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Heh funny that's what I was taught when I was a kid. I experienced hell and that is why no one can tell what is hell like to me.
On a another note We have reached a Google search look for Sonic X Blaze Fanfic Bittersweet and you will find it on the beginning of the search results.
Blaze X Sonic FanFic
- mAceOfHearts
- Member
Sliviathewolf, on 01 February 2012 - 03:40 AM, said:
mAceOfHearts, on 31 January 2012 - 06:36 PM, said:
Blaze x Sonic? I do not approve, Blaze shouldn't be with anyone!
Amy x Sonic, Rogue x Shadow, Cream x Tails, Knuckles x Tikal, Silver x the most painful thing you can imagine.
Please pick one of those for your next one!
(In case you can't tell, I'm joking, but I seriously hate most of the Sonic pairings involving Blaze.)
Amy x Sonic, Rogue x Shadow, Cream x Tails, Knuckles x Tikal, Silver x the most painful thing you can imagine.
Please pick one of those for your next one!
(In case you can't tell, I'm joking, but I seriously hate most of the Sonic pairings involving Blaze.)
I agree about Sonic not being with Blaze but disagree about Blaze not being with anyone, I actually think that Silver and Blaze make a pretty good pair! my top picks are ShadowxAmy RougexKnuckles CreamxTails (or Cosmo, whichever)and SonicxSally
I hate Silver with a passion, but I can understand why some people like him.
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Oh, and BTW: You don't have to turn it into a mature read, you can just write regular fanfics.
- #53
- 01 February 2012 - 09:54 AM
- Shada
- BCI Member
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Okay Number one Blaze has strong feelings for Sonic in this Fan-Fiction. And also the Sex-scene was not rushed that is a fact. Thank you for the critique and I'll take it by heart.
Oh, then your just really bad at sex scenes then.
And it's stil out of character for everyone no matter how you try to explain it.
- #54
- 01 February 2012 - 02:10 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned 
Since no one gives a shit what the fuck I listen too now and then here we go...
My Mind Is Full Of Pony | Foozogz
Thank you Pepperbrony for making me write
My Mind Is Full Of Pony | Foozogz
Thank you Pepperbrony for making me write
- #57
- 01 February 2012 - 03:34 PM
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 03:02 AM, said:
Taeshi, on 01 February 2012 - 02:13 AM, said:
why are you idiots encouraging this
I'm kind of shocked and hurt at the same time that all people of the forums. YOU! yes.. You Taeshi has decided that my thinking or creativity is idiotic.
The reason I write is the inspiration I feel every time I read your comic. When I cry or I laugh because of it more thoughts are being made on how to make Ms.Taeshi proud of my writing skills. This is not Bullshit what I'm saying is actually true and straight from the heart of my soul.
If that's the case, make it better. Improve. Stop writing furry porn of your favorite video game characters and actually do something inspiring. Also, I very much doubt you have been through as much as some people on these forums, so don't expect any sympathy or brownie points.
- #58
- 01 February 2012 - 05:19 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned
Seriously what is with the hating on the Furry porno writing??
I mean the Site maker told me to do it so I'm going to do it. I'm actually having a friend of mine (who is a writer by the way)look over it and check for grammer errors.
I mean the Site maker told me to do it so I'm going to do it. I'm actually having a friend of mine (who is a writer by the way)look over it and check for grammer errors.
- #59
- 01 February 2012 - 06:12 PM
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 06:12 PM, said:
Seriously what is with the hating on the Furry porno writing??
I mean the Site maker told me to do it so I'm going to do it.
I mean the Site maker told me to do it so I'm going to do it.
Apparently you don't understand sarcasm, so I'll let you down gently when I say he was taking the piss, because that's what he does. He didn't really want any more furry porn, a feeling that most of us share. The answer to your first question is that it's bad furry porn writing. You're inexperienced, and that's ok, but you need to be able to wllingly improve. Furries aren't exactly the top of the food chain here, and before you tell me the answer I know you're going to, it isn't a furry comic. Taeshi has stated this herself. I look forward to seeing what this "Writer" does with your stuff.
Edit: Oh god your avatar hahahahahaha
This post has been edited by Sammy: 01 February 2012 - 06:25 PM
- #60
- 01 February 2012 - 06:18 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned
Hmm YOU CANT BE SARCASTIC ON THE INTERNET!!!
Why don't you just tell me suitcase jeez I no one can tell when your being sarcastic at the same time. Why don't you make a little note saying that your being sarcastic. Well whatever I'm going to finish this god damn project. I want to so that's what I'm going to do.
Why don't you just tell me suitcase jeez I no one can tell when your being sarcastic at the same time. Why don't you make a little note saying that your being sarcastic. Well whatever I'm going to finish this god damn project. I want to so that's what I'm going to do.
- #61
- 01 February 2012 - 06:32 PM
How admirable.
I will note that most people have the basic social skills necessary to recognize the most basic forms of humour through text.
I will note that most people have the basic social skills necessary to recognize the most basic forms of humour through text.
This post has been edited by Sammy: 01 February 2012 - 06:41 PM
- #62
- 01 February 2012 - 06:36 PM
- MintyLimeGreen
- Member
If you put a note next to it when you're being sarcastic, I think that defeats the purpose of the point. Anyways, I told you he doesn't realize what sarcasm is.
- #63
- 01 February 2012 - 06:36 PM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
Member 
Soul, give it up. Learn some basic behavioural skills before you try writing furry crack-pairing porn.
- #64
- 01 February 2012 - 06:43 PM
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
Christ, I tend to be oblivious to sarcasm at times, but Soul, you're pathetic.
For that matter, you should really hone your writing skills before you venture into the public eye. What you have done is on an elementary school level; you clearly don't have much experience in this. Venturing into porn is a BIG step, you should really be accomplished before you attempt it.
Start simple. Write one paragraph descriptions of things you see, write down your dreams and thoughts as vividly as possible, and try and learn to play with words and phrases. Meanwhile, pay attention in English Class and maybe read some books or articles on the subject. When you finally venture into fiction, you're going to want to start simple--you want to develop the basics before you venture into the arena of fanfics and complex writing. While you're doing this, read over your work and underline every word that appears more than once. Get a Thesaurus and a Dictionary and try to expand your vocabulary--and I don't mean introducing big obnoxious words like "corpulent," I mean just try and get the hang of synonyms and antonyms. When you've finally found your voice and got something you think is worth going further with, find someone who actually knows something about writing and have them review it. I don't know about the others, but I'd be happy to do this every once in a while, just as long as its not pornographic in nature.
But yeah, you need basic skills before someone can help, so practice practice practice. And there's nothing wrong with rewriting a story 9 or 10 times just to fine the right feel.
For that matter, you should really hone your writing skills before you venture into the public eye. What you have done is on an elementary school level; you clearly don't have much experience in this. Venturing into porn is a BIG step, you should really be accomplished before you attempt it.
Start simple. Write one paragraph descriptions of things you see, write down your dreams and thoughts as vividly as possible, and try and learn to play with words and phrases. Meanwhile, pay attention in English Class and maybe read some books or articles on the subject. When you finally venture into fiction, you're going to want to start simple--you want to develop the basics before you venture into the arena of fanfics and complex writing. While you're doing this, read over your work and underline every word that appears more than once. Get a Thesaurus and a Dictionary and try to expand your vocabulary--and I don't mean introducing big obnoxious words like "corpulent," I mean just try and get the hang of synonyms and antonyms. When you've finally found your voice and got something you think is worth going further with, find someone who actually knows something about writing and have them review it. I don't know about the others, but I'd be happy to do this every once in a while, just as long as its not pornographic in nature.
But yeah, you need basic skills before someone can help, so practice practice practice. And there's nothing wrong with rewriting a story 9 or 10 times just to fine the right feel.
- #65
- 01 February 2012 - 07:01 PM
- mAceOfHearts
- Member
Carcharocles, on 01 February 2012 - 07:01 PM, said:
Christ, I tend to be oblivious to sarcasm at times, but Soul, you're pathetic.
For that matter, you should really hone your writing skills before you venture into the public eye. What you have done is on an elementary school level; you clearly don't have much experience in this. Venturing into porn is a BIG step, you should really be accomplished before you attempt it.
Start simple. Write one paragraph descriptions of things you see, write down your dreams and thoughts as vividly as possible, and try and learn to play with words and phrases. Meanwhile, pay attention in English Class and maybe read some books or articles on the subject. When you finally venture into fiction, you're going to want to start simple--you want to develop the basics before you venture into the arena of fanfics and complex writing. While you're doing this, read over your work and underline every word that appears more than once. Get a Thesaurus and a Dictionary and try to expand your vocabulary--and I don't mean introducing big obnoxious words like "corpulent," I mean just try and get the hang of synonyms and antonyms. When you've finally found your voice and got something you think is worth going further with, find someone who actually knows something about writing and have them review it. I don't know about the others, but I'd be happy to do this every once in a while, just as long as its not pornographic in nature.
But yeah, you need basic skills before someone can help, so practice practice practice. And there's nothing wrong with rewriting a story 9 or 10 times just to fine the right feel.
For that matter, you should really hone your writing skills before you venture into the public eye. What you have done is on an elementary school level; you clearly don't have much experience in this. Venturing into porn is a BIG step, you should really be accomplished before you attempt it.
Start simple. Write one paragraph descriptions of things you see, write down your dreams and thoughts as vividly as possible, and try and learn to play with words and phrases. Meanwhile, pay attention in English Class and maybe read some books or articles on the subject. When you finally venture into fiction, you're going to want to start simple--you want to develop the basics before you venture into the arena of fanfics and complex writing. While you're doing this, read over your work and underline every word that appears more than once. Get a Thesaurus and a Dictionary and try to expand your vocabulary--and I don't mean introducing big obnoxious words like "corpulent," I mean just try and get the hang of synonyms and antonyms. When you've finally found your voice and got something you think is worth going further with, find someone who actually knows something about writing and have them review it. I don't know about the others, but I'd be happy to do this every once in a while, just as long as its not pornographic in nature.
But yeah, you need basic skills before someone can help, so practice practice practice. And there's nothing wrong with rewriting a story 9 or 10 times just to fine the right feel.
I completely agree.
- #66
- 01 February 2012 - 07:59 PM
- mAceOfHearts
- Member
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 08:56 PM, said:
SushiJaguar, on 01 February 2012 - 06:43 PM, said:
Soul, give it up. Learn some basic behavioural skills before you try writing furry crack-pairing porn.
Why don't you write a furry porn fanfic then sherlock?
Maybe he's not into furries? That's kinda assumptious of you Soul.
- #69
- 01 February 2012 - 09:05 PM
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 08:56 PM, said:
SushiJaguar, on 01 February 2012 - 06:43 PM, said:
Soul, give it up. Learn some basic behavioural skills before you try writing furry crack-pairing porn.
Why don't you write a furry porn fanfic then sherlock?
Did you seriously just ignore everything that was said? Maybe you are worse than Lt_Amazil.
Look, not to be harsh, but I think you should just... stop. Right here. It's gonna annoy people here, you're gonna get frustrated, and the whole thing is gonna end up with you having a tantrum and threatening to commit suicide/leave the forums. For your own sake, take the advice given to you and just rethink this whole situation.
- #70
- 01 February 2012 - 09:09 PM
Well, if you have any doubts, throw it my way. I've done proofing for someone else on these forums, and although it had its dodgy moments, I'm not bad at it. Hell, it's what I basically do for a living.
- #72
- 01 February 2012 - 09:12 PM
- Carcharocles
- BCI Member
You know, if you can't take criticism, you will not make it as a writer. Seriously, you're acting like a child. Though many people are harsh, they're saying that you aren't currently good enough to expose your work to the web. Basically, if you start sending out fanfics with your current level of skill, you're not going to get taken seriously, and when you finally get good, you're going to be seen as the guy who can't write. Good luck shaking that label years down the road. As it is, I'm convinced you're nothing more than a whiny, spoiled, shelter attention-seeking little brat. If you don't want to take our advice, then why fucking bother posting in the first place?
- #77
- 01 February 2012 - 09:42 PM
Well, this is going to be the first time I'm directly addressing this. The only reason people are hating you and your writing is your poor writing skills, along with the spelling and grammar errors. They wouldn't care as much about the fact that it is a sexual fanfic about furry porn, what pairings you made or what your interests are if you could write at least something decent. That's really it. Just your quality. The other stuff honestly doesn't bother them as much as they make it seem they do, the hate is just amplified by the lack of professionalism, especially with this subject. It's a good thing that you got someone to proofread your next one, but if you plan on continuing writing here (forum), then try some other type (you said you were interested in reviewing, try that). This way people will be more inclined to give useful criticism, rather than keep hating on you.
This post has been edited by The Swimmer: 01 February 2012 - 09:48 PM
- #78
- 01 February 2012 - 09:46 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned
You may be right about that swimmer
Professionalism is needed both in the real world and the internet world
Not to worry my good sirs this fan fic is actually better it actually has love and nobody running cross dimensions to blow out flames; only to have sex during the flames yet again!?!
Seriously what the fuck was I thinking!?!
Char dude I was never spoiled or whiny, and I don't need attention to be happy. In the real world I don't whine or complained.
I can tell someone is getting angry do to the fact that I reply in a spoiled or bitchy kind of way. I don't mind is just that is how I usually do to regular negative comments.
I pushed them off the side, and I take heed to the criticism ones especially. I just choose to handle the appropriate way that is given to me, I was raised that way ether ignore or fight and most of the time ignoring is my only to escape the hatred that is use against me.
Professionalism is needed both in the real world and the internet world
Not to worry my good sirs this fan fic is actually better it actually has love and nobody running cross dimensions to blow out flames; only to have sex during the flames yet again!?!
Seriously what the fuck was I thinking!?!
Carcharocles, on 01 February 2012 - 09:42 PM, said:
You know, if you can't take criticism, you will not make it as a writer. Seriously, you're acting like a child. Though many people are harsh, they're saying that you aren't currently good enough to expose your work to the web. Basically, if you start sending out fanfics with your current level of skill, you're not going to get taken seriously, and when you finally get good, you're going to be seen as the guy who can't write. Good luck shaking that label years down the road. As it is, I'm convinced you're nothing more than a whiny, spoiled, shelter attention-seeking little brat. If you don't want to take our advice, then why fucking bother posting in the first place?
Char dude I was never spoiled or whiny, and I don't need attention to be happy. In the real world I don't whine or complained.
I can tell someone is getting angry do to the fact that I reply in a spoiled or bitchy kind of way. I don't mind is just that is how I usually do to regular negative comments.
I pushed them off the side, and I take heed to the criticism ones especially. I just choose to handle the appropriate way that is given to me, I was raised that way ether ignore or fight and most of the time ignoring is my only to escape the hatred that is use against me.
- #79
- 01 February 2012 - 10:17 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned
So I made a little joke since people have a constant hate on my writing then Sonic has fan hate when it comes to his games.
Slap Soul in the face and kick his nads
so click on that and you get me slap and kick in the nads...
yay...(saying unenthusatic)
no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non onononononononon nonono
Oh yes esa Oh god damn it yes!!
Slap Soul in the face and kick his nads
so click on that and you get me slap and kick in the nads...
yay...(saying unenthusatic)
esalaka, on 01 February 2012 - 10:26 PM, said:
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 10:17 PM, said:
Not to worry my good sirs this fan fic is actually better it actually has love
no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non onononononononon nonono
Oh yes esa Oh god damn it yes!!
- #81
- 01 February 2012 - 10:29 PM
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 10:17 PM, said:
Carcharocles, on 01 February 2012 - 09:42 PM, said:
-snip-
Char dude I was never spoiled or whiny, and I don't need attention to be happy. In the real world I don't whine or complained.
I can tell someone is getting angry do to the fact that I reply in a spoiled or bitchy kind of way. I don't mind is just that is how I usually do to regular negative comments.
I pushed them off the side, and I take heed to the criticism ones especially. I just choose to handle the appropriate way that is given to me, I was raised that way ether ignore or fight and most of the time ignoring is my only to escape the hatred that is use against me.
Except... you've ignored the people who gave you criticism. If you HAVE taken it on board, then thank them like a civil person. There really isn't much hatred to you here, compared to how it is on some threads, and actually quite a lot of advice, so take your fingers out of your ears and actually listen to some input.
Also
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 09:20 PM, said:
The also Issue is that Britsh people shouldn't stay up so late streaming Japanese Osu.
I'm just saying go to bed!!
I cant believe I went to 16 to 17 people
I'm just saying go to bed!!
I cant believe I went to 16 to 17 people
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 09:27 PM, said:
Whatever
If that's not spoiled or whiny, them I'm the Sultan of Hersheba.
This post has been edited by Sammy: 01 February 2012 - 10:38 PM
- #82
- 01 February 2012 - 10:37 PM
You're impossible.
- #84
- 01 February 2012 - 10:52 PM
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 10:29 PM, said:
esalaka, on 01 February 2012 - 10:26 PM, said:
SoulTH, on 01 February 2012 - 10:17 PM, said:
Not to worry my good sirs this fan fic is actually better it actually has love
no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non onononononononon nonono
Oh yes esa Oh god damn it yes!!
Stop wasting your time, folks. Can't you see this is all a big joke?
- #88
- 01 February 2012 - 11:25 PM
- SoulTH
- “Yes! YES! YES! YES! YES!” yelled Sonic.
Banned
Supah, on 02 February 2012 - 01:43 AM, said:
Soul just wants attention so he can feel like an internet super star or hes retarded. One of the two, maybe both.
Defintely on number one
This post has been edited by SoulTH: 02 February 2012 - 02:31 AM
- #91
- 02 February 2012 - 02:30 AM
- CaptainBaconMan
- Member
I'm starting to wonder if you're just parading a persona.
- #92
- 02 February 2012 - 02:51 AM
- mAceOfHearts
- Member
You guys do know that he won't be able to post here anymore, right?
(Special Ed does that, if I'm not mistaken.)
(Special Ed does that, if I'm not mistaken.)
- #97
- 02 February 2012 - 03:16 PM
Are we now permitted to dance naked upon the smouldering ashes of SoulTH's hilariously terrible fanfic?
- #99
- 02 February 2012 - 03:43 PM
- Taeshi
- one hot bitch
Administrator 
It is not even very funny! Maybe a few lines here and there, but my god what kind of sense of humour do people have to have a big ol' cack over teenage wankfiction!!!!!
maybe i'm just desensitised because bad fanfiction used to amuse me, but it gets to a point where you just find it very boring and question the sense of humour of those around you!!!!! I mean "The Guardian", now that is still hilarious, but a lot of it is because of the content!!!! Literally this fanfic was "Sonic goes back in time, bangs Blaze", it is not hilarious!!!!
oh my god!!!!
maybe i'm just desensitised because bad fanfiction used to amuse me, but it gets to a point where you just find it very boring and question the sense of humour of those around you!!!!! I mean "The Guardian", now that is still hilarious, but a lot of it is because of the content!!!! Literally this fanfic was "Sonic goes back in time, bangs Blaze", it is not hilarious!!!!
oh my god!!!!
- #100
- 02 February 2012 - 03:51 PM