Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Character profile complete.

Not sure if you noticed, but I put the profile in your last thread.

Very good for a final battle scene.

This is at your post on the other thread. He does need Sanity and Insanity but Insanity’s dead. Unless you plan on bringing the loony back.
So due to the circumstances those four or five CAN fuse together, he would just be weaker since one piece of him is missing.

I haden’t thought about the chained people. I meant kizuna and david spesificaly because i remember you meantioning david and her being in solitary confinmnt or ar least duel confinment. When you mentioned that dominic was retreaving them instead of daisy I imagened him opening a door and david dashing out leaving a sad kizuna because they wouldnt have eather knowen how they got traped in a closet together. You could still have david or kizuna mention it in passing and now david would remember her or you could just say that the girls haden`t goten around to sticking them in a room yet even though I belive you also meantioned earlyer that somone had been taken from the room by the girl’s

Funnily enough, I wouldn’t have thought that David needed hypnotizing to skrew Kizuna.

Kizuna was gassed with the rest of the crowd and David relieved himself when he was in the pool, getting electrocuted. What do you expect?

Any other questions?

I would be more than happy to enlighten anyone about story/content/other.

I don’t have any questions right now. Just waiting for the next part.

same here.

We aren’t going to get a page till roughly 4:00-5:00.

You fixed it up pretty well…

Might keep on reading it…

Actually, I already have…

@Dotzrus Concerning:
Form X

I forgot to add that he has black claws on his hands.

He sounds more More menacing

Concerning Faction His Faction:

He sounds like the perfect candidate to be part of the Ego Faction

Be a good fight for yer boy Dominic huh Dotzrus?

Already have the battle in my head

*smirk*

Sorry for the lack of posts recently, but I plan that during the week, I can write some chapters at school, then post them when I get home. Maybe two or three a day.

Chapter 19
Hold Still, And Pray It Doesn’t Hurt


“You mean our powers are in that little bag?” Mike questioned Dominic.

“Yes. Just do as I say and you’ll be making mountains move and oceans fly.”

The others marveled at the thought of super powers to control the natural Elements.

“Do we like, get costumes or something?” Jasmine thought aloud.

“Well, lets first worry about getting your Elements and not accidentally killing yourself first. Okay.”

“Okay.” they all replied.

“Right. First, gather around the bag. As you will notice, it is empty. But when you put your hand in the bag, You will gain the key to unlocking your Element. To start, Paulo, put your hand in the bag.”

Paulo hesitated but then put his hand in the bag. He twitched like he felt something. He then pulled out a small red gem.

“Good, good. Now rest do the same. One at a time.”

They each did so and each got different colored gems. Each gem dazzled and sparkled in the sunlight.

“Okay, now that you have your keys, I want you to follow my directions SLOWLY.”

“Why?” Abbey looked at Dominic in dismay.

“This process can be VERY painful and even cause death if done wrong.”

“I didn’t know things like this could be so dangerous.” Daisy gasped.

“This isn’t even the beginning. Now to begin, look at your friends, now back to me, now back to your friends, now and back to me. As you can see, they aren’t me, but they could be powerful like me if they use the Swagger Gems from the Old Spice Galaxy. (No longer copying Old Spice) First you must take your gem and place it over your soul.”

Some group then started to put the gem over their hearts, and others over their forehead.

“No, no, no. Your soul is located in the pit of your throat, here.” Dominic pointed at his throat. “It is the source of pure energy and spirit in all living things. What we will do is empower that energy with the Elements.”

They all then took their gems and placed them over their throats.

“Now concentrate on your Element. The Element will speak to you, through your soul. You will feel your Element even before you know what it is. Now, do you all feel something.”

They all nodded, eyes closed, focused on the energy empowering them.

“Now for the painful part. Slowly push your gem into your throat. It will slowly disintegrate into pure energy that will be sucked into your soul. It will slightly hurt, but if you stop pushing it in, that’s when it becomes fatal. Okay, now.”

They all started to push the gems into their throats. The gems started to glow and sink into their necks. They all cringed as the pain escalated. But they all continued to push through the pain. Then the gems were gone. Into their bodies and into their souls.

“I can’t breathe.” Abbey gasped.

“It’s so hot.” Paulo sweated.

“It’s so cold.” Lucy shivered.

The others were having similar pains. Dominic then put his hand out and the pain stopped.

“Congrats. You have Elements. Now I will explain which you have.
Abbey has the Element of Air, Wind, and Storms.
Paulo has the Element of Fire, Inferno, and Maelstroms.
Lucy has the Element of Ice, Blizzards(Not the DQ kind), and Frost.
Mike has the Element of Water, Oceans, and mostly anything to do with H2O.
David has the Element of Earth, Stone, and Rock.
Tess has the Element of Steel, Metal, and Ore.
Jasmine has the Element of Poison, Acid, and Toxins.
Daisy has the Element of Light, Sun, and Purity.
McCain has the Element of Aether, Mental-Thought, and Psychic.
Kizuna has the Element of Electricity, Shock Waves, and Lightning.
And Amaya has the Element of Starlight, Energy, and Laser.
Once again congratulations, we may now begin training. But we can not do it here. We must move to a safe work zone.”

Then Dominic motioned his hand as everyone was teleported to a flat, rocky surface. The air was thin and the temperature was colder.

“Where are we.” Tess shivered.

“Welcome to the Tibetan Plateau!” Dominic yelled. “This is were we train! Right now you notice that you feel no different than before you absorbed the gems. That is because I am mentally holding your powers offline. I will continue to do this until you control your Elements without help, or destroying everything you touch.”

Dominic then slapped his hands together and started to rub them as he smiled,

“Now, let’s begin.”

You don’t like Jasmine do you.

She should be dieing slowly already from the small dosage of poison element. She may need to work fast.
and why not the DQ kind?
that would kick ass.

UPDATE
Dark can be slightly sarcastic.
“Great juust great. Now we gotta deal with this!”

I’m not being sarcastic.
It should be in the story that she needs to hurry up and learn to cure herself before drifting away from that small sample that she got.

Jasmine now has the poison Element. It cannot kill her. But, the worst it can do is get her really sick.

I’m saying my character Dark can be slightly sarcastic. The words in between the “” was a example.

Dark takes great enjoyment from mind games. As in playing with someone’s mind.

No thats mcains job

Bad news. I wrote two entire chapters at school but the word document is different then the one at home. Sooo, in other words, two chapters were completely removed and need rewritten. Sorry for the inconvenience.

I just made a big hole in the story. I forgot to put in the,

“*blank* has the Element of *Blank*, etc., etc.

Sue has the the Element of Plants, Grass, and Still Nature.

Sorry again for the gap. I hope it doesn’t ruin the story.

Thanks for your patience.

I will wait. By the way! Dark and Anger left my being last night and Light chased after them! Insanity is helping keep me together!

I’m now back in one piece.

Woot for youuut

More of them will come soon.

I have just come up with an update for the Ego faction. I can only give you this definition of what the factions are like.

“The factions are like a family. Good is the daughter and Evil the son. The siblings always pester and fight with one another. That is when the parents intervene. Unity is the mother and Chaos the father. The mother wants the children to succeed and do whatever it takes to do so, while saying it in a calm, loving voice. The father wants the best for both. He always helps the losing of the two, but does it in a harsh but reassuringly tone. Unfortunately, the father and the mother always fight among themselves, leading to a divided family. This is the way the factions are.”

“But then what about The Ego Faction, are they the Grandparents or something?”

“No. Ego main role is the assimilate all into them or “silence” them. They do it through all strategies; diplomacy, war, peace, and violence.”

“They what it they be? Chaos is the father and Unity the mother. Good the daughter and Evil the son. What is Ego?”

“Ego, my friend…

Is The Gun.”

Dominic’s Log #8863

Entry Will Be Terminated In 3…2…1…0.

A voice came from the darkness in the room.

“Some things are better left unheard.”

I see… You’re saying that the faction Ego does whatever it takes to complete their goals. Be it calmly or brutally.

Is is agustus?

no, he finds peoples weakness and hits them there.

…wait.

@Dirt

You bring up an excellent point! But no, his is not Ego, but he will play a major role soon. Augustus has different goals in mind.

It has been a hassle to even get to the computer. I am afraid that true story updates will take place during the weekends. I will try for at least 2-4 Chapters a week at the least. Glad to have patient folk like you around.

…….. Can Sanity respect Dominic? Like Dominic has a higher rank, yet they are also friends?

I guess…

Dominic, outside BCB World, is mostly a loner. He travels around for self-purpose. His love and friendship only extends so far. You might not have seen yet, but Dominic has his share in bloodshed. He has been ruthless and killed thousands out of hate and need for revenge. He conflicts with his past and his future. Friends become weaknesses, but then so does family. Every time he finds room in his heart for love or friendship, He’s taking a risk that would threaten many lives…

As he will learn from befriending the BCB crew. They have stepped into a world that they cannot comprehend yet. They don’t know who Dominic really is, or what he has done, or what he plans to do.

That shouldn’t be a problem. Sanity can hold his own in a fight, and if anyone decided to attach Dominic as long as he was nearby Sanity would aid him. He too has seen death. The death of friends… and family.

Sanity is no stranger to bloodshed. He has killed many, both for his duty as a warrior of the Chaos faction and for revenge.

The point is that Dominic may not like having the company, but he doesn’t just reject the idea have another person along for the ride.He’s a risk taker.

Okay then.

TRIVIA QUESTION!!

What is the one Main Element that has not been given to any of the BCB crew?

The Element of Darkness?

The element of cupcakes! How could you forget?

SPRINKLES!!

jk

The element of Absence? Also referred to as Nothingness? Also referred to as the power of Blank?

The power over the absence of all elements is a seriously powerful thing which can completely annihilate literally, anything. And no, I’m not just saying that it’s the power over Space. It’s just really, really, really close.

Okay,

@Light, you are correct!

@Dr. Klaus, Yeaaaaah, No!

@Baeleox, That would be the Element of The Void, you just have a different name for it. Mostly the Element of Void can create Black Holes and is usually used for implosions.