Paulo x Lucy kitten
human Mike
human Paulo
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That's pretty cool, considering you're 12. I like the human paulo, though his nose seems to be a tad too low and his left (our right) ear seems odd.
For the PauloXLucy kitten the anatomy seems really off, especially the legs. You've drawn the front legs much bigger than the back ones, and that's not how it really is, and he seems to be floating on his tail, somehow. So you will want to look at references of cat anatomy and proportion to try and make the pose more natural. Having an idea of where the bones go and what their shapes are can really help too, to let you know where you want to make it stiffer and what shape you wanna give to it. Something like this, though you might want to alter it to make it look more cartoonish, so you might be better off with cartoon references, but real animals are always a good place to start.
Keep practicing, you'll become very good if you do.
For the PauloXLucy kitten the anatomy seems really off, especially the legs. You've drawn the front legs much bigger than the back ones, and that's not how it really is, and he seems to be floating on his tail, somehow. So you will want to look at references of cat anatomy and proportion to try and make the pose more natural. Having an idea of where the bones go and what their shapes are can really help too, to let you know where you want to make it stiffer and what shape you wanna give to it. Something like this, though you might want to alter it to make it look more cartoonish, so you might be better off with cartoon references, but real animals are always a good place to start.
Keep practicing, you'll become very good if you do.
This post has been edited by Itu: 13 January 2012 - 08:47 PM
- #2
- 13 January 2012 - 08:43 PM
the Paulo X Lucy kitten I did while I was falling over tired. 
- the 1D
- Member
Well this is probably a bad move but I am not making any more art of any kind until I get a scanner and fix my netbook's broken mousepad, broken keyboard, and get the virus off of my PC, see you later
This post has been edited by the 1D: 15 January 2012 - 11:26 PM
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- 15 January 2012 - 11:25 PM
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
Okay, it took me a while to break that habit too, but let me give you some advice: ditch the watermarks. I can barely make out that face. It's a shame, because I can tell its good if a little anime-ish, but Watermarks don't do a damn thing beyond making your good drawings look like shit.
- #9
- 01 February 2012 - 09:59 PM
- MintyLimeGreen
- Member
The Deviantart logo is in the way dude. Obscures a majority of the picture.
- #10
- 01 February 2012 - 10:00 PM
- esalaka
- Banned
A little flat
Also the hair seems to separate the ear from the rest of the head, you should prob'ly fix that
The eyes and nose should be a bit lower... And the eyes should tilt a bit to give off the impression of the face actually being round
Plus, when you're looking at eyes sideways, remember this
And maybe hair shouldn't be one solid mass
Also the hair seems to separate the ear from the rest of the head, you should prob'ly fix that
The eyes and nose should be a bit lower... And the eyes should tilt a bit to give off the impression of the face actually being round
Plus, when you're looking at eyes sideways, remember this
And maybe hair shouldn't be one solid mass
- #12
- 01 February 2012 - 10:43 PM
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
I'd skip out on MS Paint and pick up a tablet plus ArtRage/MyPaint etc. Your hand drawings are fun to look at, but your MS paint pieces are horrendous.
You need to work a little on your ears. They're set too low on some of your characters heads. Take a look at yourself in a mirror. The center of the ears should be more or less horizontal with your chars' eyes.
You need to work a little on your ears. They're set too low on some of your characters heads. Take a look at yourself in a mirror. The center of the ears should be more or less horizontal with your chars' eyes.
- #19
- 19 February 2012 - 11:32 PM
- the 1D
- Member
YES I finally got a few character bios finished
Conner the teen leader
hair color:brown
eye color:blue
age:16
occupation:student
rank:leader
family: Father(???) Mother(died in child birth) grandmother(died of old age)
interests:guns
signature attack:the elevator
Kennith the pyro magician
hair color: black
eye color: grey
age: 19
occupation: street magician
rank: pyrotechnics
family: Father(killed in ambush) Mother(died in fire)
Brother:(???)
interests: fire, magic, punching people
signature attack: eagle punch
Conner the teen leader
hair color:brown
eye color:blue
age:16
occupation:student
rank:leader
family: Father(???) Mother(died in child birth) grandmother(died of old age)
interests:guns
signature attack:the elevator
Kennith the pyro magician
hair color: black
eye color: grey
age: 19
occupation: street magician
rank: pyrotechnics
family: Father(killed in ambush) Mother(died in fire)
Brother:(???)
interests: fire, magic, punching people
signature attack: eagle punch
- #21
- 06 March 2012 - 03:43 AM
- the 1D
- Member
Chris the samurai
hair color: blonde
eye color: green
age: 16
occupation: student
rank: stealth and recon
family: Father(killed in action) Mother(suicide)
interests: samurais, revenge, a nice mocha latte with whipped cream (mm tasty)
signature attack: spinal tap
hair color: blonde
eye color: green
age: 16
occupation: student
rank: stealth and recon
family: Father(killed in action) Mother(suicide)
interests: samurais, revenge, a nice mocha latte with whipped cream (mm tasty)
signature attack: spinal tap
- #22
- 06 March 2012 - 11:01 PM
- Camille
- Member
Dude, swearing like that and the big front is kinda annoying.
Alas, you might consider colouring with pencils instead of markers, it's easier to shadow the piece with 'em. And learn to sketch the thing before you ink it, it gives a smother piece. Try looking a lot in mirrors and study other peoples art - and other people so you learn propotions. But I like the sense of action your drawings have, keep that.
Well, then I request a drawing of a girl, cos it seems like you only do boys.
Alas, you might consider colouring with pencils instead of markers, it's easier to shadow the piece with 'em. And learn to sketch the thing before you ink it, it gives a smother piece. Try looking a lot in mirrors and study other peoples art - and other people so you learn propotions. But I like the sense of action your drawings have, keep that.
Well, then I request a drawing of a girl, cos it seems like you only do boys.
This post has been edited by Camille: 15 March 2012 - 05:34 PM
- #24
- 15 March 2012 - 05:32 PM
Chris again
i got bored and spent a few hours on ms paint. it's is not very good but i had fun doing it
- Oso-De-Clare
- Member
I think you're improving a lot, you seems to be pretty good with traditional art! MS Paint needs some work, but that'll come with practice. Digital never came easy for me either :I
I'd like to make a request for a drawing of my OC's Penny and Xaiver? Lets see how you do with couples pictures~.
I'd like to make a request for a drawing of my OC's Penny and Xaiver? Lets see how you do with couples pictures~.
- #33
- 03 August 2012 - 04:29 AM
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