Bittersweet Candy Bowl

Oh, well glad you’re with us again.
(100th reply)

cool story so far,and thats too bad about your computer

yet again… My computer has stopped me from saving on the story, I have a technition coming over today to help fix it, so I have to write it AGAIN!!!!!!!!

damn that sucks

ok, the file was infected and had some sort of virus. So I’m fine with it now it was removed, I will now write it AGAIN!!!!!!

Well, least I get to see you again.
Hope you get more active soon. :c

Nice story by the way.

chapter due today

eventually after loads of technical problems it is nearly done

Chapter 18, How did I get here?

“Zzzt…No!” “Hmmmm, huh!” Luna awoke with a startle, a newspaper had somehow fallen off the shelves and rested itself over her face, she moved the paper and looked around her den. The den was simply a hollowed out rock face with a few boxes and shelves. Luna picked herself up and looked around, looking at the floor made her jump (and hit her head) she rubbed her head and kneeled down to get a closer look at the still figure on the floor.Luna’s heart was beating at about 50Mph, she looked at the figure and placed her hand over his chest. It slowly moved up and down, “Phew.” Luna sighed in relief. She looked at the figure, his face looked familiar. She leaned closer to get a better look, being careful not to cut herself on his upcurving spike sprouting from his head. but as she moved closer, heopened his eyes and screamed “Boo!”

Luna screamed, and clawed herself backwards, the boy was laughing in hysterics, he stood up and bent over to clutch his sides, “Oh you should have seen your face!” He said in between
laughing his ass off. Luna suddenly realised who he was, he was that boy who was in Jack’s house when he took her in for first aid. Luna clenched her teeth and slapped him in the face.

“What the Fuck?!” Luna screamed “Ved how the fuck did you get here?” Ved shrugged, then pulled out a ripped condom packet. Luna blushed, “Did we…” “No.” Ved interrupted, “Just felt like messin with ya.” Luna frowned. “God you’re immature…” Ved yawned and stretched his arms, then walked over to the shelves. “Nice place you got here.” Ved laughed.

“What day is it?” Luna asked. Ved shrugged. “No idea, thats the beauty of it!” Ved looked at his watch. “Hmm shouldn’t we be getting to school?” Luna gave him a strange look. “I don’t go to school…” Ved’s eyes lit up. “Serious?!” Luna nodded. Ved walked up to her and put his arm around her shoulder. “Well I guess I have a proposition for you…”

Luna shrugged him off. “No way, I don’t deal with the likes of you.” Ved flopped his head down. “Fine, I only wanted to hang out.” Luna looked at him bitterly. “You have school.” She suddenly clocked onto him. “Wait you mean you wan’t to play hooky?” Ved nodded with an evil smile. Luna smiled and put her arm around his shoulder. “Heh, you’re an evil little swine aren’t you.” Ved smiled. “Comes from years of practice…”

Technical problems again, but nothing too serious this time, just meant I had to delete a load of enters…

luna lives in a hollwed out rock face, yeah I know its unlikely

Heh, interesting. xD
Quick note of interest, Ved does blend into the background.
But it takes a bit of time and he’s quite the impatient one. ;P
Anyways, better plan on adjusting a few things, Ved’ll be moving out later on.
(email me and I’ll explain)

No complaint intended, but shouldn’t you bump your own thread? Then you’ll have the stories in one place.

You mean me?
Well seems since I haven’t drawn my comic in a while, I figure why bump something people aren’t gonna look over again.
Unless you want me to bump it when Blaze updates, since we are technically doing a collab.

I meant Blaze, he had a story thread. But your art thread is still up at the top, is it not?

i dont understand what you mean, if you look I actually did bump it

You did? If so, I’m sorry.

no problem

Next chapter focus on: Suri

Setting: School

Before the chapter is added, i will give a vague description of it,

need help on the details however, if you have any suggestions, nothing absurd though, email them to alexblues@hotmail.co.uk

chapter finished, not posted yet, will be soon

Caught up, and I’m hooked to both your stories ^_^ Keep up the good work guys!!

-Icaras

@Blaze: So in your personal opinion have you used these forums for something productive?

I’m really enjoying this, keep up the good work.

@nameless: you tell me


and thanks the rest of ya

the next chapter will be posted tomorrow

agh sorry guys, the chapter I wrote was a couple ahead. (instead of writing chapter 19, I wrote chapter 23 :S) i will try to post again soon

ah the heat… its too hot. I’m going to take a break from writiing for a bit. be back soon

Ah my hopes,they did get high there for a second..

It’s too hot?

no, not that 1… Its too hot to sit upstairs on a computor all day.

I’ll see you soon then Blaze.

Bump

no need for a bump but hey, whatever floats ur boat :s