Bittersweet Candy Bowl

edited out.

Ok, If the edit timer on the next one runs out i’m leaving it.

You could add that to the list of things that get her against “chaos”.
They could end up both wandering off because they were uncomfortable and then they could meet up. Don’t forget that Dominic can predict their actions fairly well but coincidences are out of reach.
should I remove this comment by edit?

No, no, its good.

Chapter 17
Intermission
Slumber Party, Part 3


“Hey Dominic, can I ask you a question?” Paulo came up from behind him, still unbalanced in his feminine form.

“Remember, there are a lot of girls around. Here my name is Darby, what do you want.”

“Darby,” Paulo corrected himself(herself), “Do you think that you could…”

“ No.”

“What about…’

“No.”

“Maybe…”

“No.”

“Oh, come on, you don’t even know what I was going to say.”

Dominic grabbed Paulo by his neck and carried him into an unnoticed corner of the room.

“I knew exacting want you wanted me to do. Yes I can do them, but I will not.” he hissed.

“Then what would I’ve asked?”

“One, you wanted me to disintegrate some of the girls clothing. Next, you wanted me to put something in the drinks to get them all in a drunk state. Lastly, you wanted to make all of the girls go into heat. You’re a real pervert Paulo. Maybe I should turn you back into a boy and see what tortures the girls of this planet give to a horny stalker.”

Paulo fell into a complete silence at the thought of torture. Dominic then let go of his neck and walked toward the stairs.

“Oh yeah Patricia, don’t play spin the bottle.”


Meanwhile on the second floor…

Mike was looking for some of the girls he knew. He then found Lucy sitting alone while drinking some soda.

“Is this seat taken?” Mike said acting like he never knew her.

“Yeah, it’s where my imaginary friend sits.” Lucy didn’t even look at Mike.

“Well I hope you don’t mind if I sit of it then.” Mike sat down.

Lucy turned to see girl-Mike. She studied him with a curious eye, and then,

“Do I know you?” Lucy asked thinking that she knew this strangely familiar girl.

“No, no, I don’t know you, I just saw that you were lonely.” Mike lied.

“My name is Micaela, what’s yours.”

“Lucy.”

“What’s wrong?”

“Girls are stupid. All they do is talk about hair, fashion, and…”

“Boys?” Mike interrupted.

“Yeah.”

“Are you thinking of any boys?” Mike asked with a small smile.

Lucy paused, looked at Mike, got up, and said,

“Yeah, in fact, I need to find a specific Dark Grey cat.” Lucy started to walk away.

Lucy then turned her head and looked at Mike and smiled,

“Also, Micaela, please tell Sandy I said hi.”

Mike spit out some soda he was drinking as he saw Lucy walk down the stairs.

“I need to find Dominic, our mission is in jeopardy!” Mike said to himself.


Meanwhile…


Dominic found David and Abbey outside at the pool, not swimming, just watching.
Dominic noticed Abbey looking at Daisy, who was just swimming gracefully in the water. David on the other hand was looking at the stars, doing nothing perverted, just looking at the beautiful sky.

“Enjoying the night air you two?”

Abbey looked at Dominic, smiled, and looked back down at Daisy, looking so happy to be with friends. David didn’t reply, just looked at the stars in awe.

“I surprised Danielle(David), you actually have been very good today so far.”

David then turned to Dominic crying.

“What’s wrong?” Dominic asked confused.

“I HAVE TO GO TO THE BATHROOM!!”

Abbey fell out of his chair and looked at David, scared.

Dominic, still calm, asked,

“Drink too much punch?”

“YES!”

“Oh, Fuck.”

I can actually imagine the whole thing in my mind. Specially David’s reaction to the punch.

Chapter 17
Intermission
Slumber Party, Part 4


Mike ran all around the house looking for Dominic until he was questioned,

“What’s wrong, lost in my big house?” it was Tess with Sue and Amaya.

“No, just looking for a friend.”

“Well, we could help you, we have all night.” Sue said kindly.

“No, no, I’ll find him… I mean her.”

Mike started sweating, he could ruin the entire plan. The three girls looked confused at him.

“Do we know you?” Tess asked with concern in her voice.

“Of Course Not!” Mike blurted, “I’ve never met you in my life. I was just invited by a friend.”

“Well, maybe we know your friend.” Sue happily said.

Amaya nodded. Mike felt uneasy, his vision was getting all colorful, he felt like fainting when he saw Dominic with David, walking to the nearest bathroom. He then saw Lucy, walking toward them, totally unaware. Then he saw Paulo walking toward Lucy. How could Mike stop all three into knocking into each other and get away from Tess and Sue at the same time? But he saw Dominic’s ears twitch, like he sensed the danger.

“How about we go to another bathroom.”

“But I have to go real bad!”

“I know, but this ones taken.”

One down, now he had to stop Paulo to getting to Lucy. Mike barged through Tess and Sue and grabbed Paulo’s wrist with one hand and clamped his mouth with the other. Paulo struggled to break free when he lost balance and fell over a girl. With Mike still holding on, they both fell on the ground. Abbey and David both ran over to help them up and McCain lifted Mike off of Paulo, then Paulo yelled,

“JESUS CHRIST MIKE!!”

The entire party just stopped, EVERYTHING. People stopped drinking, or dancing, or swimming. They were all in shock that someone in the party was called ’Mike’, a boy’s name. Then Kizuna bumped into a girl, who was in the shocked state, fell back and ran into the guys. Kizuna knocked all of them off balance and they all were flung into the outdoor pool. Kizuna’s headphones touched the water and she, and the rest of the boys were electrocuted and suck beneath the surface. After a minute, all of them popped there head out of the water. By now all of the girls at the party were there, watching. Then everyone was in complete shock. The electricity had stopped the illusion, and all of the guys in the water came out as boys again. Dominic watched in horror from the side of the pool. The guys looked at the hundreds of guys who stared at them in hatred. Kizuna was then pulled out. Only the boys were left. Paulo backed away from the edge to the other side. Girls surrounded the pool. All smiling at the prey in the pool. Then Tess called out to the rest of the girls,

“Well, it looks like the Grand Finale of the party has just arrived. I guess we should treat them in the proper Girls Only Slumber Party fashion.”

One of the security guards came up to Tess,

“Should we remove them from the area?”

“No, I think the girls want to have a little fun with these cleverly disguised girls.”

All of the girls started jumping in the pool and securing the boys, grabbing arms and legs and taking them out of the pool. They were all struggling to get out. Dominic was now thinking of what to do. Too many girls around to save them. Too many witnesses to use powers. While he was distracted, Lucy came up behind him and said,

“Oh, don’t think that your going to miss out on this party.”

Before Dominic could react, Lucy smashed him in the back of the head with a golf club from the shed. Dominic felt cold, sight blurred, then darkness.

Chapter 17
Intermission
Slumber Party, Part 5


Dominic woke up in a dark room. He was chained to a wall. He was no longer a girl, but he was still in cat form. Around him were the other guys, all unconscious. Some more boys were also their, all of which he didn’t recognize. He saw Mike start to stir.

“Where am I?”

“Don’t know, Lucy knocked me out before I could help you guys, I’m sorry.”

“It’s okay. We couldn’t do anything anyway. What happened though?”

“The electricity fried the disguise, but that’s all I want to say, others are awake here.”

“That’s right *sniff* I was also captured *sob* they saw me crying and offered me happiness *tears*, they lied to me, knocked me out. I could have escaped, but that would make them sad *sniff*, I’m not a mean person, just powerful.”

Dominic looked at the crying wreck. He saw that he wore all blue, and tears stained his face. Then Dominic’s eyes widen when his saw a Chaos symbol on the depressed cat.

“What’s your name?” Dominic eagerly asked.

“I am Sadness. I came here to get away from all the fighting, I thought that I may be happy here, but I can never be happy *sob*, these girls are mean.”

“I see that you are a Chaos servant.”

“Yeah *sniff* what’s it to you?”

“As am I.”

Sadness looked at Dominic and saw his markings. Sadness smiled and said,

“Nice to meet you.” he then went back to crying.

“Sadness, how come no one else is waking up?” Dominic changed the topic.

“They are all drugged. You and me are fine because of our blood being immune to these drugs.”

“What about my friend Mike then, why is he not asleep?”

“Because *sniff*, they are going to choose him next.” Sadness then started crying again.

“Chosen, for what?” Mike said freaked out.

Sadness continued to cry, still not answering the question. A door opened, and Tess and two other girls walked in.

“Well, well, well. Looked at what the cat dragged in.”

“Oh, wow, funny.” Dominic said sarcastically, “what do you plan to do to use know? Torture? Trust me, I been though millions of tortures in my life, I’ll never snap.”

“Of course you won’t, but your just going to watch. You may be resistant, but Mike isn’t.”

“Oh, I get it. But what do you hope may come out of this?”

“Well, maybe a good laugh, or maybe PLEASURE.”

Mike’s jaw dropped. Tess laughed.

“Just kidding, I not evil, but I know after this GAME, one little unhappy girl with a cute pink bow will be happy for the rest of her life.”

“You don’t mean.” Mike said angrily.

“I can already see what the plan is.” Dominic said looking at Mike.

“Then please Dominic, enlighten him.”

“Sorry Mike, I can see they plan on trying to hypnotizing you, and if that doesn’t work, torture.”

Mike looked pale. Sadness then stopped crying and said,

“Please, let them go, they haven’t done anything wrong.”

“Breaking in on a Girls Only slumber party isn’t wrong? Trying to learn our secrets isn’t wrong? They deserve it.”

“Then let Sadness go!” Dominic yelled, “He didn’t do anything, you brought him in for no reason.”

“Good point, guards!”

Then a bunch of girls came in through the door, unlocked Sadness’s chains, and walked him out.

“Thank *sniff* you.”

“Happy?”

“Much so, what do plan on doing to the rest after Mike?”

“Pretty much the same thing. Jasmine gets Paulo. Daisy gets Abbey. Sue gets McCain. And Kizuna gets David.”

“It won’t work.” Dominic said laughing.

“Why not?” Tess said angrily.

“David’s too stupid for hypnotism or torture to work, and Daisy is too nice to torture Abbey.”

“Then David gets locked in a room with Kizuna. All of the girls have agreed to torture, even Daisy. It’s amazing what love makes a woman do.”

“And rest of the captured guys?”

“There are many desperate girls out there, really wanting a man, we could do this til morning.”

“And what about me?”

“Oh, we’ll figure that out very soon.”

Dominic heard footsteps from behind. It was Lucy.

“If you hit me in the head with that freaking golf club again, I’ll…” *DING*

Darkness…

Oh, mob mentality. The only absolute truth.

Strangely, the setting of the next part is in a fighting arena that came out of nowhere.

So mike is halusinating as lusy tries to get the club out of his head by yanking on it?

No, it means that while the hypnotizing and torture is taking place, hundreds of other girls are watching.

It’s amazing what an organized group/organization of females can do to the average male person.

THE HORROR!!

Btw hypnotism only works on those who want to be hypnotized so in Palo’s case he should be out in a second.
You could have mike mentions this while Lusy is there.
He would want to be hypnotized as he does want Lusy.
The fact that they are not together is because of self restraint.

Well, you’ll just have to wait and see the TORTURES that Lucy plans to do to poor Mike.


Hint: They are nothing like the ones in Love Me(Guro).

My point is that they would never get to torture.
Mike would beg her not to do this and then his self-restraint would disappear.

and as for abbey he would probably say
“and what exactly are you going to gain by hypnotising me?
We are already dating and such.”

and Mcain would be like
“but if ou hypnotise me wont that make our whole relationship a sham as I would not truly be feeling these feelings but insted I would be doing as the lady with the shiny whatch says?”

The whole point is that the girls want to prove that they are more dominant and such, remember, it’s an intermission, sort of. Once this is over, everyone will forget in a week.

Also, the others are drugged, they will wake up somewhere random and think,

“What the fuck happened last night?”

“You wanted to go to the party, and a security guard literary threw you out, and you hit a tree and got knocked out.”


The girls though will try to either asked for forgiveness or some strange plot device will come out of nowhere and wipe everyones’ memory.

I see. We are back to the illogical mind state of mobs.
On person yells “we should hypnotise them!”
and everybody yells “Yeah!” without thinking.

@Dotzrus Very good chapters. Now we get to temporarily see Sadness!
I went through some of my personalities today and left some info on them and Sadness in this story in the last Thread for you.

Don’t worry Light, Sadness will make a come back.

Thanks for the info!

Chapter 17
Intermission
Slumber Party, Finale


“Ladies and… Ladies. I am proud to announce that tonight, we will make one lucky girl, if not more, embrace the dream that all girls have. Finding a man.” Tess blasted on the megaphone.

All of the girls in the stadium screamed, shouted, and cheered at the event. Lucy was standing in the ring, focused at what see was going to do. Tess continued,

“First, we have Lucy, age 14, who is about to face the boy that she spent her life with. He who so rudely and selfishly rejected her for a girl in Europe who he hasn’t seen in years. Lucy, out of true love, admitted her feelings to him. He continued to reject her and is now going to pay for it, through love.”

Dominic heard from below and gagged. He then turned to Mike, who looked like a rag doll.

“Women are so emotional. Don’t worry Mike, I’ll get us out of this mess. All of us. Just give me a sec.”

Dominic then mumbled a few words, and his shackles broke. Dominic hopped down from his prison and the alarm went of.

“Mike, how fucking rich is this girl?”

There was banging on the door. Five girls with SWAT gear and Tasers, rushed in. Mike looked back at Dominic, but he disappeared. Then one of the girls grunted and fell to the ground. The other four looked at her when another went down. One more went down and the remaining two ran. Both were stopped by some invisible force holding their tails. Both of their heads were bashed together leaving all five unconscious. Dominic then reappeared over them.

“Who says I’m not afraid to hit a girl.” Dominic boasted.

The alarm was still going a Mike’s prison started to rise. Dominic ran to the cell, but was too late. The cell went into the ceiling and appeared in the stadium. Mike looked in horror at all of the girls watching him, booing and cursing. He then looked at Lucy who was looking at him with emotionless eyes. Then the entire crowd stopped, complete silence. Finally Lucy spoke up,

“I didn’t want this to happen, you were my life, and you betrayed me.”

Then, the cell holding mike went back into the ground, Mike was left on the pillar, still chained. The edges of the ring rose into an inescapable wall. Mike’s chains were unlocked and the pillar suck back into the earth. All that was left was Mike and Lucy, with no escape.

“This is your last chance.”

“To do what, say I love you?” Mike hissed.

“No… TO SUBMIT!!”

“This is crazy Lucy, your not this kind of person.”

“First, we go this easy way.” Lucy quietly said.

Then the walls turned into giant TV screens. They had swirls on them, constantly moving in circles. They were trying to hypnotize him! Lucy put on a pair of protective glasses and slowly walked toward Mike. Mike, trying not to look at the screens crawled away from Lucy. Then a high pitch screech came from the screens, hurting Mike’s ears. Lucy had Mike in a corner. She picked Mike up from the neck and shoved him in the corner. Mike tried to get her off him, but every time he moved his hands away from his ears to stop her, the painful noise stopped him. Lucy was so close to Mike, that even through the noise, he could her whisper,

“Make love to me.”

Mike shivered, the noise messing his ears, the walls messing with his brain, and Lucy, messing with his emotions. Mike was about to snap when he heard someone shout,

“Here I come!” it was Dominic, who on top of one of the hypno-walls.

Dominic had different clothing on, he had a Indy-hat and a whip. He was holding a rope tied to the ceiling and jumped (Cue Indiana Jones Theme Song). Dominic was gaining speed toward Mike and his assaulter. Dominic grabbed Mike and swung away from Lucy. On the second go around, Dominic was about to jump with Mike when the rope snapped, and both of them landed in the ring.

“Damn it! I thought that might work.” he said saddened that his awesome plan didn’t work.

Dominic looked at Mike who was cringing at the hypno-walls and high pitched screech which didn’t bother Dominic. Dominic then took out four silver pellets and threw one at each screen. The pellets exploded and the screens and the loud noise were both stopped. Mike was no longer in pain, but was still very dizzy. Lucy screamed,

“SO CLOSE, SO CLOSE!!”

“Time to end this.” Dominic yelled.

Dominic then pulled out another item, it was a large black orb with a giant question mark on it. He pressed a button on it and threw it at the center of the stadium. Smoke emitted from the orb and the entire stadium was in Chaos(no Elemental pun intended). Then it started calming down. Lucy was about to charge Dominic with her golf club and when she inhaled the smoke.

“What is this?” she said while in a dizzy state.

“It’s a custom device designed to cause everyone here to completely lose their memory of tonight and give them a suggestion to go home. Once under the smoke’s influence, everyone will sleep walk back home and wake up tomorrow morning, without a single memory of this event.”

Mike was covering his mouth, but some smoke went in. He went unconscious but his body got up and started walking on it’s own. The entire stadium was filled with zombie like people, sleep walking back to their homes. The party was over. Dominic grabbed the club from Lucy, who was now in that state, and broke it in halve.

“I fucking hate these things. Now I know how Tiger Woods felt like with his wife knocking him over the head with these things.”

Two minutes later, the stadium was empty. No one other than Dominic would remember the events that had happened. Dominic saw the sun rise, and with his Indy-clothes still on, he walked into the sun-light.

“It belongs in a museum.” Dominic smiled.

Very good just one question. What belongs in a museum? The sunrise?

The museum thing is a Indiana Jones joke.

The sunrise thing is just the opposite of someone walking into the sunset at the end of a movie.

ITS SUPPOSED TO BE FUNNY!!

*gosh*

Sorry for my stupid question.

It’s okay.

Going to try to continue later. Need a break.

Soooooooo…..
Did the dog pee or what?
Are they still in a closet without the gas or without the bility to leave because the room locks from the outside?
That would be cool.
somone suddenly askes in three chapters.
Hey where’s david and kizuna?
and they both were in the closet with no memory of how they got there.
david finaly knows who she is.
everyones all “what is this place? looks like somone broke the TVs”

Dominic - can withstand amost everything, but golf clubs.

It was the suprize and the fact that his hands were disabled

The story started loosing logic once Lucy started hypnotizing/torturing Mike. She loves him, and I don’t think that actually fits with her character… as in… at all. I think she’d actually submit herself to torture rather than doing anything to Mike. Also, the ‘Make love to me’ is just another perfect example of what Lucy would never do. Many other plot holes in several places, as well as a long list of grammar and spelling mistakes, but that’s pretty much not important.

I’m a jerk, no need to clarify that.

opinions are welcome

@Domafari

You just got to hate those damn golf clubs.

That scene really does need to be redone.
I could understand if there was a crowd all acting as one and she was acting kind of bad but then looked at the screen herself but she kept her eyes on mike and had a moment to think when she was separated from the crowd.
Don’t do anything now but once this is finished make a new thread and try to post the who story at once.
btw, chainging your name ever so slightly helps with quickposts

???

one funny thing i found….
Dominic could stand against stuffs , torture , 5 SWATs girl with tazer , A load of stadium crowd… but got pissed by golf club?!?

and one thing i have to keep in my mind….
Dominic is Human-Elemental… not the black cute cat
but i still mistaken…

Dark Grey, but whatever.

Remember his was in cat form. He is not as strong in cat form than in human form.

@Dirt

I will answer your question about what happened to the others soon.

PLEASE HURRY, DOTZ.


…This story is amazing.

Thanks,

I will work on it as soon as possible.

Family Matters are impacting.

Chapter 18
No Longer Intermission
A New Day


Well, these kids are special, I don’t know why, but they just keep me thinking…

…

No, I won’t be here forever, I’ve just taken a side path while still looking for True Hope and True Love…

…

Of course not, you are my true love, I’m just looking for a moral artifact called True Love…

…

Maybe, but first I want this place clean of any enemies before you can come…

…

Okay, I’ll talk to you later…

…

Love you too…

…

Bye.


Dominic turned of the transmitter on his arm. He looked at the caller I.D. and saw Flora’s picture. He sighed and jumped down from his tree. He looked around and saw Daisy running toward him.

“Morning Dominic.”

“Good morning Daisy.”

“Ready for today?”

“I should be asking you that question Daisy.”

“Well, I am a little nervous, but I am still willing to trust you.”

Dominic smiled at the thought. People still could trust him even though he is a all-powerful being that could make a house explode just by spitting at it.

“Do you want to come wake up the others?”

“Sure. You can go find Abbey, Sue, Amaya, and McCain, and I will go find Mike, Paulo, David, Kizuna, and Lucy.”

“Okay, and we’ll meet you back here?”

“Sounds good.”


…Meanwhile…


The sun shined through Lucy’s window into her eyes. She woke up with a groan.

“What happened last night?” she asked herself, “All I can remember is hitting someone over the head with a golf club. It looked like Dominic, but a girl.”

“Maybe it was Flea!” Yashy lashed out.

“Don’t be silly, Mike would have been a mile away if he ever saw Lucy with a golf club.”

“True. Hey mommy, what are you planning to do today? Your calendar has a big circle on today’s square. Are you and Flea planning a date or something.” Yashy nudged.

“Heck No! It’s just… I’m starting Yoga classes today.” she lied.

“Cool, can I come?” Chirpy asked.

“No, sorry, cats and dogs only.”

“Aww Man!”

Lucy tied her bow on and ran down stairs, ate breakfast and opened the door. Dominic was standing right there. His hand was in a fist about to knock the door.

“Hi.” Lucy said nervously.

“Hello. Are you ready?”

“Yeah, where are the others?”

“At the big oak tree. You mind running over there, I all ready got everyone else there, but I need to run a small chore before we begin.”

“Who’s this creep?” Yashy said from below.

“Uh…Uh, this is my Yoga teacher. Sensei Dominic.”

“Nice to meet you, and you are?”

“None of your business.” she mocked back.

“Yashy, show some respect.” Lucy hissed.

“Not until he proves I can trust him…”

Yashy’s jaw dropped when she saw the giant lollipop that Dominic pulled out. He waved it around and Yashy’s head followed it in a trance-like state. Dominic then threw it in Lucy’s house and Yashy chased after it.

“How did you do that?” Lucy said in awe.

“Whiny, bossy, must have been a child. From many experiences with children, I have learned that distracting them with large lollipops usually gets their attention.”

Dominic then walked off and Lucy headed toward the tree. The others were there. They all greeted each other and sat by the tree, waiting for Dominic.

…30 MINUTES LATER…

“Ugh, I am sooooooo bored.” Paulo moaned.

“Do you think he forgot about us?” Tess asked, also bored.

“Maybe, but lets give him another five min…”

They all heard a roar and jumped to their feet. Then Dominic came out of nowhere with a lion tackling him. The lion was clawing and biting at Dominic while he fought the beast bare-handed. Daisy screamed while the rest stood there, helpless. Dominic then got one of his hands free, and punched the lion in the face. The lion flew ten feet backwards and landed on it’s feet. Before pouncing at Dominic again, it looked at the others and charged for them. They all screamed as Dominic held out his hand at the lion and a portal opened up, and the lion, in mid-flight, jumped in. Dominic motioned his hand back, and the portal closed.

“What the devil was that!” Mike yelled.

“It’s been years since I was last in my archives, and I forgot that I had a guard lion. You see, he was only trying to play.” Dominic brushed off his shoulders.

The others were in shock. Before anyone else could say anything, Dominic spoke up again,

“But, I did get what I was looking for.” Dominic held out a small leather pouch.

“What is it?” Sue examined the pouch.

“This, is where you get your Elements.”

To answer the question about what happened in Chapter 17 to the chained up boys,

Once Mike was lifted into the arena, Dominic was left in the prison to think.

First, he unchained everyone and then teleported them outside, and gave them a smaller dose of the suggestion gas. They all then unconsciously walked home and went to bed, without any memory of the night.

Second, Dominic then decided that it would be cool if he saved Mike in a Indiana Jones getup. So he changed his clothes in a second.

Warning: In between the arena scene and the Indiana Jones scene, 20 female guards were knocked unconscious and given suggestion gas to go home.

You know the rest. Please enjoy the following(next to be made) parts of the story.

Hint: IT’S AWESOME!! (According to David)

Awesome chapter.

Which one?

Hahahahaha

Both of them, though the second was a bit more interesting due to the guard lion.

Oh, you mean Curtis.

You have this whole thing planned out don’t you.

So wait, Dominic’s a pedo? I mean, who else carries around giant lollipops and has had “experience” with children?

Just kidding, sorry Dotz. The story is coming along really well.

Yes, I’ve had the story in my mind(Not including the BCB characters) for about 10 years.

Other than Dominic going to BCB world, I have him on dozens, if not hundreds of other adventures. This is the first time it is on paper(computer) though.

Interesting! I’ve been adding to and altering my ultimate character for about two years.

Ultimate huh…

There might have to be an Ultimate Battle between Dominic and him in the story.

*wink, wink* *nudge, nudge*