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Comment ID #25824

It’s the meowmeow of DOOOOOM D:

Pixelnator May 23, 2010, 1:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #25835

My go i dont know why , but these lyrics kept popping into my head last night, a mad creative rush

warning explicit lyrics……i warned you

Dance you catacylismic mother fuckas !!

Ohhh yeah Davids here
Im the kennel master! lyrical distaster
Mess with me youll get beat faster!
The bad ass dog, yteah im the O.G.
Read the tags! Imma pound pussy!

Standin tall, with my man Paulo!
Yeah
A hell of a guy but a bit of a ho!
Hey!
Hangin with your moms at a Tijuana donkey show!

It’s Paulo here, im a cat not a mouse
An 9 inch cock all rockin the house!
A wall of a man, you know that i am
Packin it more tightly than a canned ham!

Sometimes it’s Dave E!
The E stands for enormous!
If you check out my package
You’d think it was a forrest!

Ow yeah climb his tree Ladies!
Its Blur all up in your shit!
The lighting fast bird who just wont quit!
Up, up, down, down, left, right, left, right, B, A, right!
Pack in some feather to make sure its tight!
Fiddle dee dee! fiddle dee day!
My ow my what a wonderful lay!

Damn Blur! Its David again with Paulo bitches!
Pumping out the ryhmes like lyrical witches!
Weve got more trunk then the zoo’s elephunt!
Hell yeah! we be poundin smooth the rough cunts!

We’ve had em all!
Every girl we see!
Three times last week we triple teamed Lucy!
Sue! yeah we had her too!
After three bacardi’s she will do you too!
Tess! Rachel! hell
No way we could fail!
And Lilly! ow so nice!
Hell last week David fisted MIke twice!

ow yeah Bittersweet gangsta’s Bitches
David knows man, same with Paulo, and the little bird too

Peace

Goldwulf Q. Triplesexy May 23, 2010, 3:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #25836

Lol Kara makes me want to try to convert that song to piano from.

But its quiet as F. man!

KuroKan May 23, 2010, 3:27 PM EST.

Comment ID #26070

@ KuroKan
Yeah- i had to record it from my headphones. Wouldn’t work any other way. Will try to get a better version out there at some point.

EDIT: But by all means, if you think you can make a good piano version, please do ^_^. I’d love to hear it!!!

kara-yasuragi May 24, 2010, 1:05 AM EST.

Comment ID #26126

I did a video of me singing Maverick’s theme. I apologize ahead of time if it’s crap and if I screwed up the words and/or melody. Argh. My voice is crap today.

Gabriel Kaxbe May 24, 2010, 2:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #26481

Here’s my version singing Maverik’s theme-…. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPHltesZ2UU

Kaxbe, you inspired me to also sing it ^_^

kara-yasuragi May 24, 2010, 12:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #26491

I would like an mp3 of the song. It would make it easier for me.

KuroKan May 24, 2010, 1:08 PM EST.

Comment ID #26507

@ KuroKan
Not sure how to do that- will figure out something.

kara-yasuragi May 24, 2010, 2:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #26510

This is just. This is.

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SuitCase May 24, 2010, 2:11 PM EST.

Comment ID #26515

@Kara
Send me the mario paint file threw email (mrr256@yahoo.com) and ill do the rest. I’ll even send you the file I make so you have a louder version for your youtube video :)

KuroKan May 24, 2010, 2:40 PM EST.

Comment ID #26518

This is great~! Just a few more singing people and we can do the theme~!

Gabriel Kaxbe May 24, 2010, 2:54 PM EST.

Comment ID #26523

lol

idiot May 24, 2010, 3:00 PM EST.

Comment ID #26526

Lol, next thing you know, we’ll be doing a fan dub of the comic strips! We might as well be holding auditions for voice actors now. :P

Spradic Zoom May 24, 2010, 3:22 PM EST.

Comment ID #26528

@KuroKan
Okay, i sent you the prefs for the song- had to split it into two songs.. if you have mario paint i figure you can compose it together yourself.

Hope that works >

kara-yasuragi May 24, 2010, 3:23 PM EST.

Comment ID #26549

Thanks Kara. Though now I found myself sidetracked into making a new song xD Thinking about dedicating it to BCB. It will be obvious if I do finish ;D

KuroKan May 24, 2010, 5:09 PM EST.

Comment ID #26720

Okay, okay let me give this a shot. A Mike or Lucy song if you will.

I wanna blow my brains across the floor
I’m bout to walk out that front door.
I think I’m going insane,
I’m tired of playing your games.
And I don’t wanna deal with it,
Any more!

I’m tired of being your friend
I won’t do this again.
I’m tired of playing tug-of-war
with your affectionary scorn.

I’m looking for a way out but I keep ending up right back here
And this what I fear most about you, my dear.

I don’t wanna always live this way.
But you make it harder everyday.
To stay by your side, all through the night.
But maybe I keep praying that it will be alright.

But I’ll stay right here, hiding the fear!
That I might I love you, dear!

I wanna blow my brains across the floor
I’m bout to walk out that front door.
I think I’m going insane,
I’m tired of playing your games.
And I don’t wanna deal with it,
Any more!

I’m tired of being your friend
I won’t do this again.
I’m tired of playing tug-of-war
with your affectionary scorn.

I’m looking for a way out but I keep ending up right back here
And what I fear most about you, dear.

Is that you will turn away from me.
That you will decide not to stay.
That you won’t love me back, my dear.
And I can’t face these fears….
I won’t face these fears.

But always know I love you dear….

Leaving a comment May 25, 2010, 12:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #26734

Wow… That’s REALY dark ^^;

Maverik May 25, 2010, 12:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #26763

It’s dark with a hint of hope. In other words, it’s bittersweet.
















And the inspiration came from a dishwasher so that’s just funny by it’s self.

Leaving a comment May 25, 2010, 2:18 AM EST.

Comment ID #27805

Y’know, I feel that “Nature Boy” would be an appropriate ending theme.

Gabriel Kaxbe May 26, 2010, 3:04 PM EST.

Comment ID #29780

So far I think Maverik’s is the best, but I’ve been thinking up my own song, just for giggles. The problem is, I can’t help but make my music before writing any lyrics, as I feel the music needs to fit more, so right now I can’t post anything. Maybe I’ll get an add-on for piano on my Linux and record the tune, but otherwise, I’ll eventually write planned lyrics.

So yeah, just a heads up from me.

Spradic Zoom May 28, 2010, 3:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #29794

A song for Lucy, relevant as of “Cracks in the Ice” page 3:



I keep your picture in my dresser drawer
I look at you, feel like a whore
With you, I know there’s no place for me
I know you and I could just never be
But there’s other boys, I don’t know what to do
Do I go with my gut or wait for you?

I wish you’d melt with the warming snow
I wish you’d take me and not let go
I wish I’d never let these feeling show
What should I do? Please let me know…

Damn! I’d quit you if I could
What would you do if you understood?
What’s she got that I can’t see?
A million miles and a pedigree?
You know what I feel, there’s nothing to do
But go with with my gut or wait for you.

I wish you’d melt with the warming snow
I wish you’d take me and not let go
Let me freeze, let the cold winds blow
How the Hell do I let these feelings go?

Beef Jerky Jerkity (Jerk) May 28, 2010, 4:06 AM EST.

Comment ID #30156

Man, I love having no life. And by that, I mean I bothered making a song in my head, and while I can’t play it, mostly because I don’t have the software and partly because I’m no musician and it would suck, I will bother posting my lyrics. And yes, these lyrics are I guess what you’d call a prototype, so please give me constructive criticism if something just sounds off in it or the idea doesn’t strike you. The song’s not tied to any character - it’s just a general theme song for the comic.

Alright, here we go!

Intro

When I close my eyes,
I only think of you.
The chat we had last night,
Where you broke my heart in two.
You think that I’d give up
And say that I can’t win,
But after this I think and feel
The best I’ve ever been.

Bridge

Through the trials we face each day,
We all grow stronger along the way,
Filling us with bittersweet memories.
Sounds good to me!

Chorus

What is this taste, I can’t remember…
It burns into my soul.
A bitter tang, a sweet surrender;
I’m taking it by the bowl.
I feel a need to stand and lead.
There’s nothing that we can’t achieve
In this world that we all call…
Our bittersweet candy bowl!

End

I think it runs about a minute or so in my head, which I think is pretty good for a short theme song. Anyways, that’s all for now, for I love walls of text. :P

Spradic Zoom May 28, 2010, 3:15 PM EST.

Comment ID #30171

Hmmm… I think I’ll write an ending theme… Something nice and slow and sweet… Something that can be played on piano…. Something that can get away with being in free-verse…. Something that can be sung by an Asian girl with a sweet voice and is trying to get into mainstream music but is forever stuck doing ending themes for television shows… Something that could work for the main theme of the BCB dating sim game…

Here I go:

(female lead)
Please stay for a bit
because I want you here with me
Please, stay by my side
My friend, my friend
Warm and cozy is my soul and I can fly free

Where did you go?
You’re so far away
But now you’re here

and you said

“I won’t go, but please understand
I can’t stay forever”,
you held out your hand and
smiled at me
bring me back to the sunlight!

(male lead)
Please stay for a bit
because I want you here with me
Please, stay by my side
My friend, my friend
Warm and cozy is my soul and I can fly free

I’m sorry, I have to go
see you some other day,
I cannot stay

And you said

“Please don’t say that I
need someone to be here with me”
You started to cry, I wiped your tears dry
and said, “My friend, my friend
There are others here with you
Just look ahead, they’ll lead you
to the sunlight”

Gabriel Kaxbe May 28, 2010, 4:00 PM EST.

Comment ID #31340

Bumped because I’m a jerk and want people to comment on my lyrics. ^_^’

Also that is some fluffy music there Kaxbe, but it fits with that Asian voice dating sim theme. :P

Spradic Zoom May 30, 2010, 3:43 AM EST.

Comment ID #31343

Zoom, careful what you wish for… Jerky is prowling around here somewhere…

Leaving a comment May 30, 2010, 3:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #42473

A star so bright,
teeth so white,
be with her I might,
lost her that’s right.
So why do I feel like I have to embrace it,
let’s face it happiness we chased it.
She ripped my heart out like an iso,
I never understood we never used to fight so.
Maybe I wasn’t made for this,
enough on my plate but I had to grab a second dish,
if i had one wish I would make it all change,
obtain the unreachable and put it in range.
I fought for it all to go in vain,
you did the damage,
I recovered and could manage,
and I rose, a phoenix from the ashes.
But we burned out a candle with no matches,
we never needed drake to be forever,
I just needed you and I to be together.


Why would you walk away?
after all the things we went through,
I just wanted to be with you. (x2)

Why would you walk away?
you told me you was here to stay,
then you walked away. (x2)


Words Spoken,
heart broken,
livin’ in this lonely place with no emotion,
I need to see the light and thats you.
But your feelings changed and that’s cool,
happiness is what I wanted for you,
love the fact you always stay true.
Brushing on the past,
wishin’ s**t could’ve last,
but we were movin’ to fast.
I see this broken glass and thats us,
what could we do with no trust,
I tried everything that i could do,
but I never thought there would never be a me and you,
never thought their would never be a me and you.
I had the key and I lost it when I was confused,
we were one entity,
you were meant for me,
can you see,
we were 80 proof like hennesy.
My punch drunk love,
my angel from above,
I lost the tip of you hand,
and here is where we stand.

Please dont,
walk away.(x3)
Please dont, (x2)
walk away.


Why would you walk away?
After all the things we went through,
I just wanted to be with you. (x2)

Why would you walk away?
You told me you was here to stay,
then you walked away. (x2)


I fought to be free,
I fought for us to be we,
I fought for thee,
we just could make it.
Still my love I just can’t fake it,
race in life we just can’t pace it,
time waits for no man,
look here I stand,
your supply and demand,
can I ask one question,
do you still feel that love and affection?
I’m one of many make your selection,
I’m only half of perfection,
you the other half,
let’s follow this path.
You doubt it,
confused what about it,
I thought you’d agree,
why so many pieces for me,
to pick up,
we did too much,
but it still ain’t enough.
This is gonna be tough,
say whatcha say,
nothings ever promised tomorrow or today.
So why did you walk away?

Jake June 11, 2010, 4:58 AM EST.

Comment ID #42842

No one liked it…?
*sigh~*

Jake June 12, 2010, 2:11 AM EST.

Comment ID #42859

0,0 On the contrary, that’s actually really good! I had not seen it ‘till just now is my reason for not commenting.

MiwAuturu (Wii) June 12, 2010, 3:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #42871

Haha guys…i sang a version of Spradic Zoom’s Lyrics (the so called Prototype) And i don’t know why…haha just because i was bored? I made a comment for kaxbe..dude i was joking haha seriusly.

Download now or will die!

Leave a comment! I sing so bad T-T

JC "Frustrated Writer" June 12, 2010, 5:14 AM EST.

Comment ID #42954

Damn, Jake. Incredible.

BCB. The Rock Opera.

Tickets on sale now.

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #43185

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It’s crossed over to other threads mwahaha.

Hannibal June 13, 2010, 5:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #43446

^_^

Jake June 13, 2010, 10:48 PM EST.

Comment ID #45073

JC, my lyrics have been revised since I wrote them. I’ll probably post the new ones with a rough sketch of how the melody goes in my head. If I find a mic, I might even sing it myself. Otherwise, you’re rendition is not that different from mine which is pretty cool, and thanks for trying them out.

Spradic Zoom June 16, 2010, 3:54 PM EST.

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