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Comment ID #126896

Something Different

Abbey waited in the lobby of the psychiatrists ofice, his eyes darting to the clock repeatedly he thought to himself.
“where could Daisy be?”
Suddenly the front door opened and the tall tabby cat that was his psychiatrist emerged.
“So sorry Abbey but my wife’s giving birth any minute, could you come back another day?”
He said with a smile.
“oh, thats fine.”
Abbey picked up his bag, got up and walked out, the summer rain drizzled down hypnotically, with ears pointed down he walked down the road to his house, the rain began to pouring harder and harder with each step untill his fur was soaked and he shivered uncontrolably, he decided to stop at Daisy’s house and stay there untill the rain subsided.
he approached the door that seemed to radiate warmth, warmth he knew would be waiting for him, Abbey knocked, a moment later daisy’s father opened the door, his narrow gaze made him uncomfortable but that feeling disipated as Daisy’s dad smiled.
“Daisy’s upstairs”
“Thanks sir”
“Please, call me John”
Abbey walked up the steps, the feeling in his arms and legs returning in the well warmed house, he dropped his bag approached the door to daisy’s room but as he reached for the doorknob he heard something.
“You sure Abbey won’t find out or is he still at the shrink?”
“No he’s at the psychiatrist’s”
Abbey peeked through the old lock hole into Daisy’s room
There, leaning against the wall with one hand on daisy’s shoulder and one on her face, stood Augustus, his face leaning closer and closer to hers.
Abbey Stepped back, his world went quiet, Abbey walked back downstairs, leaving his bag and his hopes and dreams.
Abbey walked down the street his rage flaring and his face burning, the rain completely unnoticed and his path undecided.
Abbey eventually reached a mall, the neon lights illuminating a park bench on which he sat down.
He sighed, running his hands through his hair.
“Oww Shit!”
He shouted, after forgetting to retract his Nails and having them scrape along his scalp.
He stared stared at his hand which was now stained red.
Slowly a smooth slender hand moved in sight holding a clean, white hankerchief.
Abbey looked up, his eyes tracking up the arm to the smiling face of a red tabby with a
red bow around her soft, well shaped neck.
“Thank you?”
Abbey said, taking the rag.
She sat next him, still smiling.
“what’s your name?”
Abbey asked cautiously
“Amaya”

Magnus Darkly November 16, 2010, 1:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #126974

Fuck, you beat me to it :(

Sammy November 16, 2010, 5:17 PM EST.

Comment ID #127656

you can still post it i’m sure it’s better than mine

Magnus Darkly November 17, 2010, 12:06 PM EST.

Comment ID #128805

Why yes i am posting this comment so it’ll be t the top of the list
thanx for noticng

Magnus Darkly November 18, 2010, 8:04 AM EST.

Comment ID #128994

Is there more to the story? It’s interesting so far.

jmiles November 18, 2010, 12:48 PM EST.

Comment ID #128999

yes i am working on continuing it as a NSFW fanfic

My first attempt at literotica…..should be fun

Magnus Darkly November 18, 2010, 1:31 PM EST.

Comment ID #129347

Hey! don’t give Taeshi ideas! AbbeyxDaisy must LIIIVEEEE!

Other than that, though, this is really well written!

Quaddy November 19, 2010, 3:10 AM EST.

Comment ID #129499

@Qauddy
sweet, and Taeshii, dont you dare bring augustus into the story again hes evil and i hate his face

Magnus Darkly November 19, 2010, 6:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #129928

keepin this thread alive

Magnus Darkly November 20, 2010, 6:52 AM EST.

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