Sparkfur's Art and Writing Thread (Taking Requests!)
To hold you over until then, I made two images
A small 200x100 banner for Spiraling Descent, I made this in about 5 minutes.
This is just a wallpaper I made in class out of boredom. I hope you enjoy!
EDIT: Ehhhh it's called Spiraling Decline. I'm stupid
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 21 September 2011 - 01:19 AM
- 19 September 2011 - 06:10 PM
You have a pretty decent notion of the characters and their personality.
Hope to see more!
- 19 September 2011 - 06:14 PM
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 19 September 2011 - 06:19 PM
- 19 September 2011 - 06:19 PM
- 19 September 2011 - 08:51 PM
EDIT: I just realized that Panel 3 on comic 3 is really hard to read. It says '...Lucy?'"...Is that a problem?" "N-No!"
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 20 September 2011 - 03:53 AM
- 20 September 2011 - 01:36 AM
I needed to get out of the slump I was in - I was only drawing anthros. So I tried drawing a human for the first time in a while. It's decent, imho. Not the way I envisioned it though.
I'm still sketching pages 5 and 6 of BCB:OOT. I'm also thinking of posting it in its own thread - thoughts?
- 21 September 2011 - 01:18 AM
His right arm should be behind the chest muscle, not in front;
Sleeves should be a little longer;
Torso should be slightly turned to his right.
Otherwise looks good
This post has been edited by Hero: 21 September 2011 - 01:45 AM
- 21 September 2011 - 01:43 AM
- 21 September 2011 - 01:48 AM
Shadowed Levels will update whenever the hell I feel like drawing the next page. Also, my scanner is a bitch. Sorry for the low-quality, I'll try and get a better image up shortly.
In other news, I've almost finished pages 5 and 6 of BCB:OOT.
Also, I coloured this like a retard. It looked so awful that I said "fuck it" and smudged the whole thing. Enjoy.
- 22 September 2011 - 11:09 PM
- 22 September 2011 - 11:53 PM
Dear God that page is random. If you've played the games, you'll understand his reaction, as well as why Mike dived in the river. If you've not, Talon is scared of Malon's rage, and there were guards in between the hill and where Talon was - it would have been impossible to sneak by them any other way.
And Mike got rupees!
Whoah, no panels? WUT?
Poor Mike, he never seems to see the obvious. Lucky he's got Navi, really.
- 23 September 2011 - 03:27 AM
- 23 September 2011 - 03:34 AM
So no, thanks for the suggestion, but I'm not going to do that. The only reason I made the comic was to improve my drawing - if I'm not the drawing it, it has no purpose.
Also, that's the lazyass way out.
- 23 September 2011 - 03:38 AM
Also, I drew two new pages of Shadowed Levels, which looks far better and are much better. Well, relative to page 1... e_e May draw another one later today.
But since you're all being patient/semi-invisible, take a cookie- er, button!
Yar har fiddle-dee-dee...
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 23 September 2011 - 06:53 PM
- 23 September 2011 - 06:52 PM
This post has been edited by Gabu: 24 September 2011 - 01:06 PM
- 24 September 2011 - 01:04 PM
Also, I'll hopefully finish a new page of BCB:OOT tomorrow.
For those who don't want to check the first page for the link, the first comic is here: Comics - After School Page 8 :: Shadowed Levels
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 25 September 2011 - 02:50 PM
- 25 September 2011 - 02:48 PM
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 28 September 2011 - 09:36 PM
- 28 September 2011 - 06:22 PM
- 28 September 2011 - 06:35 PM
As for the plot, I'm sort of exploring the possible uses of the characters and their interactions before I fully set down a plot. I've got a loose idea in mind, but it's yet to be solidified.
I'm working on it though.
Also, I've uploaded two more pages.
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 28 September 2011 - 11:45 PM
- 28 September 2011 - 09:35 PM
Feel free to use it if you like
- 02 October 2011 - 04:20 AM
- 05 October 2011 - 04:56 AM
"The curvaceous brunette wiggled her eyebrows at me in a very suggestive manner"
Careful, you fell into first person for a moment there.
"large, shaded window looking out on the beaches of San Jose"
I live in San Jose, and I have never been to a beach closer than Santa Cruz. Of course, we don't have much of a border on the bay itself to begin with, but I don't know of any beach that's any good anywhere around the bay.
- 05 October 2011 - 10:30 PM
Ah well, if only those two minor details are problems, I've done better than I thought I did Thanks for the review.
Also, I made a new avatar, guys:
- 06 October 2011 - 03:22 AM
1. Holy shit did I need to sharpen often.
2. Coloured pencils don't blur as well as regular pencils.
Here's the result. I found out the blurring thing the hard way, on the leaves.
C&C is welcome.
My source for Mike's pose was this picture of him: Mike
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 06 October 2011 - 05:49 PM
- 06 October 2011 - 05:47 PM
I just can't make fun of that face, however much I dislike what his followers have done He's one of my people...
Also, to clear something up, I've been asked if I take requests. The answer is yes. Just send a PM my way or post in here, and I'll see what I can do for you
This post has been edited by Sparkfur: 07 October 2011 - 10:22 PM
- 07 October 2011 - 10:15 PM
I'm fucking proud of this one.
I can make an avatar out of it if you like, Jack.
- 09 October 2011 - 05:20 AM
Muchisimas gracias Spark. Thank you so much.
- 09 October 2011 - 05:37 AM
The lineart only took about 10 minutes, it was the colour that was a bitch.
By the way, for anyone who's interested, here's the avatar I made out of it.
- 09 October 2011 - 06:03 AM
the head on that mike looks a little square though and perhaps try something different with the hill? it just kinda curves away into nothing.
very nice though!
- 09 October 2011 - 07:51 AM
Thank you ^_^ I'm especially proud of them.
Here are the next two pages of BCB:OOT, which I actually drew something like a week ago and just procrastinated until today.
And no I don't know what the fuck I was doing with those cracks thank you very much.
- 09 October 2011 - 11:11 PM
Yeah, I was going to make something like that.
Then it looked stupid so I said "fuck it."
Now it looks like Mike running.
Also, it's funny because in the game Link never gets wet.
- 09 October 2011 - 11:38 PM
I present you with *drum roll* Jerk Mike. Bitching at Lucy.
8 am, time to break Lucy's heart.
- 10 October 2011 - 01:54 AM
What the hell. My post. It went all weird.
This post has been edited by TheMysteriousMan: 10 October 2011 - 02:38 AM
- 10 October 2011 - 02:38 AM
Its still a nice picture though Spark, nice work.
- 10 October 2011 - 03:27 AM
Then you can never unsee it.
- 10 October 2011 - 03:35 AM
If anyone's interested, I'm streaming making a Wallpaper live here:
Spark's Gimp Work - live streaming video powered by Livestream
- 10 October 2011 - 06:08 PM
This post has been edited by Gabu: 10 October 2011 - 06:23 PM
- 10 October 2011 - 06:22 PM
- 10 October 2011 - 09:15 PM