Bittersweet Candy Bowl

i would probably delve deeper ino the past and backstories of each character and also add a few new characters which would, in time, play a part in the stories of each main character and twist the main storyline in several directions just to keep people interested. Y’know like those times when everything works out then new guys come in and kinda ruin everything but then fix it? like that

Id also have more video gaming in it. which could be a silly idea to convey personal things as well. Say Mike beats Lucy at a video game and senses something wrong (he always loses). like that.


nice question. i await my comment’s derailing

1.Guess who’s coming for a visit, that’s right Sandy. She surprises Mike at school and everyone has a freak out. But as it turns out…Mike and Sandy are perfectly fine in there relationship. They spend the weekend together and at the end Sandy goes back home. But this little trip did not only just strengthen their relationship, it took to a point in which both Mike and Sandy realize they hate being apart but Sandy can’t get out of her job to come visit any more. There will be super angst from Mike until further notice.

2. Abbey and Daisy seem to have the perfect relationship, until Augustus starts showing up more. Daisy is still nice to him and friends, but of course Abbey has tiny rage fits ever time he shows up. Daisy constantly has to tell him to stop and grow up. their relationship slowly starts to wear thin and they begin to argue constantly and make up again. They piss everyone off with this back and forth banter.

3. Paulo continues to date Jasmine but lo and behold, Jess comes up pregnant. (Not so original because of the flash back but I would still lol if this happened.) She would refuse his help claiming she could handle it on her own but he would still feel responsible and try to help her. Jasmine would stay loyal to him through the whole thing.

4. While all this super drama is going on, the pets, Molly and Justin are having their own adventures. There are funny shenanigans to help us get over the super drama in the comic. David occasionally shows up to cause trouble too.

5. Finally, Mike is tired of being constantly separated from Sandy, and in a spur-of-the- moment decision, decides to drop of of school to be with her. Everyone(Lucy, Paulo, David, Sue, Daisy, Abbey) freaks out and they follow after him, but they all only make it to downtown and get into a huge yelling fight when, ‘suprise’ moment, Rape cat shows up with a huge band of his goons. Well everyone is royally fucked now, huh? Sue tries to call for help but is smacked to the side by one of the thugs.

There is a long drawn out fight scene where Paulo has to over come his fear of barking, Augustus stops Daisy from getting involved while Abbey has his ass handed to him, David somehow manages to fight fairly well for a while before being stabbed in the stomach, signaling that Rapecat means business. While Augustus holds Daisy back, it seems like Abbey is going to be killed. She pleads with Augustus to help, that she knows he isn’t bad. Finally he lets go of Daisy and rushes to Abbey’s side, leaving the gang to help the BCB crew.

Mike and Lucy spend their time double teaming Rapecat while everything else is going on. Finally Rapecat rams Lucy’s head against a wall and she is stunned while Rapecat goes for Mike. He pulls out a knife and they spar for a bit before Mike smacks it out of his hand, only to have Rapecat pull a gun. Lucy stares in horror and does the only thing she can thing of, and jumps in front of Mike.

Suddenly, police sirens start blaring as they entire group is blocked in a alley why by the police. Apparently, McCain could tell that something bad was going to happen and went to get Help, following Sue’s frantic 5 second phone call to him. The gang is caught, everyone is rushed to the hospital.

While everyone is being checked over for minor injuries, Lucy is in surgery. Mike realizes that he couldn’t imagine life without Lucy and finally realizes that he will never stop loving her no matter how hard he tries. Paulo and Mike get into a huge fight over her, both bringing up the fact that they have other girls to each other while they try to decide who is best for Lucy before finally declaring that they would let her decide.

The doctors come out, everyone is on the edge of their seats when they tell the crew that she will be fine. The doctor will allow them to go in and visit her for a minute, but insists that she needs her rest. They go in and say hi and she declares that everyone but Mike has to leave. They complies and when the two of them are allow, she motions for Mike to approach the bed.

As he sits on the edge of it, Lucy pulls her hand back and slaps him to the floor, yelling at him. She screams that she could have died and for what? And guy who would never love her as much as she loved him? She goes into a huge rant about how stupid it was for him the run off and for him to see the pain he cause by being an idiot. She also yells at her self for being so stupidly in love with someone that she would jump in front of a bullet for them. Finally she ends the rant with her stating that she would never get so wrapped up in a guy that she would do that and vows to stop chasing after anyone and learn to be independent.

Mike leaves so she can rest and tell Paulo what she said. They decide that she wouldn’t chose either of them at this point and decide to respect her wishes. Finally after she rests up, they all head back to town.

Life goes back to as normal as possible. Everyone but Lucy goes back to school and as it turns out, Abbey and Daisy decide to go their separate ways but they will always remain close friends. Augustus disappears into the great unknown, Daisy occasionally receives a letter from him now and then. Jess has the baby and it turns out that it’s not Paulo’s. Jasmine leaves him because he is trouble than he’s worth. In fact, Tess is the only girl that stays around for the simple fact that she knows what it’s like to be left alone. Their relationship will continue to grow over time. McCain is hailed as a hero, but refuses to talk to anyone about it and stays out of the lime light. Finally Mike goes off to visit Sandy.

When he gets there, she is shocked to see him but not sad. They go for a walk where he tells her everything. They end up under a tree and as he finishes the story, Sandy says she has something to tell him. She loves him, she always will, but they can not continue the relationship. She can’t stand to be away from him but the fact remains that she loves modeling to much to give it up, and Mike has to stay in school They are still kids she says, they haven’t experienced enough of the world to truly decide what they want. They break up and go their separate ways, saying that if they every want to try again later in life they can.

Mike goes back to town and everyone suddenly decides to have a picnic to welcome Lucy back. As she arrives everyone has a good time, enjoying each others company. Lucy and Mike go off to have a chat. She apologizes to him for snapping in the hospital but she means every word she said. She really was going to try and stop being so dependent on other people. Mike tells her about Sandy and she gets mad at him and demands that they get back together. He is shocked by this news but shakes his head. They just aren’t meant to be yet. He will always love her, just as he will always love Lucy, but he is going to take a break from dating for awhile. They end the night by sitting together under the stars, no body knows what the future would hold, for any body. But there is a world of opportunity out there, and anything is possible.

HOLY SHIT, that’s long. I had to cut it into two, damn.

haha thats nice,you should make a fanfic

No everyone know the twists. And that thing would be so damn long…

aww but it sounds awesome to be honest

But it would be these huge, long stories lines that eventually at the end would lead us back to where we started and shit. The fandom would either, A. Be happy that they can imagine their own endings now sparking a never ending series of Fanfics. B. Be pissed that I left it so unresolved. C. Uncaring and would have left by now anyways.

i like octavariums

i would never make deadlines, the art would be bad, and all the jokes would fall flat. >n>

i wulde maby make it so that Mike is more confused then befor and dont know who he loves the most Lucy or Sandy and go a bit carzy and depressed until Lily slap him in the face and ask him Lily:if you love Sandy so much why did you risk your life for Lucy when the risk was that you wuld never see sandy anymore and if you dont relise it then il leave. (walk to the door) Lily: if you know the answer come to the tree that you always walk to if not you understand then il leave. (walks out) then he relise that he always loved Lucy and that he only liked Sandy cos she was always nice to him and runs to the tree but he cant see Lily any where close to the tree and know he is to late but dosent know that Lily is in the bushes watching him and thinks Lily: looks like he finnly understanded it then she sees Lucy coming up the roade and sees Mike next to the tree loking woried she walks to him and ask Lucy:what are you looking for? and Mike turns around Mike: i am looking for Lily she made me relise somthing. Lucy: oh what did you relise? (pause) Mike: i…um……a Lucy: ya what say it whait let me guess you are gone move closer to Sandy i bet that you are gone leave me well i hope you are gone live happy togehter (walks away) Mike: NO LUCY WHAIT I LOVE YOU (Lucy stops) Lucy: what? Mike: Lily made me relise that i never was in love in sandy only her kindes but i was in love in you and i have taken you for granted i hope you can forgive me. Lucy: Mike you rejected me when i told you i loved you how can you think i can forgive you for that. Mike: i…..um….i Lucy: well? Mike:i dont know. Lucy: and i will forgive you Mike. Mike: ???? Lucy: you where the only one that cared about me even when i was mean to you so you had all mean to be mad at me but that you love me make me think that if i was nicer to you we culd have done this so earlyer and for that il forgive you and yes i love you to (run to each other to hug the otter one while tears in both Mike and lucys eyes) Lily: looks like i am done here time for me to go on my jurny. ???: thanks Lily
Lily: ? (turns around) Daisy: you have done somthing that we all have tryed to do but you are the only one that have done it. Abby: you made them relise that they where ment for each otter and made them finnly admit it and that we thank you (maby not Paoul) Paoul: why culdent that be me insted of mike. Tess: oh you will have the same but not the same girl. paoul: what do you mean……oh. Yashy: i knowed it would hapen soner or later. Blur: no you dident. David: FINNLY

and thats what i hope it will end but not the comic they still got one year of high school and i whant to see how they have it when they are parents hope you like it taeshi

I wouldn’t be doing a comic because i have important things to do. LIKE LEARNING THIS DAMN BASELINE ARGGH

I would have Paulo’s dad push people down some stairs.

And then end it, because honestly, it’s YOUR comic, and it would be pretty stupid to think I could do it.

If I took over the comic I’d look way too far ahead and forget the smaller details, ultimatley finishing something far before it’s time. BCB would end prematurely, but it would end with Mike x Lucy in some fashion, Sandy would leave Mike at some point and the Paulo… See, I’m doing it again.

Oh and the art would suckkkkkk.
Neigh

@Ace, we should teamwork.

Like you do the writing and I do the art.

har har

More Mccain! McCain arc!


Also more Carter. I love those guys. Mccains no nonsense attitude would make him a perfect emotional rock for any of the female characters.

@Leaving a Comment

Goddamn. You seem to have the right mix of drama and angst. But wow, that certainly felt nice reading through it. The plot’s awesome enough to stand on its own.

Can you draw an alternate reality comic series plx? XD

Granted, if any of us were to do your story any justice, it’d take at least 3 years, given the BCB update schedule.

Me draw or Taeshi draw? Cause I could draw it but I’m to lazy. Can you guys tell that I’ve thought about the ending a bit. >.

yep

i would probably ruin it too.

a lot more dream sequences, fight scenes, emotional breakdowns and a bit where Mike hits Lucy back! revenge of man ftw

plus more video gamin using existing games. i likez tha video gamin

i wouldnt do a “leave it to the audience” ending, i would do closure for each story, then create a new story series for everyone, with new characters for COLLEGE!!!

I would make Lucy shoot Sandy with a sniper rifle, because Lucy is jealous and Sandy dies. Mike finds out and doesn’t care and goes out with Lucy. And Paulo is so shocked about this because he <3’s Lucy so he is furious, so furious that he goes and kills David while he is spying on flower girl. In the Afterlife-world Kizuna find David there and she’s soo angry because she finds out that David got murdered. But she’s happy that she can see David everyday. BUT she’s still angry so she tried to put a curse on Paulo, but she made a mistake because she is clumsy, and tried to put a curse on abbey, but instead she gave him really good luck. Because of this Abbey won the lottery and bought a castle on the moon and lived there with Daisy and they lived happily ever after.
So… Back to Lucy and Mike…. So, while they were at the park eating Yashy Sandwiches they see Carter (who loves Lucy) and askes Lucy if she wants to go on a date with him. but he said that if she said no he would blow up Paulo, who was currently banging his head on the tree in anger next to them. Lucy certainly didn’t believe him so he said okay then suddenly Paulo blew up into tiny pieces and he was all over the tree.Kizuna in the Afterlife-world was overjoyed.
Now I’m going to stop because it’s getting too random.

I would have Daisy kill Sandy, Mike then hates Daisy who, despite all beliefs, still loves Mike, so Mike goes to Lucy, Paulo goes to Daisy, somehow another Kitzuna has appeared for David, the nice guy who was with Daisy ( I forget his name), finally gets with Tess, and McCain goes to Sue, but they all go on a holiday to celebrate the end of this angst and in a series of events strangely like Final Destination (1/2/3/4), they all die except McCain who goes to be a S.H.I.E.L.D agent like the one from iron man but Paulo turns out to be Satan (never trusted him) and does as he will with the rest of the gang.As for the extras they have a massive Orgy and dies from exhaustion and goes to hell where they find out about Paulo.

If I were in charge of the comic, I would try and explore Augustus’s character more. I wouldn’t have Mike and Lucy get together (yet, at least) because his relationship with Sandy is one of the major conflicts, and it’s driving the plot right now. Otherwise, I really can’t think of anything I would do.

oh i forgot my story hapens 3 days after the school play when mike and lucy kiss and mike feel somthing diffrent that he never feelt befor

They won’t kiss, I’d bet my life on it.

To be honest, first thing I’d do is have Sandy dump Mike and then follow that with 3 chapters on Mike’s angst and Lucy’s ever growing “Love” for Paulo(Meaning she’s using Paulo to get back at Mike) Then I would end it there because I would not make the story good enough so I would give up on BCB so I would end it with Mike’s suicide, followed by Lucy’s suicide because she feels like it’s her fault. A very sad end…



I’m Dead F***ing Serious.

if i was incharge i have paulos day dream is real

if you wanna know what would happen if im in charge. Just check out that comic I was doing. I’m sure you will notice something about it.

Sandy becomes a more present and more important character than just an obstacle, interpret that however you will, but she has such a well fleshed out character that it seems a waste to just use her for a plot device.

I think Paulo should stay with Tess, only because I don’t really see the social chemistry of any of the other characters realistically working out. It’s also always heart warming to see the goodhearted poor guy hook up with the naughty rich girl >

Daisy and abbey are pretty much built for eachother, can’t see that changing much. their relationship is probably the only one that will last.

Now for the chopping block: I don’t like david… I think he should hook up with kizuna and the both of them move out or something. It’s not that he didn’t have his moments, but it’s pretty low-brow humor that gets old or in the case of when he molested lucy after mike had just fallen off a cliff, inexcuseably distasteful (still thought it was sort of funny, but who would let someone like that hang out with them? I mean that’s a really shitty thing to do, you know.) So I think he’s just kind of dried out. Kizuna could potetially be saved, I mean she’s not a huge moron like dave, but if you take one out then you have to take the other…

Except for the fact that SHE IS DEAD. But hey, if David likes necrophilia….

what i would do is have something bad happen to david all the others not help exect that dog chick who likes him
then we would get that pairing… not to serious
then i would put paulo alone for a while, giving up on the ‘i’m going to fuck every girl thing and become an unnonoced boyfriend to jasmine
then i would put mike and lucy back together
yeah i’m not very helpful but i’m the sort of person who like everyone to have someone… if there main charaters that is

There are two arcs that I would want to do first, the first being CC’s (Confrontation cat) arc. Him, the dog guy and Augustus, cornering them in some alleyway, Abbey learns what happened last time and beats the crap out of all 3 of them. j/k. Abbey does sem to know his stuff however, and with so much of his past unknown, perhaps he was part of the “Bad ass” crowd before middle school.

Second would be the Sandy arc. I dont mind either way what happens between them, as long as it is dramatic ad heart wreching. It could even cause more drama than a dramatic knife fighting battle between Abbey and CC.

Btw soz if both ideas are already said, tl;dr since I had about 5 mins to read the thread and respond.

if i had been in charge i would like to put in little arcs some of that maverik’s fanfics, as the “love me”, that one canon with sandy and mike alone in a night and some others…

For the rest, i might keep the story line adding a bit more sandy and mike in a intense distance relationship…no more to say (i run out my ideas…sadly…sadly..)

Animate it.

PauloXLucy

PauloXLucy

PauloXLucy

MikeXMcCain (kidding)

Carter attempts to kill Mike for hurting Lucy and ends up in an insane asylum.

PauloXLucy.

I think this is the fifth time I see MikexMcCain being mentioned.

I’ve mentioned it 3 times personally

well…

i would change the comic to full color.
go back to massive vote initiative system to up popularity.
start tieing up loose end,slowly fadeing out some of the minor characters and go nowhere plotlines.

i would leve daisy with abby,brakeing them up would be to painfull.
and turn the rest of the show into a kind of “coming of age novle”.
with the ending foucseing less on who hooks up with whom,and more about the main cast mtureing,reaching realizations about their lives and comeing to turms with their emotions.
basicaly ending the awkewerd teenage pahse of their life and comeing into adulthood.

paulo,up till now,has matured most in the series.
he changed from a horny,ubre macho teen,who chases girls to make people think well of him.
into someone who is looking for actual love and companionship.
but in the end,i would have him takes some down time from girl chseing
and doomd relationships and decide to slow down a bit.

david will stay true to comic charctar tredition and end up with some girl who loves him in spite of his flaws.

daisy and abby live happiely ever after.

and mike and lucy,after many ups and downs (both together and apart)
do some soul serching,deal with their emotional problems
and decide to give a relationship an honest try.
with the serise ending without the audiance knowing if the relationship worked out or not.


that’s a general outline of what i would do,but i doubt its nearly as good as what your planing.

ah, i almost forget!! I would put to myself a green or gray textbox…

I would make Amaya kill off most of the rest of the characters and then end up in a stable relationship with Sue. No more angsty Mike, bitchy Lucy or pervy Paulo. Just the best couple in the comic

have it end in either one of the school days blood endings.

to be honest if i were in charge it would be alot like silent hill….full of dark eerie metaphorical stuff and shit like that

I would make everybody wear sweet-Lolita and gothic-lolita dresses. Even the male characters will have to wear it >

If I had power over this comic, at least for one day, I’d either kill off Sandy, or bring her back to Mike.

mike-lucy-paulo-yu-gi-oh-final-cat-daisy-mccain

CONGA LINE.

(I expect such a feat to last less than two seconds.)

I quite like that idea. ^_^

… violent sword (or other sharp pointy instrament) Battles…
death to the generic back ground characters !!!… they will be back anyway

Kinda late to be answering this, but I want to anyways.

I think I would think of an arc for each main character, focusing on their problems, while leaving the others relatively out of the spot, and then, after all the arcs, maybe throw in some problem they all needed to solve together.

Oh, for Mike’s arc, I’d definitely make Sandy go back to live in their town.
Actually, I really want that happening. Ghost Sandy no more!

After that… I’d have to think about it, when I got to it.

Michael gets Lucy and Sandy. Threesome, HOOOO!

Actually, I think Darkly’s idea is good :3

It would suddenly get dark.

Very dark.

Confrontation 2.0!