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Comment ID #40105

(Well if god says so haha)

Davion Brambilla June 8, 2010, 11:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #40106

*Shrug* We get along, we don’t have much but that doesn’t seem to bother us to much. And besides, what we don’t have in money we more than make up for with love. It might sound cheesy but I wouldn’t trade anything to be anywhere but right here by his side. Well, maybe not at this moment but you get the idea…

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #40107

(okay i can’t get much better timing than right after that post there Katherine so cue…)

Death Three

Suddenly a rustling is and along with the loud crack of a twig breaking. Many of the campers jump at the sound, and some point their guns at its origin. A shot is heard, as a shotgun goes off. Paolo’s gun is the only one smoking. He stands there for a moment with a shocked look on his face, his finger off the trigger. “I never pulled the trigger… it misfired.”

(Oh yes, I just did that ;) )

(Sorry for the ninja’ing Paolo)

voice of God June 8, 2010, 11:06 PM EST.

Comment ID #40108

*He quickly lowers his gun and begins to check the safety on it*


((Gah! Paolo was finally going to have a small non-asshole moment!!!))

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:06 PM EST.

Comment ID #40109

*Turns slowly towards where to shot was fired* Oh god no….

(You’re welcomed by the way. I can set up the dramas oh yes I can.)

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:07 PM EST.

Comment ID #40110

(Wait, who was killed? Zeke?)

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:09 PM EST.

Comment ID #40112

*Rushes to the edge of camp* Oh nonononononononoonono…

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #40113

(Indeed)

Ghost of Zeke June 8, 2010, 11:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #40114

*He drops his gun in shock* I never pulled the trigger…

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #40115

(D=)

*Storms out of the tent at the sound of the shotgun*

What happened? Is the shiller here!?

Kane Sadae June 8, 2010, 11:11 PM EST.

Comment ID #40116

*Sees Zeke laying on the ground covered in blood* ..zeke? Zeke? Zeke! *Stumbles over to his side and gently lifts his head in her lap.* Oh Honey no. Are you okay? Where…where did it hit-*Chokes back tears*

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:12 PM EST.

Comment ID #40117

(Uh… everywhere? It’s a shotgun, not a rifle. It would shred him to bits.)

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:13 PM EST.

Comment ID #40118

(Shut up! I’m creating dramas!!)

Zeke talk to me, come on now you idiot! Talk!

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #40119

The body of Zeke has a few bleeding wounds from the shotgun pellets, but none as prominent as the one that had passed through his forehead

(You’re creating drama, I’m at home holding in my giggles at the freaking perfect timing of this all)

Ghost of Zeke June 8, 2010, 11:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #40121

*He slumps his back against a log, staring at the unlit fire pit* I never pulled the trigger…
((Kinda disappointed Paulo didn’t get his lil moment there, but I’m gonna try and make a lil opportunity to give him it, though it’s gonna be REAL difficult now xD))

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #40122

*loads and cocks his pistol and aims it at Paolo*

WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE?!?!

(EDIT: Now / get to be the one yelling and aiming a gun at Paulo!! It was horrible being on the other end of that barrel… *shudder*)

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:17 PM EST.

Comment ID #40123

*She looks hopefull* Come on now I-I-I know that you can hear….*Starts shaking* I know you can hear me! Zeke please answer me! *Starts coughing and breaks into sobs as she cradles his head.*

(I knew it! I knew you were going to do it!)

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:17 PM EST.

Comment ID #40124

Right near the body what appears to be a small rifle can be found (If someone gets around to checking eventually, tranquilizer rounds will be found inside)

Voice of God June 8, 2010, 11:18 PM EST.

Comment ID #40125

(It was apparently fired from a distance, I believe it wouldn’t do as much damage that way =P)

*Gasps when she realizes it was Zeke who was shoot, and is left speechless*

Kane Sadae June 8, 2010, 11:18 PM EST.

Comment ID #40126

(Yeah…Katherine isn’t going anywhere anytime soon, but please someone try to move her, just try.)

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #40127

*Cocks pistol and aims it at Mitchell*
BACK DOWN MITCHELL IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!

Davion Brambilla June 8, 2010, 11:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #40128

*He doesn’t look up to Mitchell, and continues to stare blankly into the fire pit* I never pulled the trigger…

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #40131

*Seeing the guys fighting with each other*

Stop! Fighting won’t solve anything… It was an ashident… right Paolo?

And please… don’t aim at each other, we don’t want any more deaths…

Kane Sadae June 8, 2010, 11:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #40132

*Whispers* shut up. Shut up *screams* SHUT UP!! Can’t you see there is a wounded man here and we need to- we need to- I need to. Just please shut up….

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #40134

Oh yeah that wasn’t something to improve Perez’s mood any. she stands long enough to get a look at what happened almost shaking now as she tries to form the word “… St… Stupid.. STUPID BOYS AND YOUR TOYS!…Worthless… worthless all of you… we’re going to die just like that stupid stupid golden whore……” Yeah…. here come the tears now, as she looks between the grand standing types “Well go on then! SHOOT EACH OTHER! Save… *sniff* save him some trouble…. “

Raquel Perez June 8, 2010, 11:23 PM EST.

Comment ID #40136

*He looks up at Sadae, his mouth open as he’s at a loss for words. He looks over to Katherine, clearly disturbed by something before he stands, and goes to his tent, only whispering the same thing he’s been saying the past few minutes* I never pulled the trigger…

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:23 PM EST.

Comment ID #40137

*looks at an object by Zeke*

Is that what he wanted to get?

*checks it, discovering the tranquilizer rounds*

Y’know, the killer could have used this to knock out Kaydee to pin her to the tree without her struggling, or Karl to present a clear opening to his jugular vein. After all, that was too clean of a cut.

*note that as he examines the rifle, his gun is no longer aimed at Paolo, but is still ready to fire, safety off and the whole nine yards (no pun intended)*

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:23 PM EST.

Comment ID #40138

(zeke would have a giant hole in him,not be alive at all)

(i was ninja’d by 50 comments)

Jennifer Reed June 8, 2010, 11:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #40139

*Ignores everything around her, only looks down at her Husband* Zeke… why? Why did you have to…?

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #40141

(Indeed Jennifer you were a little slow on that one

I stirred the pot and am thoroughly enjoying my results)

Voice of God June 8, 2010, 11:27 PM EST.

Comment ID #40143

Stupid, stupid stupid stupid trigger happy morons! I knew this would happen I just knew it! *Gently lays Zeke’s head down and stands up with his blood covering her jeans. She turns around and storms back into camp and to Paolo’s tent where she starts screaming at him*

I knew it! I said this would happened and it did! All because of you and your stupid little guns!

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:29 PM EST.

Comment ID #40144

*Goes over to raquel and tries to comfort her*

“I’m sure it was an accident..”

*glares at paolo*

(forgive me if this is ninja’d,also i’m going to commit suicide now)

Jennifer Reed June 8, 2010, 11:29 PM EST.

Comment ID #40146

(Welcome to the harsh reality called life.
This has become a very nice mystery folks, keep the drama flowing
I appologize if I’m not allowed to comment)

Guest Reader Ved June 8, 2010, 11:30 PM EST.

Comment ID #40147

(No problems, guests can go ahead and comment, so long as you’re not trolling like whf does whenever he shows up)

MiwAuturu June 8, 2010, 11:31 PM EST.

Comment ID #40148

*He looks up at her, unable to find any words. A few small tears stream down his face from the corner of his eyes*

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:32 PM EST.

Comment ID #40149

Yeah… Mitchell is mostly being ignored here. His rational investigating has no place in a situation where everyone is pretty much freaking out! Raquel might have said more but when Jennifer got close she had someone to grab and bury that tear covered face in, what little she says being hysterical mumblings.

Raquel Perez June 8, 2010, 11:32 PM EST.

Comment ID #40150

*Continues rant cause you broke Katherine* It is all your faults! *Stares at the campers* This is probibly all just a revenge plot! Someone is killing off all you idiots because of money or power or a stupid card game for all I know! This is your faults and you had to drag me and my husband into this! You had to rile everyone up in till one of you idiots pulled the trigger and now my husband is dead! You stupid idiotic bastards!!

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:34 PM EST.

Comment ID #40151

*walks over to Paolo*

Sorry for earlier. I’m starting to think your gun was rigged!

*He remembers his pistol still has a bullet in it. He removes the magazine before pulling the bolt back, ejecting the round and catching it before it falls in the dirt. He puts it back in the magazine, which he then returns to the gun.*

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:34 PM EST.

Comment ID #40152

So what your saying Mitchell, is that the killer has tranquilizers and has been using them to make his kills easier?

Davion Brambilla June 8, 2010, 11:35 PM EST.

Comment ID #40153

Yes, which leads me to believe the killer knew where the tranq gun was hidden in the first place.

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:36 PM EST.

Comment ID #40154

*Looks around at the campers disgusted before turning around and stomping off into the woods.*

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:37 PM EST.

Comment ID #40156

So first the money and now this tranquilizer, whats next?

Davion Brambilla June 8, 2010, 11:38 PM EST.

Comment ID #40158

(Just a note that if I need to have someone talking to give you more clues, watch for NPCs suddenly deciding to talk, that’s Daffodil and Yasmin, the two remaining living NPCs)

MiwAuturu June 8, 2010, 11:39 PM EST.

Comment ID #40159

(hahaha ok)

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:40 PM EST.

Comment ID #40160

*Turns around and screams* I hope you are all killed for your greed and stupidity!

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:41 PM EST.

Comment ID #40161

*He finally manages to push himself up from the ground, his sadness turning into anger* How can you do that!? How can you just blow off what just happened and go about trying to find out who the murderer is? How are you affected so little by this!? *Something in the events that just passed has clearly troubled the Mob Lord’s son more then they should have* You practically ignored Katherine minutes after her husbands death and went to looking at the damn tranq gun!

Paolo Romano June 8, 2010, 11:41 PM EST.

Comment ID #40162

“At least he didnt kill an innocent man.”She remarked,still holding raquel

Jennifer Reed June 8, 2010, 11:43 PM EST.

Comment ID #40163

KATHERINE!! That gun was likely rigged!! Although it’s true that it really shouldn’t have happened, it probably wasn’t Paolo’s fault!! SO PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER SO WE CAN GET OUT OF THIS FUCKING MESS!!!!

*His emotions having reached their limits, Mitchell explodes on Katherine with all his pent up anger before he realizes what he’s doing.*

(ninja’d, but perfectly timed)

Sir Mitchell Adams June 8, 2010, 11:44 PM EST.

Comment ID #40165

*Her legs deceive her and she stumbles to the ground in a heap just out side of camp. She feels the leaves clinging to her wet face and tries to wipe them off.* Stupid bastards…

Katherine Woods June 8, 2010, 11:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #40166

*Is hurt by Katherine’s comment*

You don’t really mean that right… not all of us shame to shause trouble. Some of us wanted to have fun, I never wanted any of this to happen.

Kane Sadae June 8, 2010, 11:45 PM EST.

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