The very heavy use of "queer" and the occasional "gay" amused me for obvious reasons. But I found it a rather nice story about rabbits.
The one thing I find odd is how often the term "Passed hraka" is used. I just keep thinking, "Ok man, I realize rabbits poo but there is no reason to mention it so much."
It makes me wonder what a story would be like if the author took time to mention every time a character farted/belched. I took a minute today to imagine what Lord of the Rings would be like with that.