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Change of Fate: A Mike fanfic Mike's life makes a unexpected twist
- Link4565
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Chapter 1: The Idea
Ring! Ring! Ring! Mike looked at his phone it was Sandy calling. "Hello?" "Maishul!" Mike jumped so high from the noise he fell off his bed. "Hey Sandy how are you?" He asked. "I'm doing great Maishul!" She replied " I don't have modeling this weekend so I'm happy" "So are you coming to visit?" Mike asked excitedly. He hasn't seen Sandy since she came to Roseville for a modeling job. " I can't I have school work to do sorry Maishul" she replied. Mike got a little disappionted inside,but tried not to show it. "It's ok Sandy we will see each other again, so then why did you call?" Mike asked. "Oh right I wanted to know if you got my letter?" Mike smilled he was holding the letter in question, reading again for the 6th time. " Yeah I got it Sandy its beautiful" MIKE TIME FOR DINNER! It was Mikes mom calling. " I have to go Sandy I love you!" " I love you too Maishul!" Mike hung up and went downstairs for dinner. It was boring because all Haley did was talk about boys, but the meal was good. Mike went back up to his room and sat down on his bed. He began to think about Sandy and how he wanted to see her. "How do we see each other again?" Mike thought. "What if I went there?" He finished thinking and jumped of his bed. "THATS IT!!!" Mike shouted. "Thats it what honey?" His mom came in. "Well mom since Sandy is off from modeling tomorrow and she can't come here I thought that I could go there tomorrow and surprise her" Mike said. " Michael how would you get there I work tomorrow?" His mom responded. " I can take the train!" Mike was hoping she would say yes. " Ok Mike you can go see her tomorrow." His mom said. "REALLY???" "Yes Michael". Mike ran to his mom and hugged her as hard as he could. " THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!" Mike eventaully let go of his mom and got into bed. "Tomorrow I'll see her" he thought "tomorrow".
Chapter 2: Surprise!
Mike was riding the train to Ricketer on a beautiful spring day. He got her a gem braclet at a store before the train ride to surprise her with. " She'll be so happy" Mike thought. ATTENTION ALL PASSENGERS WE WILL BE ARRIVING IN RICKETER IN 5 MINUTES! " Here I am in ricketer" Mike thought. He never imagened himself coming here, but here he was. The train slowed to a stop and the doors opened, Mike walked off the train and dodged through waves of people until he got out out of the train station. Mike stopped in awe, there were huge buildings and beautiful parks everywhere. He got control of himself and started the journey to Sandy's house. Mike had a piece of paper that had Sandy's address on it, she sent it to him when she
first moved. " 1273, 1274, 1275, ah here it is 1276!" Mike walked up the driveway ready to surprise Sandy. He rang the door bell DING-DONG, Mike heard the door unlock. "Hello?" Unfortantly it was Sandy's mom at the door not Sandy. "Mike is that you?" " yes is Sandy home?" Mike was so nervous he felt his palms sweating. " Fraid not shes at the park downtown with a friend, but she will be happy to see you!" "Hmmmm...... ok thats for telling me". Mike started to walk downtown. "Its not that far" he thought " she'll be there. Before he knew it Mike was at the park he began to look for Sandy. He was thinking he was never going to find her when suddenly he saw a cat with white fur, a gold necklace, black hair, and a blue bow. THATS HER!!!!! Mike began to run towards Sandy, but he stopped dead in his tracks and stared in awe. Sandy was kissing another guy but not just kissing they were making out! Mike ran towards them, "SANDY!!!!" "Maishul?" Sandy turned and looked at Mike. "Sandy how could you????" "Maishul its not what yo-"
" Thats is crap Sandy, Crap!" Mike took out the box that contained the bracelt he was going to give her. " HERE HAVE IT WE ARE DONE SANDY!!!!!!!!"
"Maishul! No! Wait.........I! Mike didn't care he wasn't even listening he ran as fast as he could to the train station and bought a ticket to go home. When got to his house he opened the door and slammed it behing him. " Michael your home early what happened" his mom asked.
Mike didn't know what to say he just burst into tears he couldn't hold it in anymore. Mike ran past his mom and dashed up stairs to his room. He locked the door behind him and laid down his bed. Mike contuinued to cry as he cried thousands of thoughts rushed into his head. "Why did she do that?" "I loved her!"" I hate her!" " Who was that guy?" Mike didn't know what to believe, he cried himself to sleep.
And hoped he would never wake up
TO BE CONTINUED
Ring! Ring! Ring! Mike looked at his phone it was Sandy calling. "Hello?" "Maishul!" Mike jumped so high from the noise he fell off his bed. "Hey Sandy how are you?" He asked. "I'm doing great Maishul!" She replied " I don't have modeling this weekend so I'm happy" "So are you coming to visit?" Mike asked excitedly. He hasn't seen Sandy since she came to Roseville for a modeling job. " I can't I have school work to do sorry Maishul" she replied. Mike got a little disappionted inside,but tried not to show it. "It's ok Sandy we will see each other again, so then why did you call?" Mike asked. "Oh right I wanted to know if you got my letter?" Mike smilled he was holding the letter in question, reading again for the 6th time. " Yeah I got it Sandy its beautiful" MIKE TIME FOR DINNER! It was Mikes mom calling. " I have to go Sandy I love you!" " I love you too Maishul!" Mike hung up and went downstairs for dinner. It was boring because all Haley did was talk about boys, but the meal was good. Mike went back up to his room and sat down on his bed. He began to think about Sandy and how he wanted to see her. "How do we see each other again?" Mike thought. "What if I went there?" He finished thinking and jumped of his bed. "THATS IT!!!" Mike shouted. "Thats it what honey?" His mom came in. "Well mom since Sandy is off from modeling tomorrow and she can't come here I thought that I could go there tomorrow and surprise her" Mike said. " Michael how would you get there I work tomorrow?" His mom responded. " I can take the train!" Mike was hoping she would say yes. " Ok Mike you can go see her tomorrow." His mom said. "REALLY???" "Yes Michael". Mike ran to his mom and hugged her as hard as he could. " THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!" Mike eventaully let go of his mom and got into bed. "Tomorrow I'll see her" he thought "tomorrow".
Chapter 2: Surprise!
Mike was riding the train to Ricketer on a beautiful spring day. He got her a gem braclet at a store before the train ride to surprise her with. " She'll be so happy" Mike thought. ATTENTION ALL PASSENGERS WE WILL BE ARRIVING IN RICKETER IN 5 MINUTES! " Here I am in ricketer" Mike thought. He never imagened himself coming here, but here he was. The train slowed to a stop and the doors opened, Mike walked off the train and dodged through waves of people until he got out out of the train station. Mike stopped in awe, there were huge buildings and beautiful parks everywhere. He got control of himself and started the journey to Sandy's house. Mike had a piece of paper that had Sandy's address on it, she sent it to him when she
first moved. " 1273, 1274, 1275, ah here it is 1276!" Mike walked up the driveway ready to surprise Sandy. He rang the door bell DING-DONG, Mike heard the door unlock. "Hello?" Unfortantly it was Sandy's mom at the door not Sandy. "Mike is that you?" " yes is Sandy home?" Mike was so nervous he felt his palms sweating. " Fraid not shes at the park downtown with a friend, but she will be happy to see you!" "Hmmmm...... ok thats for telling me". Mike started to walk downtown. "Its not that far" he thought " she'll be there. Before he knew it Mike was at the park he began to look for Sandy. He was thinking he was never going to find her when suddenly he saw a cat with white fur, a gold necklace, black hair, and a blue bow. THATS HER!!!!! Mike began to run towards Sandy, but he stopped dead in his tracks and stared in awe. Sandy was kissing another guy but not just kissing they were making out! Mike ran towards them, "SANDY!!!!" "Maishul?" Sandy turned and looked at Mike. "Sandy how could you????" "Maishul its not what yo-"
" Thats is crap Sandy, Crap!" Mike took out the box that contained the bracelt he was going to give her. " HERE HAVE IT WE ARE DONE SANDY!!!!!!!!"
"Maishul! No! Wait.........I! Mike didn't care he wasn't even listening he ran as fast as he could to the train station and bought a ticket to go home. When got to his house he opened the door and slammed it behing him. " Michael your home early what happened" his mom asked.
Mike didn't know what to say he just burst into tears he couldn't hold it in anymore. Mike ran past his mom and dashed up stairs to his room. He locked the door behind him and laid down his bed. Mike contuinued to cry as he cried thousands of thoughts rushed into his head. "Why did she do that?" "I loved her!"" I hate her!" " Who was that guy?" Mike didn't know what to believe, he cried himself to sleep.
And hoped he would never wake up
TO BE CONTINUED
This post has been edited by Link4565: 17 July 2012 - 03:55 AM
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- 17 July 2012 - 03:31 AM
- RC!
- Member
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Please. Please. Please please use the enter key. Whenever you switch speakers there should be a break. Else it's headache to read. Textblocks can severely lower the readability of a piece of literature, and this is just ridiculous. It's probably pretty good, but I simply will not read it as is, and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
Roughly
Please. Please. Please please use the enter key. Whenever you switch speakers there should be a break. Else it's headache to read. Textblocks can severely lower the readability of a piece of literature, and this is just ridiculous. It's probably pretty good, but I simply will not read it as is, and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
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"Hello?"
"Maishul!"
Mike jumped so high from the noise he fell off his bed. "Hey Sandy how are you?" He asked.
"I'm doing great Maishul!" She replied " I don't have modeling this weekend so I'm happy"
"So are you coming to visit?" Mike asked excitedly.
"Maishul!"
Mike jumped so high from the noise he fell off his bed. "Hey Sandy how are you?" He asked.
"I'm doing great Maishul!" She replied " I don't have modeling this weekend so I'm happy"
"So are you coming to visit?" Mike asked excitedly.
Roughly
- #3
- 17 July 2012 - 05:41 AM
- DeathfromAbove
- Member
Ya....I'm going to rewrite this....maybe....I don't really
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- 30 July 2012 - 12:53 AM
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