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Comment ID #42477

Ok folks. For those who don’t know what this is, it’s a group of people who will be posting a single crazy story told one paragraph at a time, each writer creating the next segment in the sequence.

The ground rules are as follows.

1: No fan characters. (We don’t wanna fall into pointless self indulgence)
2: No discussing your next paragraph with other writers in the game.
3: No explicit NSFW content. (It can be eluded to, but not shown)
4: No trying to break the game and ruin everyone’s fun.

The posting order is thus:
01. Maverik
02. Tayvin
03. Gabriel Kaxbe
04. Lisa
05. ILB
06. Pixelnator
07. Jacob83
08. Jerk
09. Bribri
10. Pyrotwister

And now… Let the game begin!

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The Greatest BCB Story Ever Told


While it’s possible that someone should have seen it coming, everyone was still shocked when announced that she had set up everyone’s vacation yet again. She had booked a week long cruise on a luxury yacht for her and her friends. She remembered the fight she had to get the others to come with her the last time, and so this time she had decided to guilt them all into coming. Tess had already bought all their tickets! So there they all stood, aboard the deck of the giant ship, once more saying goodbye to the comforts of their homes, and hello to a new holiday experience. What secrets were hidden aboard the ship? What turmoil did the sea hold for them? Romance? Action? Adventure? Only time would tell…

Maverik June 11, 2010, 5:19 AM EST.

Comment ID #42673

Paulo smiled, he was very excited for this trip, close to jumping up and down. He looked around and saw David looking over the egde of the boat. He walked over, curious as to what his friend was doing. Is he sick? no, doesn’t look like it…

“Hey David!” He yelled out. “What’re you doing?”

“I’m trying to figure out the name of the boat.” The dog answered.

“What? Why?”

Tayvin June 11, 2010, 2:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #42676

How the hell did you get Lucy onto a boat.

Radial June 11, 2010, 2:13 PM EST.

Comment ID #42708

How the hell did Tess convinced Lucy and Mike to go to Acapulco? and there’s your answer

Tayvin June 11, 2010, 4:09 PM EST.

Comment ID #42709

Mike’s okay, He doesn’t have any obligations to stay and wait for Sandy.
Lucy however…

Radial June 11, 2010, 4:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #42721

How did Lucy get on the boat? That’s up to whoever writes her into the story first I guess.

Kind of the point of the game :P

Maverik June 11, 2010, 5:33 PM EST.

Comment ID #42725

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AWxI- olQywDpZGhienN3NXdfMGR2anFoY2Nq

Google docs containing the story so far in one simple file. Anyone can read that but only people contributing to the story can edit.

Note however that posting will still take place on the forums. This only serves as a way to make the entire thing easier to read amongst the inevitable forum chatter

Pixelnator June 11, 2010, 5:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #42757

Question: Is this epic story only going to be 10 ‘paragraphs’ long, or is it going to loop through the same people until someone in the roster deliberately ends it?

Yappy June 11, 2010, 9:03 PM EST.

Comment ID #42817

Likely the latter.

Icaras June 11, 2010, 11:58 PM EST.

Comment ID #42818

My turn

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“Because I’m not getting on that boat if it is named after the ‘Queen Mary’” said the dog. “Think about it Paulo! GHOSTS! Ghosts, I say!”

“I highly doubt there will be any ghosts,” sighed Abbey, pulling two sets of luggage with him, one for him and one for Daisy. “So, Tess, how are the rooms going to be arranged?”

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 12:05 AM EST.

Comment ID #42879

Lucy would be the easiest to write for, she’d be passed out the entire trip. *Punched*

Taeshi June 12, 2010, 5:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #42904

(((Looks like I know what I’m going to do for my paaaaart~ n_n)))

J. Vincero (Jerk) June 12, 2010, 7:02 AM EST.

Comment ID #42911

I guess I didn’t make it very clear in the description? But this is one of those huge Yachts. So Lucy should be fine if she stays away from the edges/stays inside I would presume.

Maverik June 12, 2010, 7:43 AM EST.

Comment ID #42918

What if she got sea-sick? That would make the trip difficult for her. Actually, I think she would very grouchy and punch someone (like Tess) because she’s forced onto a boat.

Tayvin June 12, 2010, 8:20 AM EST.

Comment ID #42929

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Tess turned around from enjoying the sight of the ocean. “Well- Like last time it’s 2 people per room, but I haven’t thought of any arrangements yet,” she shrugged, “But I guess we shouldn’t mix them.”
“Aww you gotta be kidding me!” Paulo frowned, “Again?” Tess waved, “We’ll barely spend time in the rooms anyway.”

Lisa June 12, 2010, 10:02 AM EST.

Comment ID #42943

Paulo broke into a wide grin. “At least promise me I won’t be stuck with that faggot again,” he said jokingly. “I make no promises,” came Tess’ reply. “Let’s see… Oh, wait, there’ll have to be one room with mixed genders. Either that, or two single rooms.”
“I’ll stay with Abbey!” squealed Daisy. She noticed everyone staring at her, blushed heavily, and tried to explain: “Oh, I didn’t mean… not like… oh, it’s not… WAAH!” With this outburst, she ran towards the ladies’ room on deck.

(Did I break any rules? ^_^)

ILB June 12, 2010, 12:43 PM EST.

Comment ID #42945

Nope. You only alluded to sex. Kinda. If you can pull off the same crap Twilight did with its sex scenes you’ll be fine.

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:05 PM EST.

Comment ID #42947

Huh? I did? ^_^

ILB June 12, 2010, 1:07 PM EST.

Comment ID #42948

Kinda.

Anyways, the only thing I liked about Twilight was how she wrote the more… intimate scenes. It’s written so it’s all up to interpretation. So, even kids can read the bile she wrote without being corrupted.

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:11 PM EST.

Comment ID #42949

Were allowed to do that?
Huh.
I’ll remeber this when it’s my turn ;P

Jacob83 June 12, 2010, 1:12 PM EST.

Comment ID #42952

….

Someone PLEASE make it impossible for Jacob to set that up. Kinda worried here.

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:19 PM EST.

Comment ID #42953

Ah, you’d have to ask Pixel about that.

But I fail to see how that was alluding to intercourse. I mean, it’s Daisy. She’s almost as innocent as, uh, me. ^_^

ILB June 12, 2010, 1:21 PM EST.

Comment ID #42956

As innocent as you?
Might want to think that part through missy .

Jacob83 June 12, 2010, 1:23 PM EST.

Comment ID #42957

Hee. Sorry. ^_^

ILB June 12, 2010, 1:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #42958

“I’ll stay with Abbey”

Suuuuuuureee….. Daisy is definitely innocent. And when she screamed “No” she really meant ” OH GOD YES!!!!!”

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:24 PM EST.

Comment ID #42961

Oh you people and your… being people.

Ace June 12, 2010, 1:29 PM EST.

Comment ID #42962

Come on, now. I didn’t mean it like that, and neither did Daisy. ^_^

(I can do WoG on my paragraph, right?)

ILB June 12, 2010, 1:31 PM EST.

Comment ID #42964

Sure you can.

In which case, Daisy meant “OH MY ILB!!!!!!”

Gabriel Kaxbe June 12, 2010, 1:34 PM EST.

Comment ID #43020

ugh… This happens every time, where a thread with people chatting eventually turns into chatting about sex. IT HAPPENS EVERY TIME!!!!! *takes deep breath* or at least in all the threads I’m reading.

Tayvin June 12, 2010, 5:55 PM EST.

Comment ID #43040

@tayvin, we need to make a thing like godwins law, that ends the thread wen they talk about sex, or sexual references~SARCASM

that would make every thread about three to four posts long…..

Pyrotwister June 12, 2010, 7:20 PM EST.

Comment ID #43044

———————————-

After everyone had taken their time exploring the ship (Lucy had refused to go anywhere near the railings on the open decks) the group decided to meet up again before separating into their own rooms. Besides, Tess still had their tickets so it’s not like they could go into their rooms yet.

“All right guys. I’ve got some good news and some bad news… We’ve got enough rooms to house everyone in pairs. Unfortunately they’ve booked our rooms for us so I have no control over who goes into what room”

Before the chorus of complaints became unbearable Tess continued.

“Right… I’m just going to read out who has to share a room with whom. Think of it as a role call if you will”

Pixelnator June 12, 2010, 7:58 PM EST.

Comment ID #43049

Haha, great. Now Jacob can’t do, you know, that. ^_^

ILB June 12, 2010, 9:12 PM EST.

Comment ID #43090

@ILB
I don’t know, Jacob might find a way around that… I mean, he now gets control of whom is paired with whom… This makes me nervous.

Tayvin June 12, 2010, 10:58 PM EST.

Comment ID #43097

The way I intended it was so that everyone could pair one group and write their reaction to it or something unless Jacob just lists everyone.

I also wrote it so that we can get a clear list of who is and isn’t present in the group.

Pixelnator June 12, 2010, 11:31 PM EST.

Comment ID #43101

I think he’ll list everyone… *shrugs* but who knows.

Tayvin June 13, 2010, 12:08 AM EST.

Comment ID #43111

So are they on a yacht or a cruise liner?

Hannibal June 13, 2010, 12:52 AM EST.

Comment ID #43121

I thought it was a yacht…people name their ships regardless…

Sean June 13, 2010, 1:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #43296

__________________

Tess looked at the paper saying where each person would be staying, and then spoke out loud everyones names.
“First off Abbey and Paulos will be in room 12.”
Paulo and Abbey looked at eachover in shock until Paulo finally had the nerve to shout “You’re sticking me with the fruitcake!?” to which Abbey responded by saying “I’m not much happier Paulo so just grab your bags and lets go”.
Paulo and Abbey headed to their room, both grumbling under ther breath, until Tess started to continue reading the paper, and said the next pairing.


And oh look noone had sex ARE YOU ALL HAPPY NOW!?

Jacob83 June 13, 2010, 1:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #43312

Yes

Ace June 13, 2010, 3:22 PM EST.

Comment ID #43362

Yes, I rather am. ^_^ Sorry.

And haha, Abbey and Paulo together.

ILB June 13, 2010, 6:36 PM EST.

Comment ID #43389

______________________

“Poor Mike,” Tess grinned. “Looks like you have some competition.”
“SHUT UP!” Mike and Paulo and Abbey and David yelled in unison. Everyone looked at David.
“I’m a team player,” he smiled.
“Uh.” Tess eyed the paper. “Okay. Lucy and…Daisy.”
“DAMMIT.” The group was taken aback again to hear Daisy’s exclamation.
She blushed heavily. “Sorry…Lucy…”
Tess just buried her face in her hand.

J. Vincero (Jerk) June 13, 2010, 8:55 PM EST.

Comment ID #43726

What’s up with Daisy toda(is)y? ^_^

ILB June 14, 2010, 6:49 AM EST.

Comment ID #43732

lol,you made daisy yell dammit

Dr.John June 14, 2010, 6:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #43734

Ovaries?

Hannibal June 14, 2010, 6:58 AM EST.

Comment ID #44446

My turn isn’t it? Yeah typing up a paragraph now… but I’ve got to ask:Who’s the Fifth girl? For the whole ‘Mixed room’ thing to make sense there needs to be five girls and five guys.

So.. Mike, McCain, Paulo, David, Abbey yeah..

And.. Daisy, Tess, Sue, Lucy…. and It was Kizuna last time but she’s DEAD FOREVER OH NO

Most of the other girls Tess doesn’t know, or would just outright refuse. I guess in eliminating the other possibilities it has to be Amaya? Ah well.

Bribri June 15, 2010, 5:04 PM EST.

Comment ID #44450

Lucy just sighs, turning her head away lightly with her signature frown as she mutters out “Just get on with it already…” angry blue eyes finally coming to rest on Tess.
“Right.. Right just give me a second here” the pink haired senior quickly skimming through the rest of the names finger pointing left and right as each name was called out.

“… Right… I’m with Amaya…” The orange tabby giving that peaceful smile of hers but not saying a word.

“Mike you’re with McCain…” the gray feline giving a relived sigh at that, knowing full well he’d get no trouble from the Shades wearing dog who remained motionless.

“… and that leaves… uh.. David.. with Sue…” Tess blinked just once as she finished, looking up at the last two.

David was naturally ecstatic both arms raised in the air in triumph “I get to sleep with a girl! HA!” Sue simply looking on with horror and disbelief before face palming hard “It.. doesn’t work like that you moron…”

Bribri June 15, 2010, 5:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #44511

“Sure it does! Why else would I say it?” Replied David cheerfully.
“I can think of a few reasons…” Mumbled Sue under her breath as she walked halfheartedly to her room, defeated.

Lucy began picking up her stuff, when Daisy, whom was not very exited about the assignment of rooms either, asked to help carry Lucy’s things, with false eagerness.

“No thanks I got it, so why are you so down in the dumps? I thought you wanted to be here, you even organized most of it.” Asked Lucy in a very blunt manor.
“I really wanted some alone time with Abbey, we can’t do that during the day, because everyone else will be there too…” Responded Daisy.
Lucy didn’t say anything, they just continued down the deck of the ship, down the stairs and into the living quarters. “Okay, we got room 16, which is right……” Said Daisy, scanning the row of rooms looking for the two digits on the brass labeled doors.
“…by the engine room……” Finished Lucy who had apparently found the door at the end of the hallway. In the room it was significantly hotter than the outside, and the thin walls did little to stop the sound from penetrating, and echoing within the small quarters.
“Oh look two beds!” exclaimed Daisy.
Lucy then gave Daisy a stern, ‘I hate you’ look.

Pyrotwister June 15, 2010, 7:07 PM EST.

Comment ID #44541

You spelled manner wrong,just to point that out

Aurelius Line-92 June 15, 2010, 8:20 PM EST.

Comment ID #44562

T-T I used to get C’s and D’s on spelling tests so im not surprised, if it weren’t for the spell check thing on here, over 40% of the words longer then three syllables would be misspelled. (including this sentence too)

Pyrotwister June 15, 2010, 8:38 PM EST.

Comment ID #44563

Chill,it’s no big deal,i was just pointing that out..

Aurelius Line-92 June 15, 2010, 8:39 PM EST.

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