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Junior Boomer
BCI Member

Gnukko, on 19 March 2011 - 09:53 AM, said:

Oh man.
It was sandy all along.
dun dun duun

It's nicer to dream of better things other than facing the harsh reality ._.

Which is why I will do the same, oh that lovable Sandy and her black hair and not red hair.

This post has been edited by Junior Boomer: 19 March 2011 - 03:04 PM

#301
19 March 2011 - 02:59 PM

Raxki
Member

ZorZhen, on 19 March 2011 - 02:48 PM, said:

ok, like it, just something to say, in the third panel the dog (I don't know his name) look taller than the fox, but in the ninth panel the fox is taller :question:

. You should fix that.

Also, your art style has improved a lot, keep it up.

His name is Reed.

Yeah he taller that Ryan(the fox)
but in the 9 panel it was hard on the proportion base on that scene.

Gnukko, on 19 March 2011 - 09:53 AM, said:

Oh man.
It was sandy all along.
dun dun duun

For the love of god is not Sandy. >:O

#302
19 March 2011 - 05:55 PM

Junior Boomer
BCI Member

Raxki he's joking since the whole Aria joke has been way overdone and he is in denial at the lame plot point. Also Aria's hair is red not black and her fur is a greyish color, which is also why he is joking that it's Sandy. You can see the correct coloring here.

This post has been edited by Junior Boomer: 19 March 2011 - 05:58 PM

#303
19 March 2011 - 05:58 PM

Raxki
Member

Junior Boomer, on 19 March 2011 - 05:58 PM, said:

Oh well its to late for that

.
The whole poing of this comic from the star was that they fight Aria(since i needed a "villain").I wanted to make action/fighting comics,but screw that now just wanna ended.Got what i needed.

But there one more secret to be reveal(last secret hopefully and could be quite shocking).

This post has been edited by Raxki: 19 March 2011 - 06:13 PM

#304
19 March 2011 - 06:05 PM

Raxki
Member

Quote

Also, your art style has improved a lot, keep it up.

Yeah that is/was the whole porpoise of this comic(and some other stuff).

This post has been edited by Raxki: 19 March 2011 - 06:27 PM

#305
19 March 2011 - 06:27 PM

Junior Boomer
BCI Member

Raxki, on 19 March 2011 - 06:05 PM, said:

Junior Boomer, on 19 March 2011 - 05:58 PM, said:

Oh well its to late for that

I'm really scared to see how this fight goes, because if you make the biggest mistake you can make when it comes to this subject, the whole thing flops.

#306
19 March 2011 - 06:36 PM

Raxki
Member

Junior Boomer, on 19 March 2011 - 06:36 PM, said:

Raxki, on 19 March 2011 - 06:05 PM, said:

Junior Boomer, on 19 March 2011 - 05:58 PM, said:

Oh well its to late for that

I'm really scared to see how this fight goes, because if you make the biggest mistake you can make when it comes to this subject, the whole thing flops.

there wont be any fight

#307
19 March 2011 - 06:38 PM

Junior Boomer
BCI Member

Oh I see, my eyes must have just missed that part. Well good then, it will be better without a fight. Still though, if you resolve the Aria situation the wrong way, things will be quite bad.

This post has been edited by Junior Boomer: 19 March 2011 - 06:41 PM

#308
19 March 2011 - 06:41 PM

Gnukko
Member

you really shouldn't spoiler everything in your comic.

#309
19 March 2011 - 06:41 PM

Raxki
Member

Gnukko, on 19 March 2011 - 06:41 PM, said:

you really shouldn't spoiler everything in your comic.

I don't want people to expect a fight. To keep them in mind.

Junior Boomer, on 19 March 2011 - 06:41 PM, said:

Oh I see, my eyes must have just missed that part. Well good then, it will be better without a fight. Still though, if you resolve the Aria situation the wrong way, things will be quite bad.

Yes.I hope that for i got plan be good.

#310
19 March 2011 - 06:45 PM

RedJack
BCI Member

ZorZhen, on 19 March 2011 - 02:48 PM, said:

ok, like it, just something to say, in the third panel the dog (I don't know his name) look taller than the fox, but in the ninth panel the fox is taller :question:

. You should fix that.

Also, your art style has improved a lot, keep it up.

That or maybe they are at different distances. When people are at different distances from the angle it could look like one person is taller than the other when they are in reality not.

#311
19 March 2011 - 06:48 PM

Raxki
Member

Well this is a epic fail in a gigantic proportion(i was not being rush just trying something new/different.Next page would come like page 23) ;_;

.
The 1 panel mean to be a the end of the sunset,and it becoming night.
I will never do traditional like this again.

And what a cliche to the fight

Now from here .these two are going home(back to there world).
6 pages to the end

again could not contact editor. ._.

God dammit go ahead and laugh :nope:

*jump in bed eating ice cream and watching whale wars.....*

This post has been edited by Raxki: 23 March 2011 - 06:35 AM

#312
23 March 2011 - 06:25 AM

RedJack
BCI Member

I'm not laughin Raxki. Because you took the criticism of others and improved your art and dialogue, you've made some really impressive progress. You have definetely improved in grammar and your art design is quite good compared to stuff others make.

#313
23 March 2011 - 07:06 AM

Raxki
Member

RedJack, on 23 March 2011 - 07:06 AM, said:

Thanks that was the whole point of this comic....
but jesus christ,i misspell the word "friend" billions of times.
I m not mopping but this page or even the whole comic will haunt me

(goodnite)

This post has been edited by Raxki: 23 March 2011 - 07:14 AM

#314
23 March 2011 - 07:13 AM

MouseCat
Member

Doing traditional is so scary, huh? But Raxki, you shouldn't do pencil strokes like that... it makes the pencils cry. And it's making me cry.

#315
23 March 2011 - 08:44 AM

Blazer
Member

Raxki, on 23 March 2011 - 06:25 AM, said:

Well this is a epic fail in a gigantic proportion(i was not being rush just trying something new/different.Next page would come like page 23) ;_;

.
The 1 panel mean to be a the end of the sunset,and it becoming night.
I will never do traditional like this again.

To be frank I liked this (latest) page more then others. :smirk:

I didn't know the first panel was supposed to be a "sunset" but it really does look like a wind blowing out on clear blue sky, which kinda adds to the enviromental, outdoor background.

This post has been edited by Blazer: 23 March 2011 - 01:34 PM

#316
23 March 2011 - 01:33 PM

Raxki
Member

well here is end of the line.
Was gonna be 30 pages it can end here a 25 pages.the last 5 pages was gonna focus on Mike, Paulo,David, Sandy and Lucy on there's date.

The 1 day i came and saw other fancomics "i wanna make my own fancomic someday" 8-)

.
Also went i came here Forgotten was running and i made my own fancomic and finish before forgotten lol.
I apologies to Teashi for not being able to make the BCB cast 100% to their personality ._.

now i can focus more on my webcomic
PS. this events happen like 2-3 years into the future of my comic's world. but are not canon in my comic.
enjoy.

This post has been edited by Raxki: 01 April 2011 - 12:14 AM

#317
31 March 2011 - 09:27 PM

RedJack
BCI Member

Alright first off

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!

Secondly you totally broke the fourth wall there o.O

and Thirdly can't wait to see the BCB on their dates

#318
31 March 2011 - 09:36 PM

DangerIce
BCI Member

I feel like I should read the whole thing, but I must say the English makes it hard to read. But that can't be taken badly, I've seen Americans with worse spelling, grammar, and punctuation. And you're not from anywhere with English as the primary language, so don't worry about that

. The art is not bad in my opinion, It's much better than anything I've ever drawn, and that's how I base my drawings: It's good if I can't draw it

and on that scale, this is god's work.
But really, nice work

(And I'll probably read the rest of it sometime)

This post has been edited by DangerIce: 31 March 2011 - 10:40 PM

#319
31 March 2011 - 10:40 PM

SushiJaguar
Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member

You should get a proofreader.

#320
31 March 2011 - 11:39 PM

Smash Genesis
Member

I second Sushi's notion.

#321
31 March 2011 - 11:40 PM

NoCreativeNames
Member

RedJack, on 31 March 2011 - 09:36 PM, said:

Secondly you totally broke the fourth wall there o.O

There hasn't been a fourth wall since page 20.

This post has been edited by NoCreativeNames: 31 March 2011 - 11:45 PM

#322
31 March 2011 - 11:43 PM

Raxki
Member

SushiJaguar, on 31 March 2011 - 11:39 PM, said:

You should get a proofreader.

Now you tell me

This post has been edited by Raxki: 01 April 2011 - 12:07 AM

#323
01 April 2011 - 12:02 AM

SushiJaguar
Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member

Chill, it's never too late.

Unless you get murdered for failing at grammar and end up insult a chinese guy or something.

#324
01 April 2011 - 02:04 AM

Raxki
Member

SushiJaguar, on 01 April 2011 - 02:04 AM, said:

Chill, it's never too late.

Unless you get murdered for failing at grammar and end up insult a chinese guy or something.

lol i not mad

#325
01 April 2011 - 02:06 AM

SushiJaguar
Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member

Cool.

#326
01 April 2011 - 02:51 AM

Meleeman
Member

dude last time i checked you had really crappy comics, now i can actually understand them, and i even got the joke on the 2nd to last page. dude you should make an original comic. the end was actually pretty good. (aside from the art thats another story).

#327
01 April 2011 - 04:27 AM

Raxki
Member

Meleeman, on 01 April 2011 - 04:27 AM, said:

Told you to wait for the end.
I don't get it? Your trying to insult me?

This post has been edited by Raxki: 01 April 2011 - 04:46 AM

#328
01 April 2011 - 04:38 AM

SushiJaguar
Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member

No, he's paying you a compliment based on how much you've improved.

(HE'S TOTALLY TROLLING YOU BRO YOU SHOULD 'AVE HIM

TAKE HIM OUT BACK AND SNAP HIS NOSE) <- That was a joke, just in case.

#329
01 April 2011 - 04:43 AM

Raxki
Member

SushiJaguar, on 01 April 2011 - 04:43 AM, said:

No, he's paying you a compliment based on how much you've improved.

(HE'S TOTALLY TROLLING YOU BRO YOU SHOULD 'AVE HIM

TAKE HIM OUT BACK AND SNAP HIS NOSE) <- That was a joke, just in case.

oh thnxs
told you guys to wait to the end 8-)

#330
01 April 2011 - 04:47 AM

RedJack
BCI Member

NoCreativeNames, on 31 March 2011 - 11:43 PM, said:

RedJack, on 31 March 2011 - 09:36 PM, said:

Secondly you totally broke the fourth wall there o.O

There hasn't been a fourth wall since page 20.

Well this page certianly was the wrecking ball destroyer of the fourth wall ಠ_ಠ

#331
01 April 2011 - 09:02 AM

Junior Boomer
BCI Member

Raxki no offense, but the end didn't explain why every character broke the 4th wall constantly. Sorry, but I was expecting an explanation. The ending was a bit of a letdown since you had hyped it up so much.

#332
01 April 2011 - 09:43 AM

Raxki
Member

Junior Boomer, on 01 April 2011 - 09:43 AM, said:

breaking the fourth wall is a joke. except the last page =w=
breaking the 4 wall on the last page was the explanation to this comic.I don't blame you if you don't get it =w=

well i try my best 8-)

This post has been edited by Raxki: 01 April 2011 - 05:45 PM

#333
01 April 2011 - 05:41 PM

Raxki
Member

Thanks white jesus this comic over it have been nothing but a pain in the behind.

Peace. 8-)

This post has been edited by Raxki: 01 April 2011 - 06:20 PM

#334
01 April 2011 - 06:20 PM

Raxki
Member

Here are the endings but either one can be the true ending and the other alternate.
in other word as the epilouge.... i guess

This post has been edited by Raxki: 04 April 2011 - 03:39 AM

#335
04 April 2011 - 03:36 AM

Sammy
Banned

You've made some amazing progress, and I think you're well on your way to being a very good artist. We all shot you down, but you took it like a man and got back up, and for that, I salute you. 8-)

#336
04 April 2011 - 04:43 PM

Taeshi
one hot bitch
Administrator

remember the time the comic was an actual fancomic rather than just the furry paulo-ripoff show

i don't 8-)

#337
04 April 2011 - 06:50 PM

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