Bittersweet Candy Bowl

To Sandy,

I passed a place the other day
We called it “Chapel Hill”
Where I’d asked if some day you’d marry me
You blushed and said, “I will.”

And though there was no chapel then
There stood a cosp of trees
And the only sound for miles around
Were the whispers of the breeze

But the grove is now a parking lot
Where tires often screech
And with every fiber of my being I fear
That our dream is out of reach

Oh Sandy, know I love you so
Your “Maishul” I will be
And that dream we forged upon that hill
Still lives inside of me

Love,

Maishul

It’s beautiful, I don’t know what else I can say.



…except maybe correct: copse of trees, not cosp

@miwautura~hay! i was gonna say that….

nice poem by the way!

Fuuuu-

Everyone just read that as “copse” now. I’m having a bad day.

Thank you for pointing that out.

(I can edit this one, but no. I couldn’t edit the original post. FUUUUUU-)

cant you still edit it? oh wait, you posted another one about the correction…well that sucks

Well you know you did something good when Taeshi wants to make it canon. Congrats J. (Do we still call you Jerk? I don’t know.)

Thank you.

And it’s up to you what you call me.

Again, great job.

beautiful! =w=
but chapel hill and a letter kind of reminds me of silent hill 2

Wow. That’s a very beautiful sonnet. Makes me wanna start practicing poetry again. Would be nice to write some non angst ridden poems, much unlike my earlier works ^^;

I envy (well, not envy, but you get the idea) your skills. ^_^

I thought you were in favour of Michael and Lucy, though?

@ ILB: Long-distance relationships are all about hope for a future. I understand Michael. He had to choose this future over Lucy because he had already put so much love and time and patience into it, and feels such devotion to Sandy who, ostensibly, has treated him much better than Lucy has anyway, that to deny Lucy was a test to prove to himself and Sandy how much in love with her he really is. No matter how much it hurt both of them. He can’t give up on it now unless something shocks him out of it violently.

My point - actualizing a MichaelxLucy pairing can only mean that something terrible has happened to break Michael’s faith.

Ah. I see. ^_^

And that’s why Megan is dating that other guy and not me. *pout*

Aww… *pats J. on the head*

Gonna use the interweb to find someone near here who wants to mwah mwah mwah with me. Don’t need Megan for that. Then she’ll be all, “Hey Johnny you wanna mwah mwah with me,” and I’ll be all “I can’t hear you I’m too busy mwah mwah-ing with somebody else nyah nyah!”

Hee. Children at play. ^_^

Is that what the kids are calling it these days?