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I'll post 5 things a week and if you whant you can make a short story that involves at least one bittersweet character interacting whith those things. Well start with a flower, bee, ice cream, rubber duck and a kiss.

Lucy opend the front door of her hosue and was going to meet mike at the park wen she heard a quack under her foot she lookt down to see a rubber duck on the front step. She has no idea where it came from or why it was there so she kicked it out of the way and went on to meet mike. Lucy arrived at the park and met mike at the tree he was always siting under and he had a flower for her. Lucy took the flower which was a butter cup and snifft it only to have pollen stick to her nose. Mike let out a chuckle which caused lucy to slap him in the face whith the flower which also left pollen on his nose. They had a good laugh be for a bee came by and landed on mikes nose which then stung him. Lucy saw a little tear form in mikes eye and she couldn't help fill sorry for him so she cave him a liite kiss on his nose. She then said if you tell any one about that I WILL KILL YOU WERE YOU STAND!! Mike agreed and then they decided to go for ice cream so lucy could eat some and mike could use it on his nose for the sting.

Well I dont no how this is going to turn out but whats done is done .

This post has been edited by bluefox: 20 November 2012 - 04:27 AM

I quite like this idea it seems really creative and I'd love to participate.

Daisy's legs were burning. She'd never run this far for this long before. Roseville High was so far in the distance now she wasn't even certain she was still inside the towns boarders. Her breath was heavy and her heart beat faster than she thought possible. The dandelions were ready to spread their seeds, and her legs were becoming thick with the buds as they tangled themselves into her fur. This would normally be enough to distress her, but right now she had more pressing concerns. Her energy was tapped. She couldn't run any further. Daisy dropped to her hands and knees in the middle of the field gasping desperately for air. Had she run far enough? Did she make it? Desperately the girl looked about but it seemed like she was alone...

Finally composing herself slightly, she cast her mind back, lightly touching her lips. She could still taste the strawberry ice cream. "Damn it..." She cursed to herself. Why was she so weak? Why did this keep happening? She told herself over and over again that she loved Abbey. But why then did she give in every time Augustus approached her? His cool and calm attitude, his style... He was everything Abbey would never be. What's more, he was willing to take the initiative. He was the one who fed her frozen treats with his mouth. He was the one who stared at her with those lustful eyes. He was the one who... Her hand self continuously pulled her cheerleader skirt down to cover the stained state of her undergarments. No... She had let him do these things. She wanted him to. It hurt her to lie to Abbey, but it also excited her in a way. This terrible union. This forbidden fruit.

"And so I find you here..." The unmistakeable snarl emanated from Abbey as he towered from behind her. She had been so absorbed in her thoughts she had completely stopped listening out for him.

"Abbey no! I can-" Her pleas were cut off as the Abyssinian grabbed her throat and pinned her to the ground.

"I trusted you! I shared everything that I am with you and you go behind my back every fucking week to fuck my worst enemy?!" He lifted her up just to slam her back down again, his hands clumsily squeezing at her neck. Luckily for her he didn't know where to apply the pressure.

"It was just a kiss!" She rasped.

"Bullshit!" He screamed. "You fuck him and now you're going to lie to me about it?!" His fingers finally started to find their mark and her eyes became hazy. "Everybody knows about it! Everybody! And no one had the guts to tell me! That you two have been fucking in the sports shed after cheerleading practice!" Daisy's hands were loosing their grip. Her vision was tunneling. "I tried my hardest to break away from my father! I wanted to be better than he was! But maybe he was right! Maybe women are just scum who need to be kept in line!" The faint sound of Daisy's choking was easily drowned out by Abbey's blubbered screams. She prayed that this would end. That he'd snap back to reality and release her...

A light buzzing sound filled her left ear. Only for a moment, before it was swallowed up again by the blubbering of a shattered heart. She would have dismissed it, except it seemed her small prayer was answered. A bee flew dangerously close to Abbey's face, and lost in the moment as he was, the small insect almost colliding with his eye was enough to cause him to recoil back. But not fast enough. The stinger pierced his cornea, causing his cries of anguish to turn to screams of pain as he flung himself off Daisy and gripped at the intense pain that filled what was once his left eye.

Daisy gulped down fistfuls of air rapidly as she scrambled onto her hands and knees, crawling away as fast as she could. She made it as far as the edge of the field before turning around to see her boyfriend rolling around in pain. Still gasping, her fingers gripped the soil in indecision. He was seriously hurt... What if he's allergic? She couldn't just leave him here like this could she? Not after what she'd done to him... Slowly... Carefully... She crawled back towards him. His screams finally beginning to die down, she hoarsely called out from a relatively safe distance.

"Are you ok? I... I'm sorry Abbey... Please, I... I really didn't mean to hurt you... I don't know what I was thinking and... I just..." She looked down, the shame of her actions hitting her all at once. "Please be ok!" She called out looking back up.

She didn't even see the rock that smashed the back of her skull into shattered fragments.

Her body lay limp on the cold moist earth. Her fur now completely covered in dandelions seeds. Everything was going dark. What little mental power she had left knew this was the end for her. All she could focus on was a molded old rubber duck that sat not 3 feet from her face. The discarded toy of some child that had no doubt come here with it's family on a picnic or something. The very picture of innocence. If she could, Daisy would have cried. She was nothing like that child. She was dirty. She was tainted. Molded and discarded like that duck... She couldn't see anything else anymore. Just the blur of a sun bleached reminder that she too had once been innocent...

And then...

Nothing...

very sexy

not the first time Daisy's had a burning sensation from her lower half

Young love is so cruel.

Maverik, on 20 November 2012 - 05:51 PM, said:

mmmm delicious killing

This post has been edited by KiraDood5: 21 November 2012 - 09:56 PM

marble,book,picture,candle and chloroform. I had a story but it kicket me of the sevre so now I have to write it again

As lucy lay in the darkness of her room on her bed she held a picture of her and mike. she long to be whith him but dident no how to tell him. She was pushet to the limit by her depression and formed a plan to be whith mike forever.

Mike sat in his room at his desk reding a book bittersweet vol 2. He was kinda creepet out because it seemed that the book was about him and his freinds and there lives. Mike put the book down and was going to go to bed wen he heard a taping at his door. He opend it to find lucy standing there. He thought there was some thing wrong whith her so he told her to take a seat. Lucy sat on mikes bed but said nothing. Mike said can I help you whith something? Lucy said im soory for being a bich. Mike dident no what to say so he sat by her and gave her a little hug. Befor he could form words lucy pulled out a rag she had in her pink bow and held it over mikes face.

Mike came to in a dark room and went to move but found he had ben bound to something fear set in.A lite rose in a corner were lucy was sitting. Mike said what is going on? Lucy stood and was walking over to him wen she stept on a marble whith dident fill so good so she grabed a hammer that was on a bench and smashed it to dust. She came to mike and glared at him. MIke was geting mad so he said let me the fuck down lucy this isn't funny. Lucy replied calm down or i'll have to use the chloroform again and youl miss the fun.Mike said fuck you let me go and maby I wont call the cops on you. Lucy leaned down into mikes ear and said IM GOING TO RAPE YOU!!

(two hours later) Lucy sat on the bed having her fill of mike. Mike just kept saying let me go you bich. Lucy stood up and went to the lite in the room which was a candlestick she brouht it back and told mike this is the end. Mikes eye's grow big as plates as the candle fell to the ground and the room went up in flames. Lucy jumet on the bed whith mike and put the rag whith chloroform on both there faces and that was the end of ther bittersweet lives.

This is not the same story I wrote earlier but a half ass version. I couldent remember it word for word but most of it's there

This post has been edited by bluefox: 26 November 2012 - 07:17 PM

SpaceMouse, on 27 November 2012 - 07:43 PM, said:

That's a new file in my gif folder. Danke.

HA! Yeah I suck at writing.

Bluefox, two things.... Grammer and what the fuck?

Abbey sat in the library reading a BOOK on geography when Daisy walked in. Hey Daisy Abbey said while puting his book down. Abbey.......Daisy said I need to tell you something What is it? Abbey asked. I found a PICTURE with a MARBLE that was doused in CHLOROFORM that was next to a Candle!!!!

Abbey woke up. I need to stop studying before bed.
Ya, I basically didnt care and wrote a crappy story. Hurray

DeathfromAbove, two things: Punctuation and, what the fuck?

This post has been edited by Migrant: 03 December 2012 - 09:02 AM

Window,tree,sunglasses,pocket watch and plastic bag

A tiny ray of sun was shining through the blinds on the window of lucy's room and landed on her cheek. As it moved up her face it came to her eye which was now open and bloodshout. Lucy got out of bed and started geting redy for the day.

Lucy left the house and was on her way to the park. All she could think about was mike who had left to live whith sandy about two days ago. A shine in the grass caught her eye and she stop to se what it was. It was a pocket watch that was gold whith a blue ribon on it. Lucy looked down at it and saw a name tag on it that read LUCY. She dident really care but took it any way seeing as how it had her name on it.

On her way to the park she came by paulo who was wearing some cheap sunglasses and was about to attempt to swoon her. This was met with a swift kick in the ass which sent him flying into some buches. She finally made it to the park and made her way to the tree which they always sat under. Lucy sat there for a while and notice a platic bag blowing around in the wind sticking to any thing it got stuck to. She couldn't help but feel like the bag helpless as she sat under the tree.

This post has been edited by bluefox: 05 December 2012 - 02:45 AM

Go on

This post has been edited by Chris: 15 December 2012 - 07:56 AM

I busted a gut wen I saw the go.

Toaster,deck of cards,golf ball,duck tape,necklace whith a charm.

Lucy came into the kitchen and grabbed a toaster strudel and put it in the toaster as she decided what to do for the day seeing as how it was saturday. She thought about going over to mike's but remembered that he was out of town for the weekend. Daisy and abby were probably together doing something. After eating her strudel she decided to go see what paulo was doing seing as how he was most likely not doing any thing.

Lucy went out side and began her walk to paulo's. She came by david who was for some reason attempting to play golf in the park. She didn't feel like talking so she just went on by. She barely got ten feet away wen she herd what was probably david's golf ball going through some ones window.

She finely made it to paulo's and knockt on the door. Paulo opend the door and said what a surrprise I wasent expecting to see you today come on in babe. They went to paulo's room and lucy plopt down on his bed and started playing whith a deck of cards that were siting next to his bed. paulo asked well do you whant to do? lucy suggested why not play a game? Paulo ask like what whith a smirk? How bout fifty two card pick up as the cards in her hand went flying into his face.

After they picket up the cards paulo grabed a box that was in his closet that was covered in duck tape. He said here dont look to much into it but I got you a gift. Lucy said what for it's not my birthday or any special day. It is a special day he said it just so happens that this is the first day we met. Lucy clawed the box open and diden't know what to say. It was a gold heart whith a silver necklace. Paulo said theres even a picture of you and me in it. Lucy put the necklace on and jumpet up off the bed and went over to paulo and gave him a hug and a kiss. She then whispered into his ear thank you thank you so much for caring and ...... I love you.
Paulo said you no iv'e always loved you babe but to here you say it makes me even happyer.

This post has been edited by bluefox: 26 December 2012 - 03:27 AM

Im very lazy so if any one would like to post the five things to write about go ahead and do so on monday.

DeathfromAbove, on 29 November 2012 - 02:40 AM, said:

How the hell do you know what Chloroform looks like in a picture, it looks like water in its liquid state. Can they see the chemical differences and atomic make up of things, even through pictures?

I do not understand.

I think he meant the picture was doused in chloroform, not the marble. Also it was a shit story meant to be a joke.