Ok So this may not be my best work but what the heck i gonna post it i feel like it
This post has been edited by Raxki: 23 December 2010 - 06:05 PM
Careful What You Wish For Crossover
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
He meets Aria. She even attacked Taeshi for going into the comic.
On a serious note, I hope this is a one shot gag and not a serial. It's usually best to keep your creations and another person's separate. Fan-fics are usually okay unless they are explicitly forbidden (and even then tread at your own risk), but combining your creations with another person's is pretty dangerous; not only do you risk losing your creations' identity (IE, your character, which you worked so hard on, is seen by everyone as a fan character) but you risk peeving the creator (there are many BCB fan characters, and very few are actually liked by Taeshi). Combine the fact that you're admittedly a furry an BCB is >NOT< a furry comic (cough funny animal cough) and you're about to step into really dangerous territory here.
Your comics are raw and in need of work (not a criticism, you gotta start somewhere), but they hold, in my view, promise. Your art style is certainly fun to look at. Don't ruin it before you get a shot at your own fame.
On a serious note, I hope this is a one shot gag and not a serial. It's usually best to keep your creations and another person's separate. Fan-fics are usually okay unless they are explicitly forbidden (and even then tread at your own risk), but combining your creations with another person's is pretty dangerous; not only do you risk losing your creations' identity (IE, your character, which you worked so hard on, is seen by everyone as a fan character) but you risk peeving the creator (there are many BCB fan characters, and very few are actually liked by Taeshi). Combine the fact that you're admittedly a furry an BCB is >NOT< a furry comic (cough funny animal cough) and you're about to step into really dangerous territory here.
Your comics are raw and in need of work (not a criticism, you gotta start somewhere), but they hold, in my view, promise. Your art style is certainly fun to look at. Don't ruin it before you get a shot at your own fame.
- #3
- 05 December 2010 - 12:55 AM
- SpaceMouse
- BCI Member
- his custom license plate literally reads "M0US3Y"
speaking as melody's creator, no
- #5
- 05 December 2010 - 05:26 PM
- akacatgirl
- Member
Really? Then why was she spying on Paulo in her comic?
- #6
- 05 December 2010 - 06:14 PM
...Could you possibly get someone to write the english for you? The grammar hurts my eyes o_o Great drawing though.
This post has been edited by Sammy: 06 December 2010 - 12:19 AM
- #7
- 06 December 2010 - 12:19 AM
- Raxki
- Member
Sammy, on 06 December 2010 - 12:19 AM, said:
...Could you possibly get someone to write the english for you? The grammar hurts my eyes o_o Great drawing though.
ok
Carcharocles, on 05 December 2010 - 12:55 AM, said:
He meets Aria. She even attacked Taeshi for going into the comic.
On a serious note, I hope this is a one shot gag and not a serial. It's usually best to keep your creations and another person's separate. Fan-fics are usually okay unless they are explicitly forbidden (and even then tread at your own risk), but combining your creations with another person's is pretty dangerous; not only do you risk losing your creations' identity (IE, your character, which you worked so hard on, is seen by everyone as a fan character) but you risk peeving the creator (there are many BCB fan characters, and very few are actually liked by Taeshi). Combine the fact that you're admittedly a furry an BCB is >NOT< a furry comic (cough funny animal cough) and you're about to step into really dangerous territory here.
Your comics are raw and in need of work (not a criticism, you gotta start somewhere), but they hold, in my view, promise. Your art style is certainly fun to look at. Don't ruin it before you get a shot at your own fame.
On a serious note, I hope this is a one shot gag and not a serial. It's usually best to keep your creations and another person's separate. Fan-fics are usually okay unless they are explicitly forbidden (and even then tread at your own risk), but combining your creations with another person's is pretty dangerous; not only do you risk losing your creations' identity (IE, your character, which you worked so hard on, is seen by everyone as a fan character) but you risk peeving the creator (there are many BCB fan characters, and very few are actually liked by Taeshi). Combine the fact that you're admittedly a furry an BCB is >NOT< a furry comic (cough funny animal cough) and you're about to step into really dangerous territory here.
Your comics are raw and in need of work (not a criticism, you gotta start somewhere), but they hold, in my view, promise. Your art style is certainly fun to look at. Don't ruin it before you get a shot at your own fame.
i just wanna have fun is there a law against that
- #9
- 06 December 2010 - 07:56 PM
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
No law, it's just that you're basically setting yourself up for flaming while at the same time doing no favors to the integrity of your characters. Combine that with the fact that Taeshi has flat out said that the only recent fan characters she likes are Larken and Liam (with apparently Tess being the only old one she still likes, since she's still alive) and you get the picture.
- #10
- 06 December 2010 - 10:43 PM
- Raxki
- Member
Carcharocles, on 06 December 2010 - 10:43 PM, said:
No law, it's just that you're basically setting yourself up for flaming while at the same time doing no favors to the integrity of your characters. Combine that with the fact that Taeshi has flat out said that the only recent fan characters she likes are Larken and Liam (with apparently Tess being the only old one she still likes, since she's still alive) and you get the picture.
...... cute avi
yes i get the picture
- #11
- 06 December 2010 - 11:39 PM
- Raxki
- Member
]The speech bubble have a few problems with them and the script...
Note:strip number 4 is currently in developing
Note: The conversation of Ryan and his second personality Bryan inside their mind don't make sense now because it make sense in my comics title "Anthro Kai" that will be post on comicgenesis(for the time being) by 2011 ,but for now i making this fancomic and Test comic on devaint art, to developed my characters,story and my typing.
This post has been edited by Raxki: 12 December 2010 - 03:39 AM
- #15
- 11 December 2010 - 01:49 AM
- Moddy Auld
- Member
In that last panel or so, it's just a tiny tad bit hard to tell who is saying what. Kind of.
Still though, this is rather nice. Curious to see where this ends up.
Still though, this is rather nice. Curious to see where this ends up.
- #21
- 14 December 2010 - 11:11 PM
- Maverik
- Moderator
"You don't look like a fancharacter" What?
@Carcharocles
The only fancharacters Taeshi still likes are McCain and Tess. Larken & Liam irritate her as much as any others.
@Everyone who has ever asked "Then why are there fancharacters in the background of comics"
Taeshi puts fancharacters of people she likes into the backgrounds of pages for 2 reasons. 1) She needed characters there, so why not use characters that already exists? And 2) She likes to be nice and give her friends shout outs, which unfortunately continues to come back and bite her in the ass unfortunately.
@Carcharocles
The only fancharacters Taeshi still likes are McCain and Tess. Larken & Liam irritate her as much as any others.
@Everyone who has ever asked "Then why are there fancharacters in the background of comics"
Taeshi puts fancharacters of people she likes into the backgrounds of pages for 2 reasons. 1) She needed characters there, so why not use characters that already exists? And 2) She likes to be nice and give her friends shout outs, which unfortunately continues to come back and bite her in the ass unfortunately.
- #22
- 15 December 2010 - 03:22 AM
- Raxki
- Member
Maverik, on 15 December 2010 - 03:22 AM, said:
"You don't look like a fancharacter" What?
@Carcharocles
The only fancharacters Taeshi still likes are McCain and Tess. Larken & Liam irritate her as much as any others.
@Everyone who has ever asked "Then why are there fancharacters in the background of comics"
Taeshi puts fancharacters of people she likes into the backgrounds of pages for 2 reasons. 1) She needed characters there, so why not use characters that already exists? And 2) She likes to be nice and give her friends shout outs, which unfortunately continues to come back and bite her in the ass unfortunately.
@Carcharocles
The only fancharacters Taeshi still likes are McCain and Tess. Larken & Liam irritate her as much as any others.
@Everyone who has ever asked "Then why are there fancharacters in the background of comics"
Taeshi puts fancharacters of people she likes into the backgrounds of pages for 2 reasons. 1) She needed characters there, so why not use characters that already exists? And 2) She likes to be nice and give her friends shout outs, which unfortunately continues to come back and bite her in the ass unfortunately.
it suppose to be one of the fancomic joke it be explaine later
- #23
- 15 December 2010 - 05:25 PM
I can easily read all of the edited version.
I wonder which smells worse.
Wet fur or burnt fur?
Speaking of which don't forget to dry him off. Hmmm... Firo-David?
I wonder which smells worse.
Wet fur or burnt fur?
Speaking of which don't forget to dry him off. Hmmm... Firo-David?
This post has been edited by TheLightorTheDark: 15 December 2010 - 08:25 PM
- #24
- 15 December 2010 - 08:22 PM
- Raxki
- Member
Today strip maybe to much inappropiate to be post in the forums so here link instead
Careful what you wish for NV(Number5/NoValid)
Some "MikexSandy"
Note:making next page
Careful what you wish for NV(Number5/NoValid)
Some "MikexSandy"
Note:making next page
This post has been edited by Raxki: 18 December 2010 - 02:51 AM
- #25
- 17 December 2010 - 11:37 PM
DANG IT! Curse Deviantart's Forbidden function! Can you PM the page to me Raxki?
This post has been edited by TheLightorTheDark: 17 December 2010 - 11:59 PM
- #26
- 17 December 2010 - 11:56 PM
Hahahaa! That's funny!
This post has been edited by TheLightorTheDark: 18 December 2010 - 08:37 PM
- #31
- 18 December 2010 - 08:35 PM
....
At least you cleaned up your English 
- #34
- 22 December 2010 - 01:25 PM
It s looking pretty funy raxki. If you don't feel like doing it, though, nobody is forcing you to 
- #35
- 22 December 2010 - 03:19 PM
- Raxki
- Member
Sammy, on 22 December 2010 - 01:25 PM, said:
At least you cleaned up your English
yeah, keep practicing
Migrant, on 22 December 2010 - 03:19 PM, said:
It s looking pretty funy raxki. If you don't feel like doing it, though, nobody is forcing you to
Is not like i feel doing it,is just the reason i doing it.
- #36
- 22 December 2010 - 07:23 PM
What is the reason that you're doing it?
- #37
- 22 December 2010 - 09:31 PM
- Moddy Auld
- Member
Wait wait wait. Cover the ear tips and socks and all of the sudden he's not a fox? Hrm, perhaps we can do a little better than that. Still though, it's coming along rather nicely enough. If nothing else, at this point I just want to see how this all gets resolved.
- #41
- 29 December 2010 - 04:37 AM
- Raxki
- Member
Moddy Auld, on 29 December 2010 - 04:37 AM, said:
Wait wait wait. Cover the ear tips and socks and all of the sudden he's not a fox? Hrm, perhaps we can do a little better than that. Still though, it's coming along rather nicely enough. If nothing else, at this point I just want to see how this all gets resolved.
David idea of painting his patterm to make him look like a dog...all f this will end with a Twist
- #42
- 29 December 2010 - 05:06 AM
- MouseCat
- Member
Umm... the entire scenario of getting sucked into a computer is making a lot of questions pop up by itself. I sure hope you've already planned this ahead. About Lucy and David, is it okay for them to be talking about fan characters? isn't that breaking the fourth wall?
Lastly, I'd enjoy reading it more if the lines are smoother.
Lastly, I'd enjoy reading it more if the lines are smoother.
- #43
- 29 December 2010 - 07:12 AM
- Raxki
- Member
MouseCat, on 29 December 2010 - 07:12 AM, said:
Umm... the entire scenario of getting sucked into a computer is making a lot of questions pop up by itself. I sure hope you've already planned this ahead. About Lucy and David, is it okay for them to be talking about fan characters? isn't that breaking the fourth wall?
Lastly, I'd enjoy reading it more if the lines are smoother.
Lastly, I'd enjoy reading it more if the lines are smoother.
Yeah at first i did not really think the plot so well,but now i do, it all be explane* at
the end. breaking the fourth wall is one of the comic jokes.
This post has been edited by Raxki: 29 December 2010 - 08:03 PM
- #44
- 29 December 2010 - 08:02 PM
Oh dear, I see where this is going and it angers Soup-gun whichever way it turns out =_= But good stuff so far 
This post has been edited by Sammy: 01 January 2011 - 11:59 AM
- #49
- 01 January 2011 - 11:59 AM
- Raxki
- Member
Moddy Auld, on 01 January 2011 - 07:47 AM, said:
Snrk. Sex Bob-omb? Heh heh.
It's a band from the movie Scott Pilgrim vs the World.
I have zero idea on what type of music Lucy hear.
Meleeman, on 01 January 2011 - 09:06 AM, said:
mcCain looks smarter. how could he tell he was a Fox?
McCain is always smart.............................i guess
Sammy, on 01 January 2011 - 11:59 AM, said:
Oh dear, I see where this is going and it angers Soup-gun whichever way it turns out =_= But good stuff so far
rrrrrrrrrrreally? there more than meet the eye...
- #50
- 01 January 2011 - 05:23 PM