Bittersweet Candy Bowl

“I’m not pregnant….” Lucy said, smiling at Paulo, leaning against a tree in the park.

“That’s great!! But in a way…this kinda kept us together the past couple weeks…I almost wish…” Paulo shook his head and smiled wide at Lucy. “No, it’s really great news!!”

Lucy nodded slightly, blushing. “This doesn’t mean we…need to stop hanging out…”

“We hang out all the time, Lucy. Why would we stop?” Paulo smiled wide, trying to lighten the mood.

“Th-that’s not what I mean, Paulo….” Lucy looked down at the ground. “You know I’ve liked you for a long time…and even though I almost messed everything up because I went crazy…”

“I know….but it’s fine, really! We’re cool,” Paulo said, smiling.

“Paulo…you’re such an idiot,” Lucy giggled.

Paulo looked confused as Lucy turned around and looked at the sky. “Wh-wha….why?!?!”

Lucy turned and stuck her tongue out at Paulo. “If you catch me, I’ll tell you!” She turned and started running.

Tricky, you are my favorite right now.

Yaaay motivation. I’ll have more out tonight (I get off work at 11pm T.T)

Now I want to draw another comic I’ll never post. -_-

Very cute. c: Can’t wait for more~

Interesting start. I’m looking forward to more.

I like the setup. That’s about all I can say though since there’s very little to go with thus far ^^;

Paulo seems a tad dense here, but hey. Maybe he’s just teasing her and I misinterperated haha.

It might be worth writing larger chunks and putting them down as chapters etc. It’s just nicer to read a big helping of a story, rather than a bite sized chunk.

I got kinda anxious to get what I had out. The other installments will be larger (i hope)

L-larger!?

<3

*Sigh*
Kaxbe…. *Shakes head* get your horny-ass mind out of the gutter and smarten up. Tricky could be younger than me (and I’m 15)

Get YOUR mind out of the gutter. I was referring to the stories.

yes larger, cuz we all know we all like em big! wait….

PLEASE. I’m 19.

^Tayvin has acquired fan. Fan has been added to inventory.

*cue Zelda item receive music*

@Gabe
I’m sorry, I forgot that this thread was NSFW. My memory can be so bad at times.
@Taeshi
I thought you knew a while back. Does my age have something to do with my writing?
@Hysteria
Huh, the author of BCB is a fan of a fan of BCB. Interesting…*smiles*

Fxx it I decided I’m going to have short installments for suspense!!! But I’ll have them out kinda often.

“Whaa-?!?” Paulo stared after her for a second then started running.

Lucy dashed through the park quickly. ‘He’s not as quick as Mike, so I think I can win…’ she thought to herself, smirking.

Suddenly she looked up to see Paulo nearby, hopping from tree to tree. “Hey babe!” he said, laughing and winking.

Lucy smiled and dashed into the forest, dodging trees but speeding up even faster. She was heading deeper into the forest, but Paulo was hot on her tail.

“I swear I’ll catch you Lucy!” Paulo yelled.

Lucy looked back and smirked. “Good luck!”

Paulo suddenly had a look of horror on his face. “Lucy watch out!!!!!!!” he screamed, but not in time. Lucy looked forward to find herself plummeting into a lake.

Ah, well educated youth.

We’re not doomed after all.

“Remember kids, punctuation makes the difference between “Helping you Uncle Jack off a horse” and “Helping your uncle jack off a horse”.

I think that you screwed that one up. It’s supposed to be ‘Helping your uncle, Jack, off a horse’ and ‘helping your uncle jack off a horse’.

No, Uncle Jack still works. It’s a title, which is defined as the capitalization of Uncle. Like Dad, versus my dad.

The three comments above me made my day.

Damn, first it’s Mav’s little story and now this.
What’s with these cats who can’t look ahead? xD

And then a wild Mike appears! Mike uses pawnch! It is super effective!

“Only I can save her, even though I am currently in a long-term relationship with a character that is almost-completely flat and undeveloped (for now)!” Says the cat to the other cat

Then Paulo gets pissed and bitch-slaps the crap out of Mike, while Lucy learns to face her fear of water directly (spoilers: she doesn’t succeed).

Zachary’s supposed to appear somewhere in there, but then I forgot. So he doesn’t appear in there. Or maybe Zachary saves Lucy’s ass and they totally have unprotected sex after that (Zachary with Lucy, not with her ass… well, maybe a little bit).

uh oh, a fanstory

<.<
>.>

*backs away slowly*

im not risking it again.

THEN A SKELETON POPS OUT! -waves arms.-

Lucy’s eyes fluttered open to find herself wrapped tight in a blanket, still slightly damp. She looked around but her eyes were still waking up. “M-Mike……”

“Tch….what’s Mike gotta do with anything?” Paulo smirked. “You know I’m the one to save you, babe!”

“Paulo…..” Lucy started to tear up. “I’m sorry I said that….it’s just reflex when I’m scared…..” she hiccupped, trying not to cry.

Paulo got up and sat next to her, kissing her forehead lightly. “Lucy, shush. I saved you, and that’s what matters. But that still counts as catching you too, ya know!”

Lucy slid her hand around his neck and pulled his head down towards her. “I love you Paulo. I really do,” she said quietly, then pressed his lips to hers, softly at first. Paulo smiled into the kiss and laid down next to her, deepening the kiss as he did.

“I love you too, Lucy. I really do,” Paulo whispered softly. He ran his hand across her body gently, stroking her fur lovingly. “I never want us to end…”

Lucy placed his hand over her heart. “Then lets never end, Paulo,” she whispered softly.

He smiled wide. “I…I know I’m not too good at sex yet, but….I looked up stuff online, ya know, to make it better for you….”

“Paulo….you’re fine,” Lucy giggled. “I thin-“ Paulo cut her off with a finger to her lips.

“Just….shh,” he said. He slid his hand to her breast and watched her face as he massaged lightly. She started to grow redder and closed her eyes to enjoy the sensation. He smiled and nuzzled the fur on her stomach softly, slowly easing his way down.

He reached between her legs and she shut them tightly. “Wha-what are…..” Lucy stammered.

“Just trust me, ok?” Paulo said gently, then eased her legs open wide. He sniffed the air and smiled, admiring her sticky sweetness. Lucy clutched her arms to her chest, biting her lip gently as she watched him. He flashed a confident smile to her then leaned in, flicking his tongue lightly against the soft fur covering her outer lips. A light moan escaped Lucy’s lips and Paulo smiled, more emboldened.

He traced his fingers up and down her slit before opening it gently and slipped his tongue past her lips, resting for a moment on her warm aroused clit. He started to lick and lap at it slightly, then slid his tongue down lower, sliding it into her wet hole.

“Sc-scr….scratchy tongue….” Lucy moaned, trying to keep quiet even though nobody was home.

Paulo simply smiled and pressed his mouth onto her slit, licking and sucking here and there. It wasn’t long before Lucy was gripping the sheets, and soon after she screamed out, gripping Paulo’s head between her legs, her toes curling in her first intense orgasm of her life.

ROFL

And now the NSFW rating has a purpose

Shouldn’t Paulo still be a super stud in this story? I mean… It takes place in the ‘dream’ continuity, which means he never would have had sex with Rachel & Jessica, and he never would have recieved that blow to his ego.

Also, if it is in that cannon, I’m surprised just how easily they got down to business. I’d assume they’d be a little more unsure about the whole sex thing after having JUST gotten through a pregnancy scare.

Ok. I’m done nit picking.

The sex scene isn’t half bad. Very vivid in it’s details. Though you do tend to use the same word a few times in quick succession which is distracting (Gripped is an example).

I await the next snippit

Everyone is nervous about their first/second time. And they’re in the romantic mood cuz he just saved her, again. It’s how it goes in my mind!!

Plus I’ll be addressing the pregnancy scare issue.

And I know, I tend to do that. I’m working on it X.x;;

I shouldn’t be here…but I have to just say that Paulo’s dad has to come out of nowhere and say “We all saw what happened when you did that”
*runs away*

Needs more MOTORBOAT

Boy…open the basement door.

This is where Paulo’s dad comes in and kicks her into a river to teach Paulo a lesson.

I swear I’m gonna have a new piece out soon ;.; work sucks.