Well... this is my first time starting the "Continue The Story" stories well... i have some rules to knows...
1. No Sexual contents - Sexual Stuffs are forbidden in this stories since it'll ruined our tales
2. No intensive violence - some violence are forbidden, like some intensive fatality , killing with no reason , torturing , rape etc. but fighting and using weapons are allowed (only if you want to) and please.. no strong language for no reason and censor it if you use with "*"
3. Fan characters and other stuff allowed - i don't mind how many fan character joined into the story... but i don't want the only 2 seconds appearance fan characters....
well... let's started...
...one day. While Mike was lying on his sofa in living room, Drinking his Orange juice, Watching Soap Opera... then Daisy run into this room quickly
Mike : (quickly stand up) What' wrong Daisy?
Daisy : (panting) Mike... (panting) Paulo won a (panting) vacation (panting) coupon!
Mike : what?
then Daisy Handed Mike a Coupon that she borrowed from Paulo. it's Said "Congreuation! you won a free coupon for a trip to...
Now it's your turn to continue this story
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Mix-up [Continue the stories] BCB + fan char. + what ever you want [read rules]
- #1
- 10 January 2011 - 03:23 AM
"To.... Birmingham! and he gets to take 5 friends with him! Isn't that great?" She squeeled excitedly.
"He won a trip to England?" Asked Mike. "Why would anybody want to visit Birmingham? Do you know what its like there? And why are you tell me this? ITs not like Paulo is going to invite me."
Mike Turns his attention back to the TV, just in time to see the end credits role. "AH damnit! Now I'll never know who shot JRs long lost, secretly Adopted, transexual lesbian Baby!"
Daisy Blushes and turns to leave, shocked by Mikes lack of enthusiasum. As she reaches the door she is knocked off her feet By Someone Rushing into the Living Room. She looks up to see...........
"He won a trip to England?" Asked Mike. "Why would anybody want to visit Birmingham? Do you know what its like there? And why are you tell me this? ITs not like Paulo is going to invite me."
Mike Turns his attention back to the TV, just in time to see the end credits role. "AH damnit! Now I'll never know who shot JRs long lost, secretly Adopted, transexual lesbian Baby!"
Daisy Blushes and turns to leave, shocked by Mikes lack of enthusiasum. As she reaches the door she is knocked off her feet By Someone Rushing into the Living Room. She looks up to see...........
- #2
- 10 January 2011 - 08:12 PM
....God up in the sky, in some sort of square panel as the world she was in right now was nothing more than the inside of a computer.
"God, why won't Mike love me?" she asked God.
God merely smiled and started to type (or at least, that's what it sounded like). Eventually, words appeared before Daisy. And they said...
"God, why won't Mike love me?" she asked God.
God merely smiled and started to type (or at least, that's what it sounded like). Eventually, words appeared before Daisy. And they said...
- #3
- 10 January 2011 - 08:20 PM
Mike is an experimental being. he has great untapped powers but no ability to Love. You must guide him Daisy. Guide him to his Destiny! you have your orders, now march!" So saying GOD hides his presence from the world and dose not reveal himself again until judgment day.
Daisy blinks a few times to clear her head. She stands and wonders if what she just witnessed was real or just a dream. She turns to the person who knocked her down and Screams these words at the top of her Lungs "WHY............
Daisy blinks a few times to clear her head. She stands and wonders if what she just witnessed was real or just a dream. She turns to the person who knocked her down and Screams these words at the top of her Lungs "WHY............
- #4
- 10 January 2011 - 08:26 PM
[Comment] : Nice one....
Now it's time for the 1st fan character apperance...
[continue the story]
Meanwhile... at Lucy house, Lucy was still sleeping... but because she catch a high fever. Then David Wake her up...
David : LUCY!!! We won a trip to england, pack your bag,prepare your rack and let's go!
Lucy get up slowly and answer...
Lucy : What are you saying? [she can't listen clearly due to her left ear is deaf]
David : (shout very loud) WE ARE GOING TO ENGLAND,MEET AT MIKE's HOUSE!!!
Then David run to tell Abbey. But He run into a fox who walking along the side way and fall to the ground..
Fox : HEY! Watch your way!
David : Sorry, but we are in hurry to go england... (run away)
The Fox get up slowly when he turn his face up. He's Bloodyspare[me]...
Bloodyspare : (swipe the dust out of his shirt) ...Wait a minute? Go to england...
Then His face turn to Evil, Giggling like vallains...
Bloodyspare : Now it's time to have fun HE HE HE!!!
XXX-------------XXX
Back to lucy... She's just finished taking a bath. Then she walk back to her bed,Pickup Aspirin,eat 2 of them...
Lucy : *sigh* i have to ask mike what is going on...
Then Jordan [Lucy' Brother] came into her room and asked...
Your turn!
Now it's time for the 1st fan character apperance...
[continue the story]
Meanwhile... at Lucy house, Lucy was still sleeping... but because she catch a high fever. Then David Wake her up...
David : LUCY!!! We won a trip to england, pack your bag,prepare your rack and let's go!
Lucy get up slowly and answer...
Lucy : What are you saying? [she can't listen clearly due to her left ear is deaf]
David : (shout very loud) WE ARE GOING TO ENGLAND,MEET AT MIKE's HOUSE!!!
Then David run to tell Abbey. But He run into a fox who walking along the side way and fall to the ground..
Fox : HEY! Watch your way!
David : Sorry, but we are in hurry to go england... (run away)
The Fox get up slowly when he turn his face up. He's Bloodyspare[me]...
Bloodyspare : (swipe the dust out of his shirt) ...Wait a minute? Go to england...
Then His face turn to Evil, Giggling like vallains...
Bloodyspare : Now it's time to have fun HE HE HE!!!
XXX-------------XXX
Back to lucy... She's just finished taking a bath. Then she walk back to her bed,Pickup Aspirin,eat 2 of them...
Lucy : *sigh* i have to ask mike what is going on...
Then Jordan [Lucy' Brother] came into her room and asked...
Your turn!
- #5
- 11 January 2011 - 01:21 AM
Jordan:"Why is Yashy Biting my foot?"
Lucy: "Yashy stop biting his foot!"
Yashy: "No! Not until you and Flea go!"
Lucy: "Have fun with Yashy Jordan"
Oprah enters the room
Oprah: "So Lucy, since when have these problems with mike started?"
Lucy: "Um......Shouldn't it be Dr.Phil or Jerry Springer asking me these questions"
Jordan: "Oprah I love you!"
Yashy: "Oprah's Mine! She's a lesbian I heard!"
Yashy leans close to Oprah
Yashy: "SO, How 'bout you and me tonight Baby?"
Lucy and Jordan quietly scoot out of the room while Oprah beats up Yashy........
Lucy: "Yashy stop biting his foot!"
Yashy: "No! Not until you and Flea go!"
Lucy: "Have fun with Yashy Jordan"
Oprah enters the room
Oprah: "So Lucy, since when have these problems with mike started?"
Lucy: "Um......Shouldn't it be Dr.Phil or Jerry Springer asking me these questions"
Jordan: "Oprah I love you!"
Yashy: "Oprah's Mine! She's a lesbian I heard!"
Yashy leans close to Oprah
Yashy: "SO, How 'bout you and me tonight Baby?"
Lucy and Jordan quietly scoot out of the room while Oprah beats up Yashy........
- #6
- 13 January 2011 - 02:28 PM
[Comment] Nice one... but could the next one have character from cartoon or anime or fan-char too...
[Continue the story]
Meanwhile... While Tron Bonne [Megaman Legend] Flying Gesellschaft Over South Asia...
Servebot #3 : Miss Tron! We have a big problem Now!
Tron Bonne : (stand from her driver seat) What Wrong #3
Servebot #3 : We run out of food in supplies
Tron Bonne : WHAT!!! But didn't we gather a lot of it before... And what about the Refactors?
Servebot #37 : Someone Sobataged Our ship! It's Gonna fall!
Tessel Bonne : WHATTTTTTTT!!!! WE are going to fall!!!!! NOOOOOO!! [Imagine He's having Priceless reaction]
Then The Gesellschaft Descend from sky like hell!!!
Tron Bonne : We are not going to fall at all!!! (Keep pulling the control lever But it don't work)
XXX---------------------XXX
Lucy and Jordan finally get out of house...
Jordan : so David Said that Paulo won ticket to england and invite us?
Lucy : But i can't go due to fever...
Jordan : Don't Worry I'll Take care of-
Then the Gesellschaft Crash right in front of both and slide to their left
Jordan : What the hell is that!?!
Bloodyspare : MY GOD! I would got myself killed!
Lucy look at Bloodyspare
Lucy : Are you ok?
Bloodyspare : OK? I almost got myself killed by that flying ship!!
Lucy : err... NeverMind...
??? : Hey What wrong?
They 3 turn to the speaker, it was...
Your turn
[Continue the story]
Meanwhile... While Tron Bonne [Megaman Legend] Flying Gesellschaft Over South Asia...
Servebot #3 : Miss Tron! We have a big problem Now!
Tron Bonne : (stand from her driver seat) What Wrong #3
Servebot #3 : We run out of food in supplies
Tron Bonne : WHAT!!! But didn't we gather a lot of it before... And what about the Refactors?
Servebot #37 : Someone Sobataged Our ship! It's Gonna fall!
Tessel Bonne : WHATTTTTTTT!!!! WE are going to fall!!!!! NOOOOOO!! [Imagine He's having Priceless reaction]
Then The Gesellschaft Descend from sky like hell!!!
Tron Bonne : We are not going to fall at all!!! (Keep pulling the control lever But it don't work)
XXX---------------------XXX
Lucy and Jordan finally get out of house...
Jordan : so David Said that Paulo won ticket to england and invite us?
Lucy : But i can't go due to fever...
Jordan : Don't Worry I'll Take care of-
Then the Gesellschaft Crash right in front of both and slide to their left
Jordan : What the hell is that!?!
Bloodyspare : MY GOD! I would got myself killed!
Lucy look at Bloodyspare
Lucy : Are you ok?
Bloodyspare : OK? I almost got myself killed by that flying ship!!
Lucy : err... NeverMind...
??? : Hey What wrong?
They 3 turn to the speaker, it was...
Your turn
- #7
- 13 January 2011 - 03:16 PM
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