Bittersweet Candy Bowl

or use a thermonuclear weapon

im trying to consider the civilian populace here

Woah

I read all the story and is pretty damn good.

I vote for big smashy robot thing from future. much more satisfying than simple blowing up. make the dock suffeerrrrr

Paulo pushed his way through the large old door. The inside of the barn was a mess of old, rusty machinery or many kinds. Some were those that the cops recognized, some were of a completely new design.

“Why would he go here?” Abbey asked.

“How the hell should I know?” Paulo responded. Suddenly, a gunshot sounded and paulo felt something whizz by head.

“Crapcrapcrapcrapcrapcrapcrapcrapcrap…!” Was all the Somali said as he and his friends dived for cover.

“Look out!” Abbey cried out when. “He’s got a rifle!”

“How do you know that!?” Paulo said.

“Because I saw him just before he fired!” Abbey said angrily. “Just stay under cover, it’s an old looking rifle, we should be okay as long as-”

Abbey was interrupted when a tick was, then something slammed against one of the machines in the distance. Half a second later, an explosion was heard and rusty parts flew across everywhere. Abbey felt something impact his shoulder, he screamed as he desperately tried to get the rusty metal out of him.

“And he’s got grenades!” David yelled.

“This guy is really starting to piss me off!” Paulo said. There was another tick, then something slamming against metal, then an explosion.

“Argh! If this keeps up, he’s gonna nail for sure!” Paulo stood, quickly spotted Jacob, then jumped over his cover and fired. The black dog took cover and hid as Paulo, and David seeing his chance, kept firing on his position.

Meanwhile

White. That’s all Augustus saw, white. His ears ringed and he stumbled. Damn. An Orion Mark IV Silent-Flash grenade. Where the hell did he get those? He tried to look past the bright light that was impeding his vision but failed. Then, something slammed against his face and he slammed against the ground. The Elusionary had punched him! Right in front of him and he couldn’t see him. Augustus swore loudly, he couldn’t hear it, but he knew he had said it. He reached a shaking hand to his transmitter and tapped it. Although he couldn’t hear anything, he knew exactly what he was saying.

“This is Augustus. Sue, Michael, the Elusionary hit me with a flash grenade. I can’t see nor hear anything. I’ll be down for some time. It’s all up to you Michael. Augustus out.”

“Gee, that’s nice to know.” Mike said in his transmitter in a very agitated tone. “I’d probably be already there if it weren’t for this GOD DAMN DOCK!!!” The tone of his voice hurt his ears but he was too mad to care.

“Um, Mike…?” Sue said in a hesitant tone. “I have a map of the city, you could’ve just went up the road and keep heading straight and you’d be there, right?”

“Really?”

“Yeah. Just follow the road.”

“Bloody. Hell.” Mike cursed as he turned around and ran up the road. As he past the police officer, he glared at him. The officer shrugged and his friend laughed. Mike continued on.

Sorry for not posting in a while. Have been busy out of my mind with school work. (and who gives 3 Essays and a poster project for one week end.) Any way, haven’t really been practicing for the past couple of weeks, so…. ya and the dock, really, pore Mike. haha.

Good decision for the deaths of main characters. Thats the one thing that always sort of maid me mad about some story’s, not like there invincible. I APPROVE

As always grate story. Bye the way, how long dose it take to wright these any way?

Holy hell that was long.

wow still no post? weird.

He has school, so he won’t be able to post as frequently. We shouldn’t rush him.

i volunteer to croak for the sake of laughs. ^_^

@Jboomer
You’re right.

@Taeshi
Sorry.

@Chazfullmetal
Okay if you want to.

[It’s been a while, yes, I’m sorry, but, I’ve made a post now, so here you are]

Mike, after some searching in the Chinatown area, soon spotted Augustus stumble out of the alleyway, from the way he walked, he was still blind. Mike ran up and saw that Augustus was still blind and deaf from the flash grenade. Seeing that there was nothing he could do to help, Mike continued down the alley to find Lucy. He soon found her lying on the ground unconscious. The Korat nervously kneeled next to her, trying to figure out what to do. That’s when he remembered the safety mechanism on the Time Warp Device. Mike lifted up Lucy’s right wrist that held the device and tapped a key on it. Immediately the Khao Manee’s fur stood on end and her left fist flew up and collided with Mike’s jaw, sending the Korat flying.

Lucy hadn’t actually regained consciousness until after she had instinctively punched the source of the electrical shock that jolted through her. When she did, she noticed her fur stood on end, her tail was more puffed up then ever, her left hand hurt like it punched something and her head felt like shit. She looked and noticed Mike on the ground, groaning.

“Mike…?” She said. “Did I just punch you?”

“Apparentely…” The Korat groaned in a sarcastic tone.

“Guys?” Sue said. “The Elusionary is moving to the downtown area, I suggest you hurry up. You can take a shortcut through one of the buildings, that’ll save you a lot of time.”

“We’re on our way, Sue.” Lucy said, she turned and looked at Mike who got up. “Sorry.”

“Ah, it’s okay. I think I should’ve seen that coming. What happened?”

“I… don’t know. The Elusionary had a pistol, like one of ours, and shot me.”

“Wait… You saw the Elusionary?”

“I…” Lucy stared at Mike for a moment. “…I don’t remember. I think I did. Did I?”

“Try not to think about it.” The Korat said. “You hit your head pretty hard. I’m sure you’ll remember in time.” Michael then turned toward the nearest door and walked over to it. Lucy stayed where she was, staring at her dearest friends.

“Yeah…” She muttered, so quiet that he didn’t hear. “…I’m sure I will.”

Meanwhile

Sue tapped her transmitter. “Daisy? How’s it going?”

“We’re having no luck finding the fugitive, Sue.” Daisy replied in an exhausted tone. “We’ve scoured the deck multiple times, no luck. Tess is searching the lower levels right now while I’m keeping an eye out up here. I hope she finds him soon, Abbey sounds like he’s in trouble.”

“Don’t worry.” Abbey suddenly said. “We’ve got the guy pinned down, we’re doing a lot better than we did a few- HOLY SHIT!!!” Sue heard what sounded like a missile firing and then exploding in the background, as well as some incoherent shouting.

“He’s got a rocket launcher!!” David yelled.

“Abbey? Abbey!?” Daisy yelled, her voice wracked with worry.

“I’m alright, I ducked just in time. Jeez! Where’d he get that stuff?”

“Hah! He’s cake compared to the Nazis.” Paulo said in a defiant voice. “Ya hear that, Jacob!? I FOUGHT FUCKING NAZIS!!!”

Sue heard pistol shots fire in the background. She tapped the transmitter and the battle went silent, what could she do?

Tayvin I swear to God we better find out who the Big E is soon…..

Good pacing, but I noticed some repetitive sentences. Good work so far though.

cool love it

Tetanus will be the death of Abbey if he doesn’t heal up soon

tayv mus be thinking hard |: (

Mike tried turning the knob on the door but it didn’t budge.

“It must be locked…” He said. “We’ve got to catch up to the Elusionary!”

Mike reached into his Time Warp device and pulled out a dull gray cylinder, it felt like wet clay in his hands. Mike stuck it into the lock of the door and it fit easily, he heard a click from the door and tried turning the knob again. The door opened and the Korat smiled, pulling the gray cylinder out and placing back in the TWD. He looked inside and saw 3 men sitting on a table playing cards. He looked back at Lucy, who looked at his scarf.

“You okay, Lucy?” He asked.

“It’s your scarf…” She said.

Mike stared, puzzled. “What? What about my-”

He was interrupted when some hands reached out and wrapped around his face. The three men Mike had seen earlier all grabbed on to him and pulled him in.

“MIKE!!” Lucy cried out as she reached for her pistol but one of the men noticed her and, faster than she expected, ran up to her and punched her in the face. Her vision went blurry as she tried to get.

“Get her in too!” One of the men ordered. “We can’t have anyone know!”

The man who knocked Lucy down grabbed her and pulled her in.

Meanwhile

Jacob fired another rocket, which screamed over Paulo’s head. Abbey grunted in pain as he pulled his Time Reversal Rod out of his now healed shoulder. He looked around and noticed something.

“Where’s David?” He asked.

David crawled around the old machinery, completely undercover and safe so long as Jacob didn’t throw any more grenades, he whistled casually as he crawled. When Jacob came into view, he smiled.

“I made it!” He blurted out. Jacob screamed and brought out his pistol, firing at David who ducked back into cover. Panic overtook Jacob as he threw his rocket launcher down and fled to a ladder that led to the roof of the barn.

“Go, go, go!” Abbey yelled as he jumped over his cover and ran toward his target, followed closely by Paulo. They opened fire on Jacob.

[Alright guys, I won’t be able to post over the weekend as I will be going to a convention in Vancouver. And sorry it’s taking me a long time to make these posts, school is killer.]

Oh I so know who big E is now. Tee hee, very nice Tayvin, very nice indeed.

COOL YOUR BACK XD

oh and status report: 4 characters down

good thought with the lock picking thing. Approve

B.T.W. I’m just going to draw Jacob just like David only black

P.S. I understand totally about school didn’t mean to rush ya or anything.

BUMP!

??? (}:-I)

Good read so far I hope there will be more

Seven pages. Jeez, I can see this is going well for you, Tayvin Loving the story so far.

This is awesome. It’s making me want to do a fanstory about the secret life of Augustus…

Also, I have a VERY random, but good, guess as to who Big E. is. > This story’s looking great so far, and I’m definitely hooked.

It has to be sandy

Its taken me THREE DAYS to finally catch up with this comic, and I must say that I am impressed.

WHEW!!

That took awhile, keep it up Tayvin!

Intermission Chapter 1
Inspired By, Tayvin


Back at T.L.P.F. HQ…


Two guards, half asleep and half bored stood guard at the teleportation room.

“You ever wonder if this place will ever be attacked.” one said.

“Nah. Remember we wiped out the only other species with technology to get here.”

“Then why do we need guards, we could be helping those new recruits that came in with catching those fugitives.”

“Well there actually a good reason why.” the other said.

“Well?”

“Its because of…”

He was interrupted by one of the teleporters flickering and then
flashing like someone or something was coming through.

“What the…”

A creature unknown to them stepped through the portal casually. It wasn’t a cat or a dog. It had hair, but only on it’s head. The face was mostly a pale skin color and it had strange ears and a different nose.

“Who are you and how did you get here!” one of the guards yelled.

The creature looked at the two pathetic guards and chuckled.

“Do you know how many times someone has asked me that question? Trust me, if I told you, I would have to kill you. Oh, that’s right, your probably going to die anyway.”

To Be Continued…

That’s how you do it while waiting for the real comic to come.

Not bad at all, though I want some nice humans in the story not me gunna kill yalls ones

Don’t worry, ill tell you now, my human is neutral.

Halelujah

I know right?

It been a month Tayvin, I am somewhat disappointed.

It’s not like he lives to please you and he does have other things than writing to do. Just wait patiently and deal with it.

I know I know.

Can we make puppy eyes in a futile attempt to get him to write more?

no

Wow dude it’s been a wile Tayv

Guess we just wate till the new one huh

I got a lot of the main characters done, just need to finish with the other stuff like weapons and the T.W.D., ETC… But.. uh… ya dude it’s been a wile

think he forgot

Hope nothing bad happened to him

Hey guys, listen, it’s not that i haven’t worked on the next post or forgotten, I am working on it, but it’s gonna be a really long post to make up for the last… I’m gonna say while. I also moved to a new house (am still in the process, actually) so that really slowed me down, I’m sorry for the long, long wait but it can’t be helped, I’m am working on the post, expect it to be a long read when it does come out. Again, I’m really sorry.

Oh no problem it’s just good to hear abt the status, it’s a great read and I’m glad it can continue. I can’t wait to post conspiracy theories based on the next update XD till then stay well

Good luck with the moving, Tay.

Cool, good to heir from ya, dude

Hope every thing goes smooth with the moving.

YAAAAAAA!!!

Contact with the creator.

Morale has gone up 30%

[At last! I’ve made a post for here, I’m so sorry it took me this long but complications in the real world tend to happen. Enjoy!]

“Hurry up before anyone else notices!” The man that held Mike yelled, although he couldn’t see him, he could see the other two easily. The man that had knocked down Lucy was a white furred dog with a small mustache and he smelled like he hadn’t bathed in weeks, maybe longer. The other one was an orange and white cat who looked like he was around Mike’s age, he wore what looked like the uniform of a private school with the badges torn out.

“Newbie!” The man who held Mike yelled. “Grab their weapons!”

“Yes sir!” The kid replied in a heavy British accent. Mike struggled harder in a vain attempt to break loose from the man’s grip as the kid came to him and took his pistol from its holster.

Lucy watched the kid intently as he walked over to her. Once his hand was inches from the pistol, she’d surprised the dog that gripped her by stamping her foot down on his and then take down the kid with her pistol, simple as that. At the last moment, she sneered and stomped with all her might. But, instead of letting go and holding his foot in pain or something like that, he slammed her head against the wall and she blacked out.

“LUCY!” Mike cried out as the dog let her drop to the floor and turned to watch the Korat, who struggled as anger seethed in him.

“Hmph, a nice attempt.” The man said. “But Rico is one of our top customers.”

Suddenly, the dog Rico gripped his foot and cried out in pain.

“Ah frigg’a piece’a sonov’a!” His accent sounded like British, Scottish, German, Russian and Chinese put together.

“See? Our top customer.” The man repeated.

“What’re you talking about?” Mike asked, becoming more confused.

The man seemed to ignore him. “Newbie, what did I say about their weapons?”

“Oh! Sorry sir.” The kid shook his head and went to remove Lucy’s pistol.

“We don’t want these cops to turn the tables.”

Mike froze. He knows? How does he know about the T.L.P.F?

The kid looked at Mike oddly as he clutched the pistol in his hand.

“Are you sure they’re cops, sir? They look about my age.”

The man chuckled. “Trust me, Newbie. These are cops.”

He seemed to make a signal to Rico, who nodded and went to hold Mike in place. For the first time, the man came into Mike’s view. What he saw made him get an uncomfortable feeling inside him. The man seemed like a cross between a dog and a cat but that was impossible… in his own time, however.

“Are you…?”

“The first cat and dog Hybrid? Yeah, that’s me.” The hybrid smiled. “Don’t think you’ll learn my name from me or anyone here, we’re not stupid enough to tell undercover police the name of the man who invented nerve rice.”

“Nerve what?”

“Another nice attempt, Korat. But you won’t trick me into telling you everything by playing dumb.”

“I’ve no idea what you’re talking about. But how do you know we’re-”

“Come on, cut the crap, you can’t be police undercover and not know anything about our operations.”

Mike eased his tense shoulders a little. Oh good. He thinks we’re ‘local’ police.

“So what’re going to do with us?” Mike asked. The hybrid’s smiled disappeared and he sighed.

“Now here’s where I’m not sure. I’m gonna be honest, I’ve no idea what to do with you and you’re friend. If you came this close to finding my hiding spot, then it’s only a matter of time before SWAT troops barge in here. But there’s a big risk in moving you along with us if we take you. But we also can’t just kill you here, the police could find evidence to track us down, plus Nerve Rice is the only lethal thing we have at the moment but that’s not quick enough…”