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King Carbon (A sci fi story with action, espionage, and fucking plants and shit)

Welcome to this thread. Okay, so yeah. I'm writing a story that basically centers around the concept that thousands of years in the future the earth will be covered in dense forests due to climate change and human manipulation of life forms. It's not exactly post apocalyptic, but it is in a sense. It's not a distopia or a false utopia either, although I might throw elements of that in their. But yeah, humanity lives on in isolated pockets utalizing advanced technology and, understandably, technological development has been slow. Fuck it, I don't know.

Just read it and see.

Chapter 1
Sunny Domes of Pleasure (that's a Kubla Khan reference if you didn't know)
Spoiler




Critique is encouraged.
  • #1

I like the setting of the story: a futuristic sci-fi in which there isn't a lethal threat to humanity. I like where it's going so far, but I don't think I have the capacity for critique. Besides some common mistakes, it's looking pretty great. Really interested in what you have in store.
  • #2

Where's the fucking of plants? I WANNA SEE SOME PLANT-FUCKING!

also is it "Fucking plants, and shit" or "Fucking plants AND shit" ?

Because if so ewwwww gross

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 22 March 2012 - 11:30 AM

  • #3

Dude, there are plants fucking outside, right now. And not only that, but they're having a huge interkingdom orgy with a fuck ton of insects. And then some of them just prefer to JIZZ ALL OVER EVERYTHING. My car is covered in tree spunk right now.

We are all probably breathing in the sperm of plants, shit depending on the group it belongs to that sperm might be flagellated, meaning like, when it gets in something wet, say, your mouth, that little fucker is going to start swimming around. AND YOURE GONNA SWALLOW IT, YOU ARE THAT TREES BITCH.


Hows that for fucking plants.
  • #4

I'm oddly aroused

somebody write some BCB cast x plants fanfiction
  • #5

When I first read the name of the thread my first thought was "Oh dear god, this is gonna be like BCB in space crossed with some sort of bad space-hentai-thing isn't it".

Originally I checked out the thread to see how much of a train-wreck this would be but I guess I was proved wrong.
  • #6

So you didn't even read it?
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