Bittersweet Candy Bowl

So, the frustrated writer strikes back. I’m creating a corner to write some (frustrated) poetry to BCB characters…i’ll try to write for them..also by the relationship between all characters (yes…yashi it’s included too) and other stuff. I’ll be writing in spanish, as well in english. You’re welcome to write some stuff too! And of course to leave comments. So, to start this small contribution of my weird mind, i’ll write something in spanish that i call:

Once

Once objetos, once momentos
Un numero simlpe y nada extraordinario
Una serie de eventos sin sentido
Once caminos entrelazados

Un grupo conformado por once
Inseparables compañeros de alma
Cada quien tiene su ideal
Y sobre sus deseos dan su palabra

De un grupo tan pequeño
Se deriva un sentimiento tan grande
Conformado por jovenes en crecimiento
Pero tan maduros, casi listos para ser padres

Chicos agradables hay
Tambien los hay sin sentido
Igual como aquel que piensa en ellas
Y quien las protege, aun que salga herido

Chicas lindas y graciosas
Asi como molestas pero tiernas
Las hay quienes estudian
O quienes aman mas de la cuenta

Un grupo conformado por grandes
Pero tambien por pequeños
Que sin sus enormes aventuras
No reiriamos hasta que duelan los huesos

Este grupo de once
Que no se olvida facilmente
Que al final del dia
Siempre saben sacarnos una sonrisa

Tomados de la mente de una persona
Pero adoptados por todos
Ahora forman parte de nuestro legado
Formaran parte, por siempre, de nuestros recuerdos.

JC “Frustrated Writer”

chill son

Paulo’s a loser, it’s sad but it’s true
If you’re one of his fans I feel sorry for you
Bagging a freshman may seem like a breeze
But for poor Tessa’s sake, I hope you catch a disease

I’ve shipped Michael and Lucy
And Paulo and Tess
And Sue and McCain
I wished them the best
But being a shipper
Few ships of mine show
Thus why is it, Taeshi
You must torture me so?

*sobs* Brilliant…

Some say Lucy will and some say she won’t
And while most people get it, some of them don’t
They spam Taesh with endings (though details be gory)
Please shut the fuck up and let Taesh tell the story

The porn thread is sagging, the random chat’s slow
It’s three-thirty AM, and I’ve nowhere to go
My caffeine’s run out and the forum is dead
I could rhyme forever, but I’m going to bed

G’night.

*jealous*
*fuming*
*MAD!!*

Wish I could read it…

I have a vague understanding of JC’s poem, but just listening to it in my head is gorgeous. I hope he finds what he needs to unfrustrate him, if that makes a damn bit o’ sense.

Thank you, Taeshi.

@ Everyone Thank you so much! And for those who made they’re poetry it was prety awesome..jaja..keep doing the good work!

So here’s another…Right from my brain. Called: “Missunderstandings” (sorry about the misspelled words and ortography faults..sorry)
The precuel it’s simple: Mike got angry with lucy (again) and in a rainy night he wrote this:

Missunderstandings

Why it happens every time
I’m here once again
Just with this on my mind
And you don’t even care

No matter how many times
I try to explain things
You seem to have it all wrong
Only got you angry and showing yout theet

Why you never listen to me
I never mean to harm you
I just want to talk
And walk beside you

I just wanted to say hi
And you turned back
I asked why
And you say “Jerkface do the math”

Since that day
The one you said i love you
I have it on my mind
And i still don’t know what to respond to you

But what can i say?
I’m inlove with another person
Even if she is far apart
I want to be at her side

I just want to be fine
Togheter as the old days
Since we where just kids
Without problems and all

Maybe i’m asking too much
If only could you calm down
But you know what it means to me
To be with you, from day to dawn

So keep calling me jerkface
I still be with you
Even if you don’t understand why
I’ll protect you with my life, cuz i…

JC “Frustrated Writer”

I’ll do some limericks.

Mike
The cat with the scarf is kind
but he has quite a lot on his mind
should he end up with Lucy
the romance will be juicy,
but his crush has got him quite blind.

Lucy
She can be very aggressive
and her emotions are quite evasive
but become her best friend,
she’ll cling to you till the end
and not just because you’re persuasive.

Paulo
Recently, he’s been a man-whore
and he can be more of a pig than a boar.
Though being quite sweet
he thinks with man-meat
and lately only thinks to score.

Daisy
She is our favorite cat with curls
and she decks herself out in pearls
Adorable and smart,
she’ll shoot for your heart
and a new love soon unfurls

David
Ah yes, the lovable fool
quite young and not yet a tool.
if it’s just a facade
beware! Oh my gawd!
Such a mastermind would be quite cool!

Abbey
As it is often quite said,
the big-eared one has level a head.
Though it was said in the past
the joke didn’t last
and the president joke is now dead.

More to come later.

@ Taeshi: Thanks for the support…and yeah, i still have some troubles writing in english, specialy when i write poetry…haha i have more skills at translation or even talking…i think that’s one of my frustrations as a frustrated writer…and yes it’s teeth sorry about that..

@Gabriel Kaxbe Nice ones! I like your BBBAA way to write poetry.

Here’s another, two by the price of one for today? haha…

Just came right at the time: Premise: Mike is thinking about Sandy, with love and sorrow about the distance. Called:

“It Doesn’t Matter”

Paulo still keeps bothering me
Laughing at my face
Saying the word i hate
You’re on a long distance relationship, get over it men!

Screw you Paulo!
And so the ones who think like you
I’ll do as my heart says
And keep the fight, and the hope too

So what if we aren’t togheter now?
That’s a matter of time
One day i’ll grow up
And i will travel to her side

And finaly we’ll be at last
Side at side for ever
No matter what

I’ll kiss her so much
That my lips will hurt
But to taste that honey
I’ll kill anyone, no matter who

But, i must admit
That won’t happen in a long time
That’s how is it

And my lips now are dry
I can taste only gall
When can that day come?
And free me from my tormented past?

May be i’m daydreaming
But it’s the only thing that i have now
Only a shadow of what i want
Otherwise, i dont now how

Oh Sandy! I need you right now!
My soul keep screaming your name
In the darkness of the night

I feel alone sometimes
And i see that tree
The one you gave me as a gift;
Those precious memories

I must close my eyes now
But for now, sleep tight my love
Maybe tomorrow i’ll be fine
I hope to dream with you, all night long

JC “Frustrated Writer”

@JC: They’re limericks….

Anyways… More limericks.

Tess
You’ve made some mistakes in the past
but we’re glad that it didn’t last
You’re a grade A girl,
you rock the fans’ world,
and worked your way in our hearts fast

Kizuna
When it came to your love
it was David you only thought of
But now you are gone
The bad guys have won
And looks like you were killed off.

Yashy
Are you a lizard or what?
And man, you’re a pain in the butt.
But we love you the same
you and your games
Without you, we’d be stuck in a rutt.

McCain
There once was a dog who, when sane
had quite a logical brain
But when speaks in prose
the other folks chose
to yell out, “Shut it, McCain!”

Liam
Your lines, no matter how cheesy
has all of the fans feeling breezy.
In the comics we’ll see you
With your Lucy too,
feeling all bright and easy.

Carson
He is the cat that is gay.
He likes penis and that is okay.
He’ll put up a fight,
and with all his might
find a way to make Mike look his way

Carter
Carter C-Carter C-Carter
Carter C-Carter Carter
He loves Lucy a lot
He loves Lucy a lot
Carter C-Carter C-carter

More to come later.

@ Gabriel Kaxbe I know that. What i was saying it’s the structure of the limericks. Nice ones. Specialy the one of Carter haha so true!. I’ll think in another later.

More limericks

Rachel
The most “Kawaii desu” dog we’ve seen,
and though in the past she seemed mean,
her brand new design,
makes her look cute and kind
She’s our vote for Paulo’s queen.

Sue
This smart and meddling lass
has the looks to match her sass!
Logical and cool,
she truly does rule
And did I mention, DAT ASS!

(LOL @ that one)

Amaya
We love you, our favorite mute,
because you’re so terribly cute
We love you a lot
and skills you have got
make you a charming little brute

Jessica
We love you, but you can be cruel…
And you treated Paulo like a fool…
But your sass we can take
because you take the cake
You’re our favorite cheerleader in school

Sorry. These were lame.

Ok, so i’ll write something that just came from i don’t know where, but it came up when i heard a song..haha.. Premise: Lucy thinks about Mike, at the same day she said that loves him..
A sad one this time. Love shows many faces, and one of them it’s hurt, pain, sorrow and despair…to my dear lucy i call this:

“I must confess”

It came from my mouth
I can belive what i said!
What i did? Why?
Why did i have to confess?

He was standing there
The sun was high
I said the word
I tought you’ll laught

But i was nervous
And with doubs on my mind
Expecting a response
A good one, i was…

But no, that answer wasn’t
How can you said that
What i’m supposed to do?
That’s what you said, that’s all

With my heart broken
Came back to my home
Gone to bed, to rest
But wasn’t able to sleep, even an hour

Why did you care about someone
Who is far appart from your life?
Don’t you see what’s next to you?
When i’m here, just at your side

Why don’t you choose me?
This isn’t a joke, Mike…
I just wanted some of your love
Why did you make me cry?

Do i have something wrong?
I can be a nice person, if you want
Just change your response
See me, i’m begging now for that!

It’s just that i love you
Your mind can’t support that?
What’s wrong with you
Why do you leave me appart?

I’m still on my bed
It’s 4 am
With so many things on my mind
But now, i don’t even know who i am

My eyes are so tired
My tears fall from my cheeks;
My pillow it’s now wet
And all it’s because of you, and she

Doesn’t matter now
What will happen when the sun glaze
I just know one only thing
That i love you with all my heart..silly jerkface…

I love you, and i can’t think in something else
Rip my heart now and finish this!
I only wish i where someone else…

JC “Frustrated Writer”

Oh look. Here’s the original.

As an archeologist hunts for artifacts,
As a stubborn miner hunts for gold,
Kaxbe’s found this thread at last.
Though by now it’s rather old.

Imma bumb this old thread… but with an attempt at a poem. Let’s see how it goes…

High in the sky
Where the blue bird flies
Down below
A waiting soul
A broken heart
Far away, an ever more lonely soul
Takes a path that no one should follow
But the autumn colored scarf lies on the ground
Battered, torn. and bloodied
The broken heart cries out in rage to the lonely soul
Swearing death and regret for what it has accidentely done
The pain it has caused
High in the sky
The blue bird flies, it’s memory regained
And the human laughs with utter delight

What’s wrong with the Poetry thread for one and all?

You could have posted there.




Now we have two poetry threads up…

I thought was specifically for BCB poems. So I posted it here. Crap, I made a mistake I shouldn’t have, didn’t I?

I honestly can’t tell anymore. You could well be right.

*Gasp*
in the great words of old spice

“DOUBLE POET EXPLOSION”

it’s like a cat in the hat book version of BCB in here.

Being left alone, in the dark and cold
Never more seemed so lonely.
Except when you left me all by my self
And made me think “If only…”

But if only you were here
I could wish it was true
Instead of cowering in all my fear
That maybe you will return to the blue.

So for now I will sit and wish for the days
That are destined to return no more.
But prehaps in a way,
This is how we settle the score.

Poem from McCain:

Regarding this poem, here’s a fact:
The meter and rhyme are exact.

Amaya works hard,
she is serving popcorn now.
I love her sweet smile.