.Even with the Limited Resources i have i will Try.

You don’t have to do all that yet.
Just start making things.
Later you can change the characters, locations, situations, themes, art style, and title.
Just get off the form and start making.

I Know just trying to boost my self confident

I Got The Art Style it easy to do mostly anything ( and Keep Practicing since i suck)and i dont want to add Color it be Pencil Drawn i see adding Color as a waste of Time T~T but who knows maybe in the future i may add Color
I Got The Location
Title i having Trouble there DX
Theme well i going for a Comedy-Drama-Action i star with that

Let me ask you and just answer it.
Are you half a man or a whole man?

before i tell tht question wy you interest?

If you want to know answer the danm question.
What part of “just answer it” didn’t click?

fine. a half man

Look at this half-man.

You can still do anything.