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Comment ID #34626

I wonder if the radio in the control room still works. It’s hooked up to the emergency grid, maybe we could call the for help. *He looks at Stark* What do you think?

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:19 AM EST.

Comment ID #34629


*waves the flash light to the room*
*the Generator room is full of machines and cranks, but the main motor seems heavily damaged*
*no one was to be found inside*
…all clear, lemme see the extent of the damage.

August McIntyre June 2, 2010, 2:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #34630

(I know that, but it’s still interesting. Tell the story as we had towards the radio, we need some character development.)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #34633

*Angrily yelling, to Diane:* We broke up!! It’s really not a big deal except I still kinda like her, and I’m afraid she might be made into a target! I didn’t want to discuss it in case the killer was eavesdropping!! There! You happy?!

*Starts to sob*

(I was gonna post this anyways, but you ninja’d me!)

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:21 AM EST.

Comment ID #34636

Aw, you poor dear! And it’s so sweet of you to yell that when she is laying right over there. (points)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #34637

*He mutters to himself* The one other man with a gun here, and he’s nothing but a sissy. *He looks to the two* I guess we can forget about the radio seeing how Stark is having himself a breakdown, and I’m the only other one with a gun to protect the sleeping passengers!

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #34638

(I thought everyone else was asleep?! It was whisper-yelling)

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #34639

*notices a movement outside*

“hey!”

*but its too late,the figure already dissapeared by the time i had noticed it*

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #34640

Ah well, how about we go try that radio then? (Stands up suddenly)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #34641

I’m no sissy, I just didn’t want to talk about it! Seeing as the killer could be around us right now!

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #34642

No, we’d better not. I don’t trust Stark to guard everyone, we can wait until the repair team gets back. Then we’ll sort out the radio.

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #34643

*What is it Zacharias? You see someone?

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:24 AM EST.

Comment ID #34644

“I-it’s gone now…”

*looks around,bewildered*

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:25 AM EST.

Comment ID #34645

(Rolls eyes and takes gun from Paul) You guys go check and I’ll stay here then. Just be careful.

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:25 AM EST.

Comment ID #34646

(@ Diane: Now look what you did; you ruined my image ^_^)

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:25 AM EST.

Comment ID #34647

(I stole your manhood. Tee hee!)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:26 AM EST.

Comment ID #34649

*Waits till they leave* Uh… can I have the gun back now?

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:26 AM EST.

Comment ID #34650

*moves to assess the damage*
Hm… the moter is worn, but there are is a single dent to the side.
*looks to the side at some nearby cables, ripped to shreads*
And the outer metal was shaved off, causing scraps to hit some nearby cables…
*angles the flashlight on a desk*
I’ll see what I can fix…

August McIntyre June 2, 2010, 2:27 AM EST.

Comment ID #34651

If you saw someone, gone or not then we’re being watched, keep your gun ready, I’ll do a double check of the room to make sure no one’s inside and I’ll come watch the door with you.
*Goes to do just that*

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:27 AM EST.

Comment ID #34653

*He looks at Diane, then at Paul* You better be damn sure you can shoot. I don’t like breaking my own groups of three rule by setting off with only Mr.Stark here. *He gets up from the chair* You’ll be the only person here awake Diane, it’s all on you to protect them if we go.

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:28 AM EST.

Comment ID #34654

*keeps gun at the ready*

“alright.”

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:28 AM EST.

Comment ID #34655

I’m still nervous about that other note upstairs. I think it might designate a potential target.

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:28 AM EST.

Comment ID #34656

(Salutes) Don’t worry about me, I’ve got this. (Waits for them to leave) I hope…

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:29 AM EST.

Comment ID #34658

*some clanks are heard from the bag as August works on the broken mechanisms*
*an occasional “alright” or “damn” could be heard*

August McIntyre June 2, 2010, 2:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #34659

That’s why I was afraid about my own note. It scares me to think Rachelle may be the next target.

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #34662

@ Zach: Alright I’m certain the room is clear, we can check the door together to be sure no one gets in.

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #34663

*Begins to leave then takes a last look back* Watch these doors. If you see anything slinking in the shadows you yell and scream. It’s all on you to protect them, and yourself. *He walks into the dark corridors* Come On Mr.Stark!!

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #34664

“alright..”

*walks back up to the door*

*looks around very cautiously*

“looks clear..”

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:32 AM EST.

Comment ID #34665

(Looks around room and sighs) Why did I volunteer for this again?

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:32 AM EST.

Comment ID #34666

Alright. *follows Roger*

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:32 AM EST.

Comment ID #34667

*Shines his lights into every cabin they pass* So Mr.Stark, just you and me. Diane has your gun, do you have a knife?

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:34 AM EST.

Comment ID #34668

*after several more minutes August finally sits up*
*sigh* alright, I’ve done what I can.
It might not give off as much electricity, but it’ll get us to shore at least.
Lemme do some last minute checks… *August reaches in to look at the gears*

August McIntyre June 2, 2010, 2:34 AM EST.

Comment ID #34669

No I do not, which is why I’d like my gun back. Come on, I gave up my Perazzi for that!

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:36 AM EST.

Comment ID #34670

God damn sissy idiot, you came without a weapon? *He sighs and hands Paul one of his pistols* Take this, and cover the back.

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:37 AM EST.

Comment ID #34671

*takes a small step outside,making sure to be careful of traps*

this is getting quite annoying,how can we keep losing that damn axe!?

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #34672

I had my shotgun, but that was it. Like you said, it’s not often you need a weapon on a vacation.

Oh, wait. *activates super metal armor* Does this count?
(Ignore that, sorry, couldn’t resist! xD)

Paul Stark June 2, 2010, 2:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #34673

*Catches a quick shadow in the corner of his eye, quickly flashes light at it and prepares to fire, but sees nothing there*
Jesus, this stress must be getting to me

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #34674

(The ax is in the commans room)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #34675

So Mr.Stark, which cabin was your ever-so-important note in? If it’s along here, we can take a quick look for it.

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #34676

(Still “sketching”, but really taking note.) To Diane.) We’re less likely to get attacked if we stay in larger groups…(Thinks: unless the killer is in the same room of course, or friendly fire, which seems more than likely due to so many trigger happy guests jumping at their own shadows.)

Monseigneur Michelle June 2, 2010, 2:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #34677

(The voice of God said it dissapeared earlier, again)

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #34678

(obviously not,dont you remember sandrine saying she left it on a stand or whatever but when she looked for it,it was gone)

(@diane)

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #34679

(Jumps at Michelle’s voice) Are you still awake?! If you were awake why didn’t you say anything, they didn’t have to go in a pair if you had spoken up!

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #34680

*suddenly the motor starts working*
*August’s sleeve gets caught in one of the gears and slowly pulls him in*
Shit… Hey guys?
*August pulls back as the motor slows and lets out a high-pitched sound*

August McIntyre June 2, 2010, 2:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #34681

No Alex! You know there’s something there, just go check!!
(lol, my thoughts exactly around this point in stories! (Icaras/Paul))

Anonymous Reader June 2, 2010, 2:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #34682

(I might have been gone. No I don’t)

Lady Diane June 2, 2010, 2:41 AM EST.

Comment ID #34683

Shit!
*Drops gun and runs to pull him out*
(@ anon: with the voice of god gone no one will die, but that doesn’t mean we can’t maim our characters as August seems to be attempting)

Alexander Pjotr Makretz June 2, 2010, 2:42 AM EST.

Comment ID #34684

*Stumbles and whips his pistol around all the cabin doorways around them* What the hell was that?

Roger Rahab June 2, 2010, 2:42 AM EST.

Comment ID #34685

*hears the noise*

“huh?”

“oh crap..”

*runs over to pull him out*

Zacharias Thompson June 2, 2010, 2:43 AM EST.

Comment ID #34686

What?(also, is Sandrine and Sue still in the commons then?) (Hears noise, looks at the others) We shouldn’t go dashing off, that’s what the killer wants…..

Monseigneur Michelle June 2, 2010, 2:43 AM EST.

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