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Comment ID #60017

And then they banged.

Come to think of it, most of if not all of Mav’s stories can have that tacked on if the story doesn’t feature it.

Hannibal July 15, 2010, 8:25 PM EST.

Comment ID #60028

You sure do hate lucy

Dr.John July 15, 2010, 9:52 PM EST.

Comment ID #60040

It’s not that he hates Lucy, it’s that Lucy’s got quite a share of admirers!!

Who might turn bad

really bad

oh dears

Taeshi July 15, 2010, 11:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #60060

Jesus this is uncomfortable.

J. Vincero (Jerk) July 16, 2010, 12:17 AM EST.

Comment ID #60149

I personally like reading these. Gives another way to look at what could have happened.

The Bell Boy July 16, 2010, 3:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #60151

“Stupid bitch couldn’t handle it… Well that’s ok… I’ll just keep raping you till you wake up again… Hehehe…”
really who says that while theyre raping someone
HEY IM RAPING YOU WHILE YOU SLEEP

snooths July 16, 2010, 4:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #60177

@snooths thanks a lot, i think i just laughed so hard i coughed my lung out. :D

Dr. Burple July 16, 2010, 6:49 AM EST.

Comment ID #95855

This is all Jacobs fault. He made me write a 3rd chapter to Trial & Error. So blame him for this.

The following is an optional “Not really cannon” epilogue to my recently finished fanfic Trial & Error. So read that first if you want to understand what’s going on.

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The cold steel felt heavy in Lucy’s hand… Her fingers gripped the top half as she slid it back as far as she could, untill she heard the loud click of the bullet being fed into the chamber. Just like the man on the gun range had shown her. Tears filling her eyes, she stepped out into the hallway. “Hey Mike…” She spoke softly, but her voice projected well enough.

“What do you want Luc-” His voice was cut. His puples dialated. Lucy raised the weapon and aimed, shaking a little.

“Fuck you.” She managed to say through her shaking voice. A single quick motion broght the barrel to her temple. She squeezed the trigger. And everything went black.

Maverik September 25, 2010, 9:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #95863

I feel so bad for putting the idea into his head.

Wait no I don’t.

Jacob83 September 25, 2010, 10:18 AM EST.

Comment ID #95886

Oh snap! xD
Jacob you fiend, this didn’t have to be a school shooting.

Ved_of_Flames September 25, 2010, 12:52 PM EST.

Comment ID #95888

Fuck you Jacob

Rukral September 25, 2010, 12:59 PM EST.

Comment ID #95933

Why couldnt you just have her kill mike,i dont understand its far too easy to kill lucy (Although its just as easy to kill mike) Why not make a story where amaya dies or something

Dr.John September 25, 2010, 3:14 PM EST.

Comment ID #95939

Lucy was basically getting revenge on Mike by killing herself in front of him. Forever scarring him and laying a world class guilt trip on him.

And yes. This is the last of my “Screwing over Lucy” stories. For now at least. I’m moving on to some nicer ones and then probably back to screwing with other characters.

Maverik September 25, 2010, 3:22 PM EST.

Comment ID #106258

This one is longer than the last few, and was written in an attempt to make Susan cry. Though hopefully some others will find something to enjoy (or cry about) in it.

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Mike and Lucy had never been so happy. All obstacle had finally been removed, finally, after everything that had happened between them, Mike had told Lucy that he did love her. Tears welled in the young girl’s eyes as she looked up at the Korat. It was finally coming true. Her fairy tale ending… “Mike… Promise me that you’ll never leave…” She looked so defenseless. Like anything could shatter her in an instant.

“I promise you Lucy… I’ll never leave your side… Not ever…” His smile held a warmth that melted any doubt that Lucy had ever held about the two of them. She firmly gripped onto him and buried her face into his chest. Never wanting this moment to end…

“I love you Mike…” She whispered softly, her fingers nimbly dancing across his chest.

“I love you too Lucy…” He returned softly, his palm gently caressing the back of her head. “Now. Wait here ok? Close your eyes and you’ll get a surprise” Lucy looked hesitant, but his smile disarmed her. She couldn’t refuse him.

“Ok… But this better not be some kind of trick…” She playfully teases, regaining a little of the fire in her belly. Mike winked and she sighed softly, shutting her eyes tight.

“Now. I’ll be back in two shakes of your tail” He promised as he quickly made his way off and out of ear shot. Lucy sat alone on the park bench, listening quietly to the ambiance surrounding her. The birds in the trees… The sound of children playing in the distance… Such a perfect day. And from now on, everything would be alright.

The soft rumble of cars in the street behind her kept her mind preoccupied. She counted each vehicle as it drove by to pass the time. Guessing if it were a truck or a car or even very occasionally a motorcycle. A sudden screech caught her attention, followed by a series of screams. Lucy couldn’t help but look, as she glanced behind her just in time to see the car that had lost control speeding through the park and headed towards her.

With a nimble jump, she dived out of the way of the vehicle, it easily shattering the old wooden bench, splintering it into toothpicks with it’s bull bar. A loud crash ended the whole ordeal as it struck a nearby tree. Lucy slowly caught her breath, and ran over to see if anybody had been hurt.

The driver slowly stepped out of the car, shaken, but fine. “It just… I swerved to miss a kid in the road and…” He mumbled to himself.

“Sir! Are you alright? Did you hit anybody?!” Lucy shouted in a vain attempt to break through to the man. In the distance, a few people were running towards them. But everything faded away into nothing when she heard his voice.

“L… Lucy…” Mike spluttered. The white cat’s ears pricked up an she whirled on the spot, drawn immediately to the sounds source. Pinned between the solid steel bull bar of the vehicle, and the thick sturdy trunk of the tree, was Mike. Lucy’s hands clasped firmly over her mouth at the sight. “I… I go… Got you… Ice cream…” He coughed violently, weakly raising an arm to offer the frozen treat that he still gripped firmly in his hand.

“Mike!” Lucy shouted as she rushed towards him. “Talk to me Mike!” Fear filled her eyes, her heart beat faster than she had ever felt before.

“I’m… So…ry… Lucy…” He forced a weak smile. “I couldn’t… Keep my promise…” Another coughing fit. His entire lower half was being crushed against the tree. He knew what this meant.

“You’re… You’re going to be ok Mike… It’s all going to be alright! Just… Just don’t move! I’ll get a doctor!” Lucy scrambled for a way out. Anything. She refused to believe this could be true. It was all supposed to be perfect! Her troubles were supposed to be over!

“Lu…cy… I’m… You can’t… Save me…” He whispered, smiling weakly. Lucy shook her head rapidly, tears welling in her eyes. “This… This car… It’s holding me together… I can tell… I… If it gets moved… I will… I will…” He couldn’t finish the sentence. Faced with his own mortality, and the sight of the girl he loved being forced to endure the pain of witnessing it… Tears flew freely from his own eyes.

“Please… Don’t say that! You’re going to be fine!” She begged him, but she knew it wasn’t true. “Please…” She reached up and stroked the side of Mike’s face. “I… I love you…”

“I… Lo… Love…” Mike struggled to breath. Lucy leaned in close, and gently kissed him. Their last kiss… When she pulled away, he was gone. The spark of life had left him.

“Mike…” She whispered softly, her sobs quietly being over taken by the sound of a siren somewhere in the distance. “Goodbye…”

Maverik October 17, 2010, 3:51 AM EST.

Comment ID #106268

you evil evil man ;_;

Susan October 17, 2010, 4:05 AM EST.

Comment ID #106355

AND THEN THEY BANGED

somehow?

Magnus Darkly October 17, 2010, 12:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #112995

Necrophillia that’s how!

Subject-Delta October 28, 2010, 2:27 AM EST.

Comment ID #114085

Or Lucy committed suicide and had sex in the afterlife

Dotzrus October 29, 2010, 9:43 PM EST.

Comment ID #114107

Mav, when i read that, i laughed and cried at the same time, and then had a choking fit. A new low. Thanx, bro :D

sammy October 29, 2010, 10:46 PM EST.

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