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Comment ID #55933

((Screw it, it’s clue time.))

As they move Sandra’s body, they find a note underneath her. It says: Dear Micheal, I know that we can never be together. We are just to different, you are from a royal family and I am a simple baker’s daughter. I can not live knowing that I can never have you but I want you to be happy. Live your life to the fullest when I am gone. Love, Sandra. It was a suicide.

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 2:36 AM EST.

Comment ID #55937

Apparently this was suicide by the note. Or was it? Perhaps the killer just wants us to think so. I believe further investigation is required.

The McCain character July 7, 2010, 2:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #55938

((McCain character is right. Try and figure this out,))

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 2:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #55939

You don’t need to be an ex-PI to figure out that this seems to be a tad too coincidental.

Austin St. James (Wii) July 7, 2010, 2:40 AM EST.

Comment ID #55943

“Its… It’s ok, Abrum,” Mollen knew her brother better than that. She squeezed him to comfort him a little, then faces both him and Justin.

“We should go now. We need to help all the nice people catch the bad guy, and now that Abrum’s here, we’ll all be safe!” She grinned from ear to ear.

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 2:46 AM EST.

Comment ID #55946

((I Lol’d))

Zach Morgan July 7, 2010, 2:47 AM EST.

Comment ID #55949

She can’t stand to stay away from such a happy child, she gets up from her nearby seat.

Would you like my help Mollen to catch the bad guy? If we’re going to look for clues, we’ll need to look everywhere, and you’ll need someone to accompany you in the Girl’s Dormitory, since your brother can’t go there…
She kneels down beside the girl, her smile as wide as Mollen’s.

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 2:50 AM EST.

Comment ID #55953

Yeah lets go back, I’m kind of tired of this cafeteria. It’s good that you have your brother back now Mollen, I new he would be fine.

Justin Wesson July 7, 2010, 2:56 AM EST.

Comment ID #55954

“Ok!” Mollen held Justin and Deanna’s hands with her own. “Let’s go on an adventure!” She winked to her and hummed her way out of the cafeteria. “Where do we go first?”

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 2:57 AM EST.

Comment ID #55955

Follows behind the group, watching over them.

Abrum Massi(the JJ) July 7, 2010, 3:00 AM EST.

Comment ID #55956

We should go and meet up with miss Lily. Maybe she saw where Mr. Carson went. He’s been missing for a while.

Justin Wesson July 7, 2010, 3:02 AM EST.

Comment ID #55962

She beams at the Mollen and Justin. She glances behind her to see Abrum, thankful she is not the only one who could protect the ecstatic children should the need arise.

That sounds like a wonderful idea Justin, we could look for clues while we try to find Headmaster Lily.

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 3:08 AM EST.

Comment ID #55965

tries to keep a happy face for Mollen & Justin. Is genuinely glad Deanna is with them

Do you know where the headmistress might be then?

Abrum Massi July 7, 2010, 3:11 AM EST.

Comment ID #55968

“Um…” Mollen paused and let go of their hands, covering her cheeks with her own, “Does this mean I have to… you know, touch them?” She seemed more scared than sad at the idea of a thorough investigation.

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 3:15 AM EST.

Comment ID #55969

You don’t have to do anything you’re uncomfortable with Mollen.

Abrum Massi July 7, 2010, 3:17 AM EST.

Comment ID #55971

No, no, no, we’ll stay away from the actual bodies I think. You two are too young to be seeing such things.
She kneels down looks Mollen in the eye.
I know, Paulen was looking for Sandra’s records when we…
She trails off as she recalls the body on the copier, the bloodied prints of the secretary falling to the floor. Her face seems to lose it’s smile.

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 3:22 AM EST.

Comment ID #55973

…”Hey! Does anybody know the reason Ami was in there in the first place? Do we know what she was doing with the copier when she was killed? We need to search for clues!”

Lucille Chin July 7, 2010, 3:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #55975

(Abrum, your last name should be Massri, not Massi. Just saying.)

“Oh, ok…” Mollen let out a deep sigh of relief, but the stress returned to her when she realized that Deanna had stopped smiling. “Missy, are you ok? You don’t look happy anymore.”

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 3:25 AM EST.

Comment ID #55976

Moves towards Deanna looking concerned
Are you okay?

((Can I edit the name or do I have to post again. I don’t see a way to do so))

Abrum Massi July 7, 2010, 3:27 AM EST.

Comment ID #55979

She shakes her head as she tries to get the horrific memory out of her head. She smiles to the girl, though this smile is obviously forced.
I’m fine, it’s okay. The record wasn’t in the room, so we should look somewhere else for it.
Anywhere other then that room, if seeing that body affected me this much, a pair of young children…
Any idea where her record may be?

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 3:29 AM EST.

Comment ID #55984

Are you feeling well miss? You seem to have trauma indicative of being raped. Perhaps by Paulen.

The McCain Character July 7, 2010, 3:32 AM EST.

Comment ID #55985

((Paulen may have… WHAT?! Jesus christ. Why don’t you just smack the kid over the head with a baseball bat and run away while your at it o.o ))

Paulen Layden July 7, 2010, 3:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #55987

Suddenly angry, clenching his fists
Paulen did WHAT to you?!

Abrum Massri July 7, 2010, 3:34 AM EST.

Comment ID #55988

(Abrum, you should change that post, it was a joke.)

“We should ask the headmistress!” Mollen suggested, “She always knows where everything is!”

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 3:35 AM EST.

Comment ID #55993

Paulen had been sitting in the cafeteria pondering quietly to himself, thinking things over in his head. There had to be a reason for all of this. It couldn’t just be a psychopath killing without reason… He saw Deanne and the children preparing to leave the room and start investigating. “Wait!” He jumped up and carefully grabbed Deanne’s shoulder. “Haven’t you noticed something about these deaths? Something they have in common?” He looks the young girl square in the eyes, hoping she would get his meaning

Paulen Layden July 7, 2010, 3:39 AM EST.

Comment ID #55995

((This has all gone to hell and I caused it… yay…))

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 3:44 AM EST.

Comment ID #55997

She raises an eyebrow at Paulen.
What do they have in common? I never really saw the first death, and when I got a look at the third…

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 3:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #56001

((I’ve got to get some sleep, Justin will follow Mollen and Abrum or any of the other older kids and will take photos of evidence.))

Justin Wesson July 7, 2010, 3:52 AM EST.

Comment ID #56003

Paulen sighs a little, realizing that maybe he was the only one who had been thinking about the deaths long enough to notice. “All three of them were girls… I think we need to consider the possibility that we have a killer who has a vendetta against women on our hands…” He looks between the three of them and back to Deanna. “I don’t think it’s a great idea for two girls to be going out alone with only a little boy as backup…” He looks at Justin and rubs the back of his head nervously. “Uhh… No insult intended kid…”

Paulen Layden July 7, 2010, 3:54 AM EST.

Comment ID #56004

“Hey!” Mollen puffed her cheeks and raised her voice at Paulen. “You’re forgetting Abrum, he’ll save all of us, right big brother?” She asked Abrum with glee.

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 3:55 AM EST.

Comment ID #56007

It could be that Jessie was sitting on the sidelines this entire time. Listening to the conversation making it easy for her to join in with current events and discuss things in a logical reasonable manner.

But fuck that SHE’S A REBEL!

Most of the staff were hysterical. Most of the girls were crying their eyes out while the boys were all going ‘there there dear’. Only one left is what? Mister Pet detective? Like he was going to get anything done. So no Jessie was no where near those losers~

“… anything worth doin…” she pushed the door of the Records room open slowly a serious faced girl glancing around at the ruins of the room. As she stepped over the blood and messy she didn’t cry, she didn’t flinch, keeping that no-non-sense stare as she looked around.

“… the hell am I even looking for?” she thought allowed for a moment, really not knowing where to start. She knelt down a bit…eyes set on the countless pictures the photocopier had spat out, one hand brushing them aside one by one….hoping that maybe she can get a glimpse at an earlier time.

Jessie McKay July 7, 2010, 4:01 AM EST.

Comment ID #56010

Jessi finds Sandra’s files. It states: Caution, patient is deathly allergic to Almonds and Peanut Butter.The killer dropped it in a frantic shock when they heard the scream of finding the first murder.

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 4:03 AM EST.

Comment ID #56012

school house rock thread
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wfh July 7, 2010, 4:06 AM EST.

Comment ID #56014

What do you think we should do then Paulen? You and Abrum can protect us right?
She tries to stay happy and relaxed, but the realization of the victims all female has put her on edge again.

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 4:09 AM EST.

Comment ID #56019

The Scottish lass stands up straight gazing over the files quickly frowning at the discovery. “….Explains it fair enough….bettin that note be a pile of rubbish now too. No surprise in that..” She eyed Sandra’s picture in the file looking sad for just a moment.

She looks down at one of the countless pictures of Ami nearest to her feet. “… this ain’t be explaining why he’s gone and made a bloody mess ah you….” she knelled down once again to grab that very one poking it in the folder striding out of the room not long after.

Next stop? The Secretary’s office. Would assume she has one no? No better place to snoop about the recent dead then her place of work.

Jessie McKay July 7, 2010, 4:19 AM EST.

Comment ID #56020

Don’t worry, we’ll protect you.

His big goofy grin returned.

(Autoplay: Davis simply follows Paulen and the others, helping in whatever way he can. Can be controlled by Maverik or Leaving a Comment. Goodnight everyone.)

;)

Davis DeAnglo July 7, 2010, 4:23 AM EST.

Comment ID #56022

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wfh July 7, 2010, 4:30 AM EST.

Comment ID #56023

Paulo turned and announced to the entire room. “Alright everyone! We stay in groups! The larger the better! No one goes off alone for any reason! Especially the girls!” He turns back to Deanna and the others. “We need to form a small group who can help investigate… But I think it’s better if the children stay with the others.”

Paulen Layden July 7, 2010, 4:31 AM EST.

Comment ID #56024

Posted image

wfh July 7, 2010, 4:34 AM EST.

Comment ID #56025

((I’m going to bed now, play nice ignore the troll he knows that if he doesn’t play nice we won’t be friends anymore. Keep guessing and I’ll post more deaths in the morning. Night.))

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 4:44 AM EST.

Comment ID #56026

“Ok, as long as I have Abrum and Justin with me!” Mollen grabbed their arms and flailed them around, causing a weird wave-like chain-reaction among them.

(Ok, gotta sleep for now. I shall help with Paulen and Deanna’s investigation while trying to avoid directly interacting with bodies, weapons, and most things with blood on it. I stick close to and do favors for Abrum, Deanna, Justin, Paulen, and Davis, in that order.)

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 4:45 AM EST.

Comment ID #56033

I think I’d prefer to stay with the children to be honest.
She seems oddly uncomfortable about leaving the cafeteria now.
I don’t want to be wandering if if the targets really are the girls, and I don’t think I have the stomach to look over the bodies again. I’ll just watch over Justin and Mollen here.
She smiles and puts her hands on their shoulders.
Somebody needs to make sure they stay out of trouble, and the pair of them maybe too much for Abrum.

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 5:10 AM EST.

Comment ID #56040

((Auto-play, Deanna will stay by Paulen if he stays, otherwise she’ll stay around Molly and Justin. She’ll do what she can to keep their spirits high and entertained. She’ll talk and be friendly to Abrum should he strike up conversation, but otherwise she’ll be more focused on Paulen and the children.))

Deanna St. Johns July 7, 2010, 5:38 AM EST.

Comment ID #56118

I… I need to get some rest.

*She heads off to the girls’ dorm, hoping not to encounter any other corpses along the way.

Upon arriving at the girls’ dorm, Lucille crawls into her bed and falls asleep. She can be seen tossing and turning from nightmares.*

(Auto I sleep now. Night people. See above narration for behavior. If woken up, she will follow Mike around.)

Lucille Chin July 7, 2010, 8:46 AM EST.

Comment ID #56128

( I like how Leaving a Comment call Hong Kong, “Hong Cong” or is he just messing around?)

skykitty July 7, 2010, 9:33 AM EST.

Comment ID #56200

(AH JUSTIN AND ABRUM AREN’T POSTING SO I WILL)

“Don’t worry, Missy!” Mollen wagged a finger in front of her and gestured to Abbey, “He’s had worse… much worse…” Mollen’s words backfired on herself. Her happy-go-lucky attitude was wiped clean as she remembered exactly what her and her brother had to go through. In a split second, however, her mind returned to her and she stuttered, “U-Um, so what should we do? I wanna help the other good guys!”

Mollen Massri July 7, 2010, 3:16 PM EST.

Comment ID #56217

We should find something to defend ourselves with…

Spots a fire extinguisher and removes it.

Remember, the person in front of you can not only be used as a human shield, but as a weapon as well.

Demonstrates by picking up Paulen and chucking him.

Davis DeAnglo July 7, 2010, 3:30 PM EST.

Comment ID #56226

Paulen was taken by surprise as Davis tried to throw him, causing the Somali to trip and fall. He glared angrily at the dog. “Dude!” He got back to his feet and dusted himself off, deciding to ignore his friend for the time being. “I don’t know how much help I can be investigating… But I’ll do everything I can to protect you guys” He looked at the small group gathered around him. “I’ll stick with you four.”He refers to Deanne, Abrum, Mollen & Justin.

((Officially going on Auto mode now. Will stick by the group he’s allied himself with. Takes orders from Deanne & Lily first and foremost. Will help out anyone who needs it, but won’t stray too far from Deanne and the kids.))

Paulen Layden July 7, 2010, 3:45 PM EST.

Comment ID #56258

((Damn it! Over slept sorry guys.Let’s start off with a murder.))

Putting the bodies into the teachers lounge was nasty work, so one member of the unfortunate party was walking about trying to clear their head. As Lily was thinking quietly to herself, a dark figure crept up behind her. She heard a shuffle of feet and turned around to greet the figure with a smile that dropped when she saw who it was. Katherine was looking frightful and pointing weakly to the girls dorm. She would not speak a word as Lily rush up and flung one of the doors open to find…

The Fourth Murder: Rachel Tarasvo, the finder of the third murder is dead by a bullet to the chest. A shocked expression is printed on her face, unmoving and long dead. It seems the young Russian had retired to her room after discovering Mrs. Write’s body. Katherine had gone up to check on the girl, and had discovered her body.

The Area around the body is oddly spotless and no one heard the gunshot. Investigate for more clues.

Voice of Doug July 7, 2010, 4:10 PM EST.

Comment ID #56268

After having Katherine check the pulse of the young dog, she sighs and rubs her head

Oh God why another one? I guess I will go tell the children, no use keeping them in the dark now. *After a little walking, enters the Cafeteria.* Students, faculty? I have some news…It’s not good.

Lily Vanderpoint July 7, 2010, 4:17 PM EST.

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