Sammy, on 24 September 2011 - 11:35 PM, said:
Your proportions are still a tiny bit out in some poses; in the full-body one on the top right, the arms are nearly as thick as the waist. Unless she is extremely muscly, the arms should be roughly one-third of the size of the torso. Also, you're still drawing the ear a bit far back on a couple; I think I mentioned this before, and it's a really good detail to get right if you can. These sketches are very good anyway; the eyes are particularly well-drawn.
Thanks Sammy! The arms did look a bit thick...I will also remember to move her ear!
chortle, on 25 September 2011 - 02:55 AM, said:
Her eyes look AWESOME!!! Just a note, though, I think that her figure should curve in more so she has more of a waist. Right now the thinnest part of her is right under her... uhhh chest.
Is she going to be an up comic character... In a comic??!?!? Sorry I always seem to be nagging you about this, but I think it wuld be really cool if you started a web comic or even did like a short-ish 20 or so page comic
What happened to Bring the Cure, btw?
Well, I didn't want to make her really curvy. I suppose I should a bit more waist to her though. She is 18, so she's heading off on her own. Most people pig out around that time.
I don't know yet about the comic. I don't want to promise anymore comics, because I'm not sure if I can handle doing one. I need to get some money to buy some copics first, and plan out more characters. It probably won't be a comic anytime soon/if at all.
Thanks for the feedback Chortle!