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nalem's stuff

Hey gaiz. :> I'm new here and I thought I'd share some of the work I've done.

This is the newest thing I've done lately (not including my webcomic)
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BCB fanart. <3 PauloXLucy 8-) >:( I'll post more stuff as I draw it.

As for my webcomic, you can read it here Lighter than Heir

or look at older stuff here nalem on deviantART
  • #1
  • 01 December 2011 - 07:42 PM
I like it!
Or maybe I'm just a sucker for cartooney stuff seeing as I can't do it for some reason.
Either way, keep posting. I'd love to see what else you create. c:
  • #2
  • 01 December 2011 - 08:31 PM
Dude, that's really great. I like the lineart on this. It has a real cartoony look, further amplified by the expressions. Keep it up!
  • #3
  • 02 December 2011 - 02:22 AM
BAAAAAH. Dude, I totally love this.
  • #4
  • 02 December 2011 - 05:28 AM
AWW YEAH! THATS AWSOME MAN!
  • #5
  • 02 December 2011 - 05:29 AM
Thanks, everyone! I'm gonna try to post something again really soon :>
  • #6
  • 02 December 2011 - 06:38 AM
I totally support this pairing! :D
  • #7
  • 03 December 2011 - 06:09 AM
Right on, Candimore!

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K guys, new drawing today. Got some Adventure Time fanart coming your way.
  • #8
  • 03 December 2011 - 08:10 AM
I always liked the style on Adventure Time :love:
This is pretty good, add bits of shading and ta-dum! creepy awesome art 8-D
  • #9
  • 04 December 2011 - 04:08 PM
Thanks, Katara! :>

Here's some more personal art, hopefully no one minds. This is Zeppelin and she's from from my webcomic.
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  • #10
  • 05 December 2011 - 07:33 AM
There are no words to say how much I love your art. Zeppelin is sooo cute! :love:

I love your style soo much. I'm willing to bet Scott Pilgrim has a slight influence of you art?
  • #11
  • 05 December 2011 - 08:22 PM
I started your webcomic. I love it so far. owo
  • #12
  • 05 December 2011 - 09:26 PM

View PostRC!, on 05 December 2011 - 08:22 PM, said:

There are no words to say how much I love your art. Zeppelin is sooo cute! :love:

I love your style soo much. I'm willing to bet Scott Pilgrim has a slight influence of you art?


Thanks so much! :> <3 I appreciate it deeply.
Alittle bit? I mean, O'Malley definitely is an inspiration. I've been working on a side Scott Pilgrim fancomic, the style might be rubbing off on me. Haha.



View PostRC!, on 05 December 2011 - 09:26 PM, said:

I started your webcomic. I love it so far. owo


Yay! I'm glad! :> <3
  • #13
  • 06 December 2011 - 06:38 AM
I love your comic, just read all through to the current page. the mix of German and English is really cool, and the art is really nice. I am interested to see where you take the story.
as for the BCB stuff, it looks nice as well. loving the pauloXlucy.
  • #14
  • 06 December 2011 - 08:09 AM
Thanks, God! :) I'm going to put up the newest page in the next hour.
  • #15
  • 06 December 2011 - 08:40 AM
  • Chris
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yeah, I have to agree with god, your comic is pretty outstanding. I take it you are German? the two languages seem to mix really well!
(you got a glowing review form god. that's pretty impressive!)
and as always, PxL ftw.

This post has been edited by Chris: 06 December 2011 - 08:46 AM

  • #16
  • 06 December 2011 - 08:44 AM

View PostChris, on 06 December 2011 - 08:44 AM, said:

yeah, I have to agree with god, your comic is pretty outstanding. I take it you are German? the two languages seem to mix really well!
(you got a glowing review form god. that's pretty impressive!)
and as always, PxL ftw.


Thanks so much! :>

Actually, no. I'm Hispanic! Haha. I named her Zeppelin and rolled with the German thing from there. :>
  • #17
  • 06 December 2011 - 09:24 AM
I am all over that PauloxLucy picture :love:
  • #18
  • 06 December 2011 - 10:15 AM
Something new for today!

This here's a commission I did of someone's character (no, they're not BCB fancharacters)

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This post has been edited by nalem: 07 December 2011 - 09:44 AM

  • #19
  • 07 December 2011 - 08:47 AM
You have such an adorable style
  • #20
  • 07 December 2011 - 09:01 AM

View PostKaizy, on 07 December 2011 - 09:01 AM, said:

You have such an adorable style


haha thanks! :>
  • #21
  • 07 December 2011 - 09:41 AM
  • Taeshi
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i uhh

(i like your lisaxscott comic)

(i've always kind of hated ramona so)

(yeahhhhh)
  • #22
  • 07 December 2011 - 12:19 PM

View PostTaeshi, on 07 December 2011 - 12:19 PM, said:

i uhh

(i like your lisaxscott comic)

(i've always kind of hated ramona so)

(yeahhhhh)


Omigosh you saw it? XD Hahahah thanks! I like Ramona... after book 6. Before then, I hated her too
  • #23
  • 07 December 2011 - 05:21 PM
  • Taeshi
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Ramona was such an irritating karma houdini and I just felt "ehhhhhhhh" by the end of book 6, like I still felt she got away with her bitchery throughout the book, like Scott had to apologise for not even sleeping with Lisa whereas Ramona was making out with her ex and ugghghgh i don't like her

Even though I try to remember that she did change Scott for the good, like making him get a job.
  • #24
  • 08 December 2011 - 05:57 AM

View PostTaeshi, on 08 December 2011 - 05:57 AM, said:

Ramona was such an irritating karma houdini and I just felt "ehhhhhhhh" by the end of book 6, like I still felt she got away with her bitchery throughout the book, like Scott had to apologise for not even sleeping with Lisa whereas Ramona was making out with her ex and ugghghgh i don't like her

Even though I try to remember that she did change Scott for the good, like making him get a job.


Oh you're right! She was a total bitch. Book 4 and 5, she made me so FLIPPIN' MAD. UGHHH. 8C But Lisa... I still wish Scott went for it 8C ... oh wait hahaha
  • #25
  • 08 December 2011 - 09:38 AM
AAAHHH SCOTT PILGRIM SPOILERS D: +cryforever+

I wanna read that fancomic of yours though. o3o
  • #26
  • 08 December 2011 - 11:32 PM
I just read the entirety of your webcomic. Love it.
  • #27
  • 09 December 2011 - 12:45 AM

View PostJohnny Hurricane, on 09 December 2011 - 12:45 AM, said:

I just read the entirety of your webcomic. Love it.


Thank you!

View PostRC!, on 08 December 2011 - 11:32 PM, said:

AAAHHH SCOTT PILGRIM SPOILERS D: +cryforever+

I wanna read that fancomic of yours though. o3o


:P Read the books, first! They've been out for over a year now! XP Then wait two years. You're not legally old enough to look at it!


Oh hey guys, new work. Flash movie! :D

This post has been edited by nalem: 09 December 2011 - 08:13 PM

  • #28
  • 09 December 2011 - 09:07 AM
I would be concerned if my pants could suddenly talk, I think the first thing it would say to me is "Hey jackass stop getting stains on me."
Besides that you have some killer art and you definitely need to keep it up.
  • #29
  • 09 December 2011 - 09:46 AM


I missed an update! :C Apologiessss here's a new flash movie I made.
  • #30
  • 27 December 2011 - 07:05 AM
You're like....a LEGEND! @3@
  • #31
  • 11 January 2012 - 01:47 AM
This is epic. THIS IS E P I C with all its letters OMG.
I can stop watching it since the last year :love:
I MUST learn to do this kind of videos :nope: and YOU'll be my inspiration 8-)

This post has been edited by Katara00176: 12 January 2012 - 02:56 AM

  • #32
  • 12 January 2012 - 02:54 AM
Haha, aw thanks, Katara.

Me? A legend? Haha, you're mistaken, Ahasaan!
  • #33
  • 12 January 2012 - 09:43 PM
Hey guys. Got a new thing today. Sorry, I've been so busy with comics/freelance work X.x

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  • #34
  • 24 January 2012 - 08:16 AM
Ok, one more for today Posted Image
  • #35
  • 24 January 2012 - 09:17 AM
You're a great artist, and Scott Pilgrim is f**king awesome!
  • #36
  • 24 January 2012 - 06:32 PM
Thank you, mAce! :)
  • #37
  • 24 January 2012 - 09:47 PM
Those cat ears defy the laws of physics

Otherwise, nice
  • #38
  • 24 January 2012 - 09:48 PM
Bumpin' it up!


With a new cartoon!

This post has been edited by nalem: 14 February 2012 - 12:24 AM

  • #39
  • 14 February 2012 - 12:24 AM
Exit, Stage Left.
XD That's just hilarious Nalem.
  • #40
  • 14 February 2012 - 02:29 AM
Thanks! :)
  • #41
  • 15 February 2012 - 08:22 PM
Nalem, I feel like while your cartoons have remarkably good voice acting and appear generally impressive because they're obviously animated by someone that has studied animation, the stories are always aimless and lack a punchline. This was no different. I'd say if you can't figure out how to do compelling jokes, you should consider other kinds of short stories for these kinds of things. It might seem like a small part of the whole process, but like with a lot of things, poor writing damages the whole thing.
  • #42
  • 15 February 2012 - 09:05 PM
XD I think it's clever and amusing. I too would like to see some short stories though.
But is this Fenada thing a series? That'd be good as well. A continuation of his exploits.

Spoiler

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 16 February 2012 - 02:53 AM

  • #43
  • 16 February 2012 - 02:48 AM
I agree with what Suitcase is saying there. Basically these animations are really nice. (I still really like that Fenada 001 XD )
But you should totally put in some good writing for it as well, like with your webcomic. If you happen to do that I'm certain it'd be pretty damn cool.
  • #44
  • 16 February 2012 - 03:39 AM
btw the movie is featured on newgrounds with nearly 100,000 views. I don't know if that's something worth taking note of, having no idea of the relative scale, but it looks impressive to me.
  • #45
  • 18 February 2012 - 01:06 AM
Thanks for the feedback, guys.

Suitcase, you're right, I actually do have issues with writing. It's something I'm kind of still new to and I'm practicing as much as I can. (I'm not trying to make excuses, just saying I'll continue to work harder on it.)

ThatGuy: Thanks, my webcomic was written with the help of lots of feedback from my classmates (well most of it). It's also a lot newer than Fenada too.

Fenada 001 is actually just a small piece of a script that stretches out to about 10-12 minutes. I'm just sharing it in smaller pieces. Still, no excuse for weak writing. I assure you I'll take this criticism and build off it. Sometimes you don't really know what you're doing wrong until you hear it, so I'll just keep working. There's no other way to go but up, right?

This post has been edited by nalem: 18 February 2012 - 09:41 AM

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  • 18 February 2012 - 09:15 AM
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