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Lunas
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Hi all. I'm an artist. Who draws anthropomorphic animals and lots of stud=ff with explosions. So.
Here.
Nurambus's deviantART Gallery
My Sonic the Hedgehog fan character. He's gonna be the star of my fan comic, which'll be done....eventually. >.>

Nurambus's deviantART Gallery
This is Xedus. Originally my friends character, pretty much mine now. >:3

Please, critique is always appreciated.

This post has been edited by Lunas: 21 November 2012 - 06:52 AM

#1
30 November 2011 - 06:05 AM

ThatGuy
Member

Ahh, one thing that I'll never get tired of is good old Sonic style characters. While I'm not exactly talented in this area yet, I recommend adding some background to the drawings. That's my only critique.

#2
30 November 2011 - 06:14 AM

Hero
Member

The classic sonic fancharacters... Well, we all gotta start somewhere.

I think your lineart and colouring is pretty great, but some of the proportions look kinda off (because believe it or not, there are proportions in the "Sonic style"). For example, their heads look too big for their bodies, especially the first one.

Another thing is since he is going to be your main character in the fan comic, you might want to consider simplifying his design. There is too much detail for something that will have to be drawn a lot of times.

This post has been edited by Hero: 30 November 2011 - 12:53 PM

#3
30 November 2011 - 12:52 PM

TheMysteriousMan
Member

I swear ive seen that avatar somewhere. Maybe the Middle Grounds or something. Anyway, these look pretty good man!

#4
30 November 2011 - 03:33 PM

Lunas
Member

TheMysteriousMan, on 30 November 2011 - 03:33 PM, said:

I swear ive seen that avatar somewhere. Maybe the Middle Grounds or something. Anyway, these look pretty good man!

Spot on my good sir....though I have no idea who you are.

Thank you to everyone for their critique. It'll really come in handy.

#5
06 December 2011 - 06:28 AM

Carcharocles
BCI Member

Usually when I think Sonic fancharacter, I think very crappily drawn Microsoft Paint characters. I'm actually surprised you took time to develop your own style, and I'm honestly impressed with the quality of those two drawings.

This is, of course, coming from a guy who gave up on Sonic after the Sega Genesis died.

#6
10 December 2011 - 02:02 PM

memyselfandi
Member

OooO... Sonic characters. I wasn't expecting much that's actually a fair job you've done there. Do like.

I agree with the detail problem, that took you two days to do, right? Well, say a page has 6 panels but is mostly faces and a simple background. Just a basic "talking head" conversation between two characters with the amount of detail you have included will propably take three and a half days, and that's without any dynamic movement or extreme backgrounds (ie, little "story", if you will). Just something to consider.

This post has been edited by memyselfandi: 11 December 2011 - 08:55 PM

#7
11 December 2011 - 08:54 PM

Lunas
Member

Thanks alot for all the critique guys. This is the most caring any forum has ever shown. ;~;

I have since changed Marcus's design a bit so that not much detail is required. At least not so much. And I've been doing proportional practice too so i'll be updating very soon.

#8
17 December 2011 - 11:44 PM

memyselfandi
Member

You'll be making a comic right? Maybe you should run it by your friend, particularly if you end you trying to make money out of it and such. Words of wisdom from a, now homeless and sued, story writer (no, I am not really a homeless and sued write. I'd have to be good at writing for that.)

#9
18 December 2011 - 09:14 PM

Lunas
Member

memyselfandi, on 18 December 2011 - 09:14 PM, said:

When I said he was "pretty much mine", I meant that he was only used by me.
My friend owns him, but gave permission and use of him to me. It was his idea to add him in the comic, and I thought it was a kickass idea.

P.S. SKETCHDUMP
Nurambus on deviantART

#10
19 December 2011 - 06:02 AM

Lunas
Member

THIS IS WHAT I'VE BEEN DOING THE LAST 2 DAYS
Nurambus on deviantART

I really like this peice. Hope you guys do too.

#11
21 December 2011 - 06:31 PM

Lunas
Member

Nurambus on deviantART

More art. Critique my work! Make me feel loved!

#12
26 December 2011 - 05:45 AM

Lunas
Member

Cover Art for Issue/Chapter 1

Welp, almost there(this term is wearing thin). Erased is in its final stages before release. This here is a W.I.P. of the cover on issue/chapter 1. Hope I can get some critique.

#13
17 February 2012 - 12:09 PM

mAceOfHearts
Member

You're pretty damn good at drawing Sonic characters.
Kudos, keep up the good work.
The only think that bugs me, is that the proportions aren't always matching the perspective.

#14
17 February 2012 - 08:07 PM

Lunas
Member

mAceOfHearts, on 17 February 2012 - 08:07 PM, said:

You're pretty damn good at drawing Sonic characters.
Kudos, keep up the good work.
The only think that bugs me, is that the proportions aren't always matching the perspective.

Thanks alot! I know my proportioning needs work, but practice makes perfect. Plus, I think I've gotten a bit better. I'll be updating in the next day or so.

#15
17 February 2012 - 08:42 PM

Rakshiv
Member

Your poses seem kind of stiff, but for Sonic characters I actually quite like them considering what I usually see for the Sonic fandom. Try to make your characters flow a bit more, that's all I can say for now. I like your pencil work, though. c:

#16
17 February 2012 - 09:45 PM

Lunas
Member

Color of Courage

Piece 1 of 12. I'm doing an art portfolio for my AP Art class. The theme is color and emotion/expression.

Inversion by ~Nurambus on deviantART

Piece 2 of 12.

This post has been edited by Lunas: 23 April 2012 - 10:54 AM

#17
23 April 2012 - 10:53 AM

Lunas
Member

GreyArea
GreyAria
Avarice
Love: "Hey...What's for Dinner?"
Why Do I Blend?
RAGE
Hikui: Low
Takai: High
Sloth

MOAR ARTZ. Less furry and more other stuff with color. ENJOY and COMMENT please.

#18
16 May 2012 - 11:21 AM

Lunas
Member

hey guys and gals, long time no see. I've been working on my animation and storyboarding.
here are some concept designs and stuff. Hope you like'em.
Slenderman and Trenderman

Melty the Cyclops animated series main character W.I.P.

Jack Rabid Villian of Music video Project ideal.

More Definition His new fighting style, Solidarity. Basically it's going to consist of powerful concentrated movements and judo like reversals and some other matials arts combined.

BEHOLD! ~~TINYMAN TAY~~ ~~TAY THE TINYMAN~~
MIDGET

Teik the Trainer & Baek the Lucario
Posted Image

Best coloring I've done to date. *Commence back patting*

This post has been edited by Lunas: 21 November 2012 - 06:55 AM

#19
12 November 2012 - 07:17 PM

Lunas
Member

HEY PARTY PEOPLE. HAVE A TYPHLOSION.
I know there's a couple typos in the picture. I'll fix them.....eventually.
Baron the Typhlosion
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This post has been edited by Lunas: 21 November 2012 - 06:55 AM

#20
21 November 2012 - 06:54 AM

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