Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Greetings, oh humble members of the BCB forums. I present to you the opening to a large project I have planned: A story that will span the characters’ senior year from September to July. I will try to update it twice a week: Once Wednesday and once Saturday. For now, we have the opening. Enjoy.

Senior Year, P1

Each month will be divided into several chapters, probably about five or six chronicling the events before their graduation.

Not bad. Looks like your actually attempting to flesh out the world, and not rush through the story.

Too early to really judge how well it will be, but an interesting premise to work with. I’m curious to see if you’ll be able to keep up with your schedule, but otherwise I’ll be making sure to check out the next installment.

^ Im with the pants….

This story has a lot of potential and you will no doubt reach that potential. I look forward to every update. Also PauloxJasmine is awesome.

Excuse me! I think you have forgotten who wears the pants in this relationship!
That would be me!
I wear the pants!
Anyway. I agree with my husband completely.

Can’t wait for more

If this actually isn’t just a MikexLucy ship in disguise, you deserve hugs Susan. Hopefully you actually finish this one.

*imagines Susan gagging as she writes of MikexLucy being over*

Dammit Paulo, you and your bragging. Also, David needs to be more careful. He was shooting those guns awfully close to the president.

Lol autistic Lucy is upset by smiling

Looks to be another keeper, Susan

I like this story slot. The writing style is pretty good and I’m excoted for the next chapter

@ Mrspants I mean no offence mrs. I was just sayin I agreed with him.

The second chapter is up. I’ve changed the release schedule to coincide with BCB’s because it’s even and easier to handle.

Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.

I’m actually enjoying it.
Keep at it. =D

I shall lookforward to this along with all the other MWF webcomic updates, great story so far

Paulo you dick

I love how David can be so utterly oblivious and Paulo so insensitive. You captured that brilliantly. Can’t wait for the next update!

yay regulith

^^^^^^^
WIN

Tis full of awesome

It has a gravitational pull of awesome.

boop update

I am now a fan of this.

I got teary eyed at the end of chapter 3, i can’t beleve lily and yashy died…….

This last chapter was really good

It’s all coming together a la SusanFantasy

Fan stories just looove killing characters! XD

I’m really curious as to where will this story go!

Nice, Susan you stories are just awsome.

susan, you are the first person i know of to use the noun “vanity”… multiple times… in the same story…

the story is looking good like always.

lol

Did someone say “illustrations”.

I’m gonna wait for my illustrator to catch up before I update anymore.

Nice outfit. Does it come in hetero?

Jerk you’re just jealous of Abbey’s delicious wardrobe.

boop David and his sammiches

Regulith needs to work on his muscle structures. David doesn’t look any beefier than anyone else.

trololol?

.esle enoyna naht reifeeb yna kool t’nseod divaD .serutcurts elcsum sih no krow ot sdeen htilugeR

Drugs

yesh.

SMASH

:o Susan how could you

The dangers of driving part 1

Don’t forget about this one, it’s actually turning out much better than the others.

Oh also would a woman driver joke be inapropriate?

Expect a new chapter tomorrow!

Chapter 4 is up, landlubbers.

Daaamn, Poor Abbey!
That wasn’t fair.

Yay for David

Bahahahaha! Ohhhhh David David David…

haha

Do it Abbey…poison the water supply then we will see who has the last laugh

Another good one, I’ll be sure to nitpick it later.