Question: where is the script? B/
bittersweet candy bowl movie AUDITIONS ARE OPEN (but you must fight for the part)
- Meleeman
- Member
Comedy, on 07 June 2011 - 04:48 AM, said:
I'd be happy to voice for you. I'm not too sure if I'm all that good, but I can do an decent variety of tones.
i'd like to see what you can do. i don't have a set of lines which you can read from but you pick the characters you'd like to try out for and when you send me your voice acting i might play with it a little and see if i can work with it. My e-mail address is as follows. Meleeman01@live.com. send me a WAV. or Mp3 file. no. AAC. Nothing else. when you do your voice acting i guess you should include reactional sounds, like uh! hmm. or ah. if you are voicing a main character, of course i will expect more out of you. good luck.
darkwolf328, on 07 June 2011 - 05:15 AM, said:
Question: where is the script? B/
do you mean audition scripts? there are no audition scripts. it's just what you think the character you are trying out for should sound like, and act like. hell you could make up a script if you wanted to so long as it fits the character. just include reactional sounds such as uh! hmm... or oh. even if you don't make the character i could end up putting you for a different character. i guess i figured since all i need is to hear some voice acting i could just sort the actors/actresses to fit each character, and if that doesn't work i'll find 1 or 2 people to voice every character using audacity.
My link
This post has been edited by Meleeman: 07 June 2011 - 05:23 AM
- #52
- 07 June 2011 - 05:34 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
lt_amazil, on 07 June 2011 - 06:02 AM, said:
the animation was okay but the voice for yashy in my opinion was too artificial
well they are only there for timing purposes. i'm not planning on voice acting. i could do some characters maybe without changing my voice but i'm not sure so i do all of them for now for timing purposes and for my own enjoyment.
- #54
- 07 June 2011 - 06:25 AM
- darkwolf328
- Special Ed
Banned 
Amizil HOW MANY ZOMBIE BOWL THREAD ARE THERE!
- #55
- 07 June 2011 - 06:26 AM
- lt_amazil
- i agree, and believe everything migrant just said!
Member 
competing? what do you mean, we are not challenging anything and this was the restart rather of the other i made.
also you make it out like i'm naming it like this for publicity. it's just that i'd rather not stray too far away from the original name of the original videos
also you make it out like i'm naming it like this for publicity. it's just that i'd rather not stray too far away from the original name of the original videos
- #57
- 07 June 2011 - 06:54 AM
- darkwolf328
- Special Ed
Banned
Because it looks like the movies about Zombies. Both the movie and story have the same title, so they look linked
- #59
- 07 June 2011 - 01:41 PM
- Meleeman
- Member
lt_amazil, on 07 June 2011 - 06:54 AM, said:
competing? what do you mean, we are not challenging anything and this was the restart rather of the other i made.
also you make it out like i'm naming it like this for publicity. it's just that i'd rather not stray too far away from the original name of the original videos
also you make it out like i'm naming it like this for publicity. it's just that i'd rather not stray too far away from the original name of the original videos
okay im sorry about the publicity thing. and what was the restart of what you were working on? also am i animating the right stuff or do i need a storyboard from you to start animating? cause now i'm confused as to what i'm supposed to do.
Wolf, on 07 June 2011 - 11:18 AM, said:
This is not going to end well.
how do you know?
- #60
- 07 June 2011 - 03:59 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Hey, it's me again!
Well I'd like to give it a shot and well, I have a deep voice and I wonder which character I'd sound like the most (you see, I don't mind which character to play).
And so I'll be recording (tomorrow as I have enterprise day on thursday and friday) the audition and sending it to the 2 e-mails in the comments.
Well I'd like to give it a shot and well, I have a deep voice and I wonder which character I'd sound like the most (you see, I don't mind which character to play).
And so I'll be recording (tomorrow as I have enterprise day on thursday and friday) the audition and sending it to the 2 e-mails in the comments.
This post has been edited by BonBonToro: 07 June 2011 - 09:30 PM
- #61
- 07 June 2011 - 07:36 PM
- Meleeman
- Member
BonBonToro, on 07 June 2011 - 07:36 PM, said:
Hey, it's me again!
Well I'd like to give it a shot and well, I have a deep voice and I wonder which character I'd sound like the most (you see, I don't mind which character to play).
And so I'll be recording (tomorrow as I have enterprise day on thursday and friday) the audition and sending it to the 2 e-mails in the comments.
Well I'd like to give it a shot and well, I have a deep voice and I wonder which character I'd sound like the most (you see, I don't mind which character to play).
And so I'll be recording (tomorrow as I have enterprise day on thursday and friday) the audition and sending it to the 2 e-mails in the comments.
oh good.
- #62
- 07 June 2011 - 11:04 PM
- lt_amazil
- i agree, and believe everything migrant just said!
Member
Meleeman, on 07 June 2011 - 03:59 PM, said:
okay im sorry about the publicity thing. and what was the restart of what you were working on? also am i animating the right stuff or do i need a storyboard from you to start animating? cause now i'm confused as to what i'm supposed to do.
you're supposed to animate the comic i don't know how to make a storyboard but i think you can do it seeing as the comic itself should act as a storyboard. and the original one is resting in the honor roll.
- #65
- 08 June 2011 - 06:35 AM
- darkwolf328
- Special Ed
Banned
Are you both the only people that have done something to make this?
- #66
- 08 June 2011 - 06:42 AM
- Comedy
- Member
Meleeman, on 07 June 2011 - 05:34 AM, said:
Comedy, on 07 June 2011 - 04:48 AM, said:
I'd be happy to voice for you. I'm not too sure if I'm all that good, but I can do an decent variety of tones.
i'd like to see what you can do. i don't have a set of lines which you can read from but you pick the characters you'd like to try out for and when you send me your voice acting i might play with it a little and see if i can work with it. My e-mail address is as follows. Meleeman01@live.com. send me a WAV. or Mp3 file. no. AAC. Nothing else. when you do your voice acting i guess you should include reactional sounds, like uh! hmm. or ah. if you are voicing a main character, of course i will expect more out of you. good luck.
I'll get to it as soon as I have the time, probably in a day or so.
- #67
- 08 June 2011 - 07:11 AM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Oops, I was meant to give the audition today but it seems my computer mic is acting up, but it'll probably work tomorrow. Sorry for the inconvenience! >_<"
- #68
- 08 June 2011 - 10:35 PM
I wasn't here for the first attempt either so I'm willing to give this a try. If it succeeds I'd love to be a part of it!
- #69
- 08 June 2011 - 11:21 PM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member 
And if it fails you'd like to pretend you were never involved? 
- #70
- 09 June 2011 - 12:27 AM
- Codysseus
- Member
I would like to do something... :3
My voice is moderately deep, but I could change my voice to match a certain character (Though not girl characters).
What should I do to be part of this, i.e. auditions?
My voice is moderately deep, but I could change my voice to match a certain character (Though not girl characters).
What should I do to be part of this, i.e. auditions?
This post has been edited by Codysseus: 09 June 2011 - 12:33 AM
- #71
- 09 June 2011 - 12:33 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
darkwolf328, on 08 June 2011 - 06:42 AM, said:
Are you both the only people that have done something to make this?
pretty much. it started out as me being sorry for him that everyone hated his original videos. when i saw the idea on the forums i was like, hey, i've got animation software and i'd like to get some more experience animating so why not? i'd also love to get more feedback on my video so far. i'm experimenting with a different animation software tonight, and i'll probably be working a little on my comic.
keninja86, on 08 June 2011 - 11:21 PM, said:
I wasn't here for the first attempt either so I'm willing to give this a try. If it succeeds I'd love to be a part of it!
what would you consider success? what you say could point me in the right direction.
- #72
- 09 June 2011 - 03:40 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
Codysseus, on 09 June 2011 - 12:33 AM, said:
I would like to do something... :3
My voice is moderately deep, but I could change my voice to match a certain character (Though not girl characters).
What should I do to be part of this, i.e. auditions?
My voice is moderately deep, but I could change my voice to match a certain character (Though not girl characters).
What should I do to be part of this, i.e. auditions?
there's plenty of things you can do. i would like help in the coloring of the pages/animating department. since i am inexperienced, and i also do other crap as well besides animating and drawing.
A baritone voice? that could be useful. so long as i think your voice is close to a character, and your acting skills are good, i will probably accept you since i will also be editing the sound.
Here's what you need to know to get started:
my email address is as follows: Meleeman01@live.com
send me the files in Wav. or Mp3. Wav. preferably.
in the event you are accepted i will hand you a detailed script that is timed in seconds of what you need to say and how you should say it, ofcourse theres room to improvise and i will accept improvazations so long as the changes arent drastic and i have to spend half an hour redoing motion tweens.
make sure you have a good mic and try to take out as much white noise as you can. i can only do so much with audacity.
thats all. good luck
- #73
- 09 June 2011 - 03:53 AM
- BonBonToro
- Member
LOL For any other people who want to know what I sound like, here's the link.
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
- #74
- 09 June 2011 - 10:35 PM
- darkwolf328
- Special Ed
Banned
I would help. But my IPod would have to be my recorder.
And I don't have a Gmail. It's the only way I would be able to send it.
And I don't have a Gmail. It's the only way I would be able to send it.
- #75
- 09 June 2011 - 11:31 PM
Well I don't want to go off starting to define success. I will define fail however. Fail would be more of a we start and then it just kinda drifts to the back of our minds, or we don't have enough people to finish it1, or we don't have the will power to finish recording everything and just give up.
1. By this I think that we should be able to round up at least 1 person per main character, and if one person must do more than one voice they shouldn't have to do more than 2.
Also mostly by what I said before was just that I wanted to help out in any way I can. I have some recording software and experience in such things although idk if it would be of any help to you.
1. By this I think that we should be able to round up at least 1 person per main character, and if one person must do more than one voice they shouldn't have to do more than 2.
Also mostly by what I said before was just that I wanted to help out in any way I can. I have some recording software and experience in such things although idk if it would be of any help to you.
- #76
- 10 June 2011 - 01:29 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
BonBonToro, on 09 June 2011 - 10:35 PM, said:
LOL For any other people who want to know what I sound like, here's the link.
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
WTF was that?! jk jk. okay for your normal voice it reminds me of Italy from "hetalia" with a slight british accent which by american standards makes you like harry potter. lol. fuck iddunno where to put you. i'm gonna check my list of characters i need and i will get back to you in a few minutes.
- #77
- 10 June 2011 - 06:07 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 06:07 AM, said:
BonBonToro, on 09 June 2011 - 10:35 PM, said:
LOL For any other people who want to know what I sound like, here's the link.
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
WTF was that?! jk jk. okay for your normal voice it reminds me of Italy from "hetalia" with a slight british accent which by american standards makes you like harry potter. lol. fuck iddunno where to put you. i'm gonna check my list of characters i need and i will get back to you in a few minutes.
alright. i've given it some thought. i think i could put you as paulo or yashi if i changed your voice. your little boy imppressed me the most. reason for me choosing paulo is cause it just now occurred to me that they are still in middleschool. i might be wrong, but i think you might have potential. I'm gonna send you some lines straight from the comic both Yashi and Paulo. maybe some others but at the moment those seem to be what fits you. unless you think you could do mike. I'll include mike as well. i'd also like you to try an american accent if you can lol. i'm gonna design a script. oh and by the way, i'm doing most of the work. Amazil's just supervising. have you sent your audition to amazil as well?
Volgrand, on 10 June 2011 - 06:25 AM, said:
You have a funny voice 
. In fact I can imagine you voiceacting blur
. In fact I can imagine you voiceacting bluryoure a genius.
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 06:33 AM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 06:07 AM, said:
BonBonToro, on 09 June 2011 - 10:35 PM, said:
LOL For any other people who want to know what I sound like, here's the link.
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
If you've listened to it already, yes I know, it's pretty cringy
WTF was that?! jk jk. okay for your normal voice it reminds me of Italy from "hetalia" with a slight british accent which by american standards makes you like harry potter. lol. fuck iddunno where to put you. i'm gonna check my list of characters i need and i will get back to you in a few minutes.
alright. i've given it some thought. i think i could put you as paulo or yashi if i changed your voice. your little boy imppressed me the most. reason for me choosing paulo is cause it just now occurred to me that they are still in middleschool. i might be wrong, but i think you might have potential. I'm gonna send you some lines straight from the comic both Yashi and Paulo. maybe some others but at the moment those seem to be what fits you. unless you think you could do mike. I'll include mike as well. i'd also like you to try an american accent if you can lol. i'm gonna design a script. oh and by the way, i'm doing most of the work. Amazil's just supervising. have you sent your audition to amazil as well?
Volgrand, on 10 June 2011 - 06:25 AM, said:
You have a funny voice . In fact I can imagine you voiceacting blur
. In fact I can imagine you voiceacting bluryoure a genius.
I'm adding blur to the script.
- #79
- 10 June 2011 - 06:34 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
Note: this script will be public even though i have designed it for bontoro. i guess since i'm making it public i might as well add the other characters as i go.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
- #80
- 10 June 2011 - 07:23 AM
- Volgrand
- Member
Well, there is my voice.....
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
- #81
- 10 June 2011 - 07:24 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
Volgrand, on 10 June 2011 - 07:24 AM, said:
Well, there is my voice.....
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
POOOODDDLE!
yes it's perfect a spanish accent for that poodle dude.
- #82
- 10 June 2011 - 07:35 AM
- Meleeman
- Member
u know just for the hell of it amazil i'm going to audition as well. i'll let you judge my voice.
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
godamn we need to find some chicks.
Volgrand, on 10 June 2011 - 07:37 AM, said:
.... thanks I guess?
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
godamn we need to find some chicks.
- #84
- 10 June 2011 - 07:42 AM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:23 AM, said:
Note: this script will be public even though i have designed it for bontoro. i guess since i'm making it public i might as well add the other characters as i go.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
Thanks for the lines Meeleman!
I was a bit scared that I didn't get the pick but looking back I feel happy now!!
I'll get right onto the lines tonight and I'll send it to you from e-mail and sending a link here!
Also, yeah, I gave my audition to lt-amazil as well so don't worry about whether I sent it to him or not!
- #86
- 10 June 2011 - 03:24 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 03:29 PM, said:
alright i'll see if i can make more progress on the video today.
Have fun and I hope it goes well!!
- #88
- 10 June 2011 - 03:45 PM
- Junior Boomer
- BCI Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:42 AM, said:
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
- #89
- 10 June 2011 - 06:59 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Junior Boomer, on 10 June 2011 - 06:59 PM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:42 AM, said:
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
Yay, criticism about my voice lol
Well, yeah I do have an accent as I am Chinese you see but I live in the UK :P
But I'll try the lines and see what the outcomes are! :D
Oh yeah, I don't live in America so I'm not sure what 8th grade would be over here :/
But I do know that I am 3 years into High School!!
This post has been edited by BonBonToro: 10 June 2011 - 08:12 PM
- #90
- 10 June 2011 - 07:59 PM
- Meleeman
- Member
yeah if you can try to eliminate your accent. it's okay if it's slightly there, i still think i can use you. i've heard you do your little boy impressions and when you did one of them your accent wasn't noticeable.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
you voice acted for Darkspeeds right?
Junior Boomer, on 10 June 2011 - 06:59 PM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:42 AM, said:
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
you voice acted for Darkspeeds right?
- #91
- 10 June 2011 - 08:19 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 08:19 PM, said:
yeah if you can try to eliminate your accent. it's okay if it's slightly there, i still think i can use you. i've heard you do your little boy impressions and when you did one of them your accent wasn't noticeable.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
you voice acted for Darkspeeds right?
Junior Boomer, on 10 June 2011 - 06:59 PM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:42 AM, said:
i'm sorry but i don't really think i could use you for any of the characters you tried out for. i'm sorry but i never really imagined the main bcb character's voices to have a spanish accent.
Yet, no offense to bonbontoro, he has a pretty noticeable accent that would not fit with any of the BCB characters in the slightest considering, you know, they have lived in America all their lives. Also note that his voice may be a bit too high pitched, even for an 8th grader.
you voice acted for Darkspeeds right?
Unfortunately I haven't acted there because I was probably new at the time with the forum and once I found out gthe auditions were over for it I was a bit depressed
But seeing this made me think, "An opportunity!!" So yeah.
Unless your talking to Junior_Boomer then ignore this lol
This post has been edited by BonBonToro: 10 June 2011 - 08:23 PM
- #92
- 10 June 2011 - 08:22 PM
- Junior Boomer
- BCI Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 08:19 PM, said:
yeah if you can try to eliminate your accent. it's okay if it's slightly there, i still think i can use you. i've heard you do your little boy impressions and when you did one of them your accent wasn't noticeable.
I still noticed the accent, but if you're willing to let that slide, then how do you feel about Paulo, one of the more masculine characters in the series, having that high of a voice.
- #93
- 10 June 2011 - 08:27 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:35 AM, said:
Volgrand, on 10 June 2011 - 07:24 AM, said:
Well, there is my voice.....
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
bcb movie voices.wma
Look at it fast, before I am way too ashamed to erase that file from the net
POOOODDDLE!
yes it's perfect a spanish accent for that poodle dude.
Now that you mention that, I'm listening it now and now I can picture that teacher once I listen, no offence to you Volgrand but I like that Spanish accent of yours!!
- #94
- 10 June 2011 - 08:32 PM
- Meleeman
- Member
Junior Boomer, on 10 June 2011 - 08:27 PM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 08:19 PM, said:
yeah if you can try to eliminate your accent. it's okay if it's slightly there, i still think i can use you. i've heard you do your little boy impressions and when you did one of them your accent wasn't noticeable.
I still noticed the accent, but if you're willing to let that slide, then how do you feel about Paulo, one of the more masculine characters in the series, having that high of a voice.
he never really struck me as masculine, i guess i see him differently. i haven't officially chose him yet, i'm just going to see if i can use him. btw the question was directed at you. you did voice act for darkspeeds correct?
- #95
- 10 June 2011 - 08:34 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 08:34 PM, said:
Junior Boomer, on 10 June 2011 - 08:27 PM, said:
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 08:19 PM, said:
yeah if you can try to eliminate your accent. it's okay if it's slightly there, i still think i can use you. i've heard you do your little boy impressions and when you did one of them your accent wasn't noticeable.
I still noticed the accent, but if you're willing to let that slide, then how do you feel about Paulo, one of the more masculine characters in the series, having that high of a voice.
he never really struck me as masculine, i guess i see him differently. i haven't officially chose him yet, i'm just going to see if i can use him. btw the question was directed at you. you did voice act for darkspeeds correct?
I think he did and made it in as a character. I'm not sure, I have a vague image in my mind with text say [character's name] : Junior_Boomer.
It may be my imagination though :/
- #96
- 10 June 2011 - 08:41 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 07:23 AM, said:
Note: this script will be public even though i have designed it for bontoro. i guess since i'm making it public i might as well add the other characters as i go.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
yashi: looks like it's time to clear the runway chirps. Ready... LIFTOFF! mayday... mayday...
mike: you okay? (flushes) hm. skateboarding is not allowed here paulo! hah. yeah! she said you were in a bit of a rush, like you were looking for something. So did you find it? good. hey, you should come hang out with me. i could get you an ice cream... though i guess it's not that much...
paulo: hey babe! forgive me? c'mon hop on! don't worry your lover's got you. Cry me a river pansy, give 'er back. hey! lemmo go ass hole!
Blur:(he's not on the chapter i'm currently working on, but volgarand is a genius and he helped me with my decisions. inderectly.)
oh just perform coetus already please! hey ceiling buddy! see ya.
Here it is!
MediaFire - Online Space for your documents, photos, videos, and music.
Well, I'm sorry it's 17 minutes long but I've been going a bit off topic which is where you guys come in and pick out parts of my tone and say it may fit with other characters!
But yeah, I find it a bit cringy though listening to it ;P
Also refer to the lines up top for the puctuation that'll effect the voice and etc.
I have asked some questions in the .wma file and I'd like to hear your responces and criticism!
Criticism meaning the kind that'll help me become better at this aspect of drama rather than saying "Oh! You're $#!T at this!" and all that as I'd find it discouraging and I'd be an upset boy listening to all the junk like that
Well, happy hearing!...?
Hmmmm
By the way, I haven't listened to the final thing and I don't want to try it
This post has been edited by BonBonToro: 10 June 2011 - 09:46 PM
- #98
- 10 June 2011 - 09:44 PM
- Meleeman
- Member
okay so your voice acting for yashi wasn't good, i haven't messed with your voice yet but if thats your final audition i will stick with my edited voice. the energy in her voice was lost. mike's pitch was good. i could see him talking like that in my head but i think junior boomer was right about the accent, it really does make a difference. paulo sounded awesome as a british dude the first time, i didn't like "hey babe" part. too monotone. the rest was brilliant. if only you could learn an american accent, dammit, i would hand you the paulo part. blur was the best. it just fit you perfectly even if you weren't consistant with the tone. i still think thats what blur should sound like. if you'd like to speak like an american pronounce your "O"s as ah.not oh. like when you said got. you don't want your throat to be open, and your lips should be wide. Gaht, not Goht.
you need to put more energy in your voice. thats the main thing.
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 11:00 PM, said:
okay so your voice acting for yashi wasn't good, i haven't messed with your voice yet but if thats your final audition i will stick with my edited voice. the energy in her voice was lost. mike's pitch was good. i could see him talking like that in my head but i think junior boomer was right about the accent, it really does make a difference. paulo sounded awesome as a british dude the first time, i didn't like "hey babe" part. too monotone. the rest was brilliant. if only you could learn an american accent, dammit, i would hand you the paulo part. blur was the best. it just fit you perfectly even if you weren't consistant with the tone. i still think thats what blur should sound like. if you'd like to speak like an american pronounce your "O"s as ah.not oh. like when you said got. you don't want your throat to be open, and your lips should be wide. Gaht, not Goht.
you need to put more energy in your voice. thats the main thing.
- #99
- 10 June 2011 - 11:03 PM
- BonBonToro
- Member
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 11:03 PM, said:
okay so your voice acting for yashi wasn't good, i haven't messed with your voice yet but if thats your final audition i will stick with my edited voice. the energy in her voice was lost. mike's pitch was good. i could see him talking like that in my head but i think junior boomer was right about the accent, it really does make a difference. paulo sounded awesome as a british dude the first time, i didn't like "hey babe" part. too monotone. the rest was brilliant. if only you could learn an american accent, dammit, i would hand you the paulo part. blur was the best. it just fit you perfectly even if you weren't consistant with the tone. i still think thats what blur should sound like. if you'd like to speak like an american pronounce your "O"s as ah.not oh. like when you said got. you don't want your throat to be open, and your lips should be wide. Gaht, not Goht.
you need to put more energy in your voice. thats the main thing.
Meleeman, on 10 June 2011 - 11:00 PM, said:
okay so your voice acting for yashi wasn't good, i haven't messed with your voice yet but if thats your final audition i will stick with my edited voice. the energy in her voice was lost. mike's pitch was good. i could see him talking like that in my head but i think junior boomer was right about the accent, it really does make a difference. paulo sounded awesome as a british dude the first time, i didn't like "hey babe" part. too monotone. the rest was brilliant. if only you could learn an american accent, dammit, i would hand you the paulo part. blur was the best. it just fit you perfectly even if you weren't consistant with the tone. i still think thats what blur should sound like. if you'd like to speak like an american pronounce your "O"s as ah.not oh. like when you said got. you don't want your throat to be open, and your lips should be wide. Gaht, not Goht.
you need to put more energy in your voice. thats the main thing.
I'll put some more energy into my voice in the future, sorry it's just I'm not exactly working to my full potential as I'm not feeling too awake today and I'll try making the O's into Ah. :)
I'll try getting another audition up and this time I'll try becoming more energetic! *glittering eyes*
Thanks for the feedback though! It helped me alot on improving for the future! I have to work on the american accent more as I never came across an American before.
Er, right, I'll go research some American accents on the internet (sounds awkward XD)
Thanks for some of the praising though!! :D
I hope the animation is going well too!! ^_^
I may do another audition tomorrow so please bare that in mind too!
This post has been edited by BonBonToro: 11 June 2011 - 12:15 AM
- #100
- 10 June 2011 - 11:19 PM