Can't wait to see what you'll do in the bedroom.
Meowth's Writing Thread
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
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- #301
- 31 March 2011 - 08:44 PM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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It will be a little while until I upload anything again for a few reasons, but the big one is my wrist. Hopefully, I'll be back at it soon though.
I decided that since I have nothing else to do, I may as well upload one of my older, non BCB related works. This is a horror short story (very short) but one of my favorite writings. I hope you guys enjoy it.
A Stormy Night.
It's rated MA, by the way.
I decided that since I have nothing else to do, I may as well upload one of my older, non BCB related works. This is a horror short story (very short) but one of my favorite writings. I hope you guys enjoy it.
A Stormy Night.
It's rated MA, by the way.
- #303
- 02 April 2011 - 04:14 AM
Just when I'd eaten as well.
- #306
- 02 April 2011 - 10:05 AM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
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Pretty damn awesome, but it's no Love Me. A very very good short, though. To be honest I figure Christian Bale would be much more suited to reading this.
- #308
- 02 April 2011 - 11:48 AM
- ashaggywookie
- Member
Antoine Dodson:
Hide your kids, Hide your wife
and hide your husband
Cuz Meowth is rapin errbody out there
Hide your kids, Hide your wife
and hide your husband
Cuz Meowth is rapin errbody out there
- #310
- 03 April 2011 - 06:51 AM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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Chapter 24, Sweet Dreams has been added.
Not a particularly long chapter, but it's not quite horribly short either.
Sorry I haven't been adhering to my schedule. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out. Enjoy. By the way, don't be fooled and think the rest of the story is going to be lovey-dovey or anything like that either. True pain awaits.
Not a particularly long chapter, but it's not quite horribly short either.
Sorry I haven't been adhering to my schedule. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out. Enjoy. By the way, don't be fooled and think the rest of the story is going to be lovey-dovey or anything like that either. True pain awaits.
- #313
- 05 April 2011 - 11:59 PM
- Jewinja
- Member
Man Meowth with this chapter I'm at a lost for words with this one. I guess this is how I see Lucy and Mike getting together in the comic, (not dying of cancer of course) but Mike realizing that Sandy is just to plane, doesn't do anything but be nice and doesn't argue with him or anything of that nature. That just not how a couple work in real life. With Lucy THERE'S conflict, THERE'S drama, and in the end they compromise and in the end they're happy together. (I guess I did have a few words to say.) 
This post has been edited by Jewinja: 06 April 2011 - 10:11 PM
- #319
- 06 April 2011 - 01:06 PM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
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Awww, man. This chapter was insanely cool. Normally I hate this mushy shit, but hey, MikexLucy. Even I make allowances when it's pretty freaking well-written.
- #320
- 06 April 2011 - 05:34 PM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
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He's not slacking if he's working on it. In fact, I seem to recall some talk in the IRC the other day that Pisstaker was passing the new chapter onto Smash for proofreading?
Besides, the reader's job, funnily enough, is not to clamour like a retarded baby for more story-time. The reader's job is to read. I'm sure even you can keep up with such a simple explanation?
Besides, the reader's job, funnily enough, is not to clamour like a retarded baby for more story-time. The reader's job is to read. I'm sure even you can keep up with such a simple explanation?
- #322
- 12 April 2011 - 03:39 AM
- Smash Genesis
- Member
SushiJaguar, on 12 April 2011 - 03:39 AM, said:
He's not slacking if he's working on it. In fact, I seem to recall some talk in the IRC the other day that Pisstaker was passing the new chapter onto Smash for proofreading?
He did, and we both agreed that practically nothing happened, so Meowth is extending chapter 25. I'm not sure if he's just adding more, of if he's going to combine this with Chapter 26, so I don't know all the details.
- #325
- 12 April 2011 - 04:29 PM
- RedJack
- BCI Member
Lycan, on 12 April 2011 - 05:05 PM, said:
People should never put pressure on people working for free >_<
Shame on you, Mr. Red.
Shame on you, Mr. Red.
I wasn't putting pressure on Meowth. I was merely making a joke and expressing excitement towards waiting for the new chapter. If people red that wrong then sorry.
This post has been edited by RedJack: 12 April 2011 - 09:02 PM
- #327
- 12 April 2011 - 09:02 PM
- Lycan
- call me lyucs
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RedJack, on 12 April 2011 - 09:02 PM, said:
I wasn't putting pressure on Meowth. I was merely making a joke and expressing excitement towards waiting for the new chapter. If people red that wrong then sorry.
Hum, hence my 'I don't know if you're joking' afterwards.
You were joking, so what I said does not apply =D
- #329
- 13 April 2011 - 02:08 PM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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I apologize for the wait guys, but I have been feeling under the weather lately. Luckily, I have managed to get a little bit ahead and I'm working on Chapter 27.
Chapter 25 will be uploaded on Tuesday for those who are wondering.
For those wondering what happened there, I attempted to make chapter 25 better, and in the process doubled the length. Somehow, still nothing happened. So I removed it entirely. It will be posted after I finish the story. The thing is, the old chapter 25 still happens, I just skip it since it doesn't really matter.
@Purin
I MIGHT write another chapter for that... MAYBE. If anything, I'll do it as a request since a few people have shown interest in it.
Chapter 25 will be uploaded on Tuesday for those who are wondering.
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He did, and we both agreed that practically nothing happened, so Meowth is extending chapter 25. I'm not sure if he's just adding more, of if he's going to combine this with Chapter 26, so I don't know all the details.
For those wondering what happened there, I attempted to make chapter 25 better, and in the process doubled the length. Somehow, still nothing happened. So I removed it entirely. It will be posted after I finish the story. The thing is, the old chapter 25 still happens, I just skip it since it doesn't really matter.
@Purin
I MIGHT write another chapter for that... MAYBE. If anything, I'll do it as a request since a few people have shown interest in it.
- #330
- 16 April 2011 - 09:10 PM
- RedJack
- BCI Member
Meowth, on 16 April 2011 - 09:10 PM, said:
I apologize for the wait guys, but I have been feeling under the weather lately. Luckily, I have managed to get a little bit ahead and I'm working on Chapter 27.
Chapter 25 will be uploaded on Tuesday for those who are wondering.
For those wondering what happened there, I attempted to make chapter 25 better, and in the process doubled the length. Somehow, still nothing happened. So I removed it entirely. It will be posted after I finish the story. The thing is, the old chapter 25 still happens, I just skip it since it doesn't really matter.
@Purin
I MIGHT write another chapter for that... MAYBE. If anything, I'll do it as a request since a few people have shown interest in it.
Chapter 25 will be uploaded on Tuesday for those who are wondering.
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He did, and we both agreed that practically nothing happened, so Meowth is extending chapter 25. I'm not sure if he's just adding more, of if he's going to combine this with Chapter 26, so I don't know all the details.
For those wondering what happened there, I attempted to make chapter 25 better, and in the process doubled the length. Somehow, still nothing happened. So I removed it entirely. It will be posted after I finish the story. The thing is, the old chapter 25 still happens, I just skip it since it doesn't really matter.
@Purin
I MIGHT write another chapter for that... MAYBE. If anything, I'll do it as a request since a few people have shown interest in it.
Under the weather = slacking?
NA I KEED! Can't wait 
- #332
- 16 April 2011 - 10:32 PM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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NSFW
Sultry Shadows has been added.
NSFW
PauloXTess request done for SushiJaguar.
Another chapter of FF should be uploaded tonight as well.
Sultry Shadows has been added.
NSFW
PauloXTess request done for SushiJaguar.
Another chapter of FF should be uploaded tonight as well.
- #333
- 19 April 2011 - 10:33 PM
- RedJack
- BCI Member
Paulo showing off his mad charm skills and it pays off ;D You really did capture Paulo's reactions and personalities well there. Tess I think was more on the drunker side although she is a bit more willing than Paulo is. Paulo is just a bit modest in my opinion.
- #334
- 19 April 2011 - 11:55 PM
- TheBellBoy
- Member
Fuck yes more porn.
The PauloxTess one was good but... it doesn't really do it for me. Don't know why.
The PauloxTess one was good but... it doesn't really do it for me. Don't know why.
- #336
- 20 April 2011 - 12:47 AM
- Lycan
- call me lyucs
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It's not in every fanfic (Actually, only on three of them), but you seem to have a thing for titles with two words with the same starting letters, Mr Meowth ^_^
Friends Forever
Dominating Daisy
Sultry Shadows
I guess you do that on purpose?
Fun =D
Friends Forever
Dominating Daisy
Sultry Shadows
I guess you do that on purpose?
Fun =D
- #338
- 20 April 2011 - 01:52 AM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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@Bell
I'm sorry my story failed to arouse you.
Hopefully future one's will have a better effect.
@andrem
Episodes? What a fun way of putting it.
@Lycan
What you're seeing is alliteration
You may also notice I love referring music in my chapter titles.
Oh, and I forgot to say when the next chapter is going to be out. It SHOULD be out on Thursday. It's possible it will be out on Saturday, depending on Smash's schedule. I'm currently working on 27 as well.
I'm sorry my story failed to arouse you.
Hopefully future one's will have a better effect.
@andrem
Episodes? What a fun way of putting it.
@Lycan
What you're seeing is alliteration
You may also notice I love referring music in my chapter titles.
Spoiler
Oh, and I forgot to say when the next chapter is going to be out. It SHOULD be out on Thursday. It's possible it will be out on Saturday, depending on Smash's schedule. I'm currently working on 27 as well.
- #339
- 20 April 2011 - 02:06 AM
- Purin
- BCI Member
Meowth, on 20 April 2011 - 02:06 AM, said:
What you're seeing is alliteration
You may also notice I love referring music in my chapter titles.
Spoiler
Is it going to be a parody of "Ride on Josephine" or "Hard Stuff"?
- #340
- 20 April 2011 - 02:34 AM
- Taeshi
- one hot bitch
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Sultry Shadows: I enjoyed that and I liked how you had Paulo all nervous and stuff, it was very in-character ;.; And I guess it was cool they banged I guess.
Man italian restaurant, yum.
Chapter 25: Aaaaaaaaaa I hope Lucy is just being paranoid because I hope that hug wasn't a goodbye hug Mike you crazy crazy bitch ;__;
Man italian restaurant, yum.
Chapter 25: Aaaaaaaaaa I hope Lucy is just being paranoid because I hope that hug wasn't a goodbye hug Mike you crazy crazy bitch ;__;
- #342
- 20 April 2011 - 04:43 AM
- RedJack
- BCI Member
Taeshi, on 20 April 2011 - 04:43 AM, said:
Sultry Shadows: I enjoyed that and I liked how you had Paulo all nervous and stuff, it was very in-character ;.; And I guess it was cool they banged I guess.
Man italian restaurant, yum.
Chapter 25: Aaaaaaaaaa I hope Lucy is just being paranoid because I hope that hug wasn't a goodbye hug Mike you crazy crazy bitch ;__;
Man italian restaurant, yum.
Chapter 25: Aaaaaaaaaa I hope Lucy is just being paranoid because I hope that hug wasn't a goodbye hug Mike you crazy crazy bitch ;__;
You know the characters better than anybody so you should have some idea as to what Mike might be up to
- #343
- 20 April 2011 - 05:43 AM
- Insanity Streak
- BCI Member
This new chapter is my favourite so far, so much as you get the compliments from everone else I must thank you for the hard work you put into this.
The interchange between Michael and Lucys thoughts and mannerisms I thought were the most interesting part (also the aspect that lead me to comment for once)
Looking forward to the new work, hope your enjoying it as much as we seem to be
The interchange between Michael and Lucys thoughts and mannerisms I thought were the most interesting part (also the aspect that lead me to comment for once)
Looking forward to the new work, hope your enjoying it as much as we seem to be
- #344
- 20 April 2011 - 06:22 AM
- Meowth
- Please go easy on me. I don't like critique. Or my title.
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Chapter 26, I Sit Alone has been uploaded.
I will admit this chapter is a touch boring. Not quite bad, but you know, nothing special. It's really just setting the scene for the next chapter which should be uploaded on Saturday.
@Taeshi
I'm glad to hear I got Sultry Shadows right. Sometimes trying to balance 'nervous Paulo' with 'confident Paulo' is difficult, but it seems leaning towards nervous worked out.
@Purin
Close, but no cigar.
@Chris
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
@Insanity Streak
I'm a tad surprised it's your favorite. Don't get me wrong, I like it, but it's not really high up there for me.
I'm glad you're enjoying that. It can be kind of hard to keep those transitions fluid at times, but it's really important because it's one the biggest advantages to the 3rd person, and this story is definitely giving me plenty of practice.
Some days I enjoy it more than others, but in the end, coming in here and seeing all the people deriving some sort of enjoyment out of it is what makes it all worth it.
@RedJack
That isn't entirely true, RedJack. Well, it's true, just not accurate. The reason for that is while she obviously knows the characters better than anyone else, that won't make a difference when it comes to predicting something that I'm writing. She would need to know my perception of the characters, rather than her perception of them.
@Peturd
Not the most clever ending in the world, but I think it suffices.
I will admit this chapter is a touch boring. Not quite bad, but you know, nothing special. It's really just setting the scene for the next chapter which should be uploaded on Saturday.
@Taeshi
I'm glad to hear I got Sultry Shadows right. Sometimes trying to balance 'nervous Paulo' with 'confident Paulo' is difficult, but it seems leaning towards nervous worked out.
@Purin
Close, but no cigar.
@Chris
I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!
@Insanity Streak
I'm a tad surprised it's your favorite. Don't get me wrong, I like it, but it's not really high up there for me.
I'm glad you're enjoying that. It can be kind of hard to keep those transitions fluid at times, but it's really important because it's one the biggest advantages to the 3rd person, and this story is definitely giving me plenty of practice.
Some days I enjoy it more than others, but in the end, coming in here and seeing all the people deriving some sort of enjoyment out of it is what makes it all worth it.
@RedJack
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You know the characters better than anybody so you should have some idea as to what Mike might be up to
That isn't entirely true, RedJack. Well, it's true, just not accurate. The reason for that is while she obviously knows the characters better than anyone else, that won't make a difference when it comes to predicting something that I'm writing. She would need to know my perception of the characters, rather than her perception of them.
@Peturd
Not the most clever ending in the world, but I think it suffices.
- #346
- 21 April 2011 - 10:00 PM
- Chris
- teabagging furfag
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Oh shit, this is gonna destroy daisy.
@meowth
i really am. the way you write the characters is so well done it feels real (aside from the cat part) this feels so authentic it's almost like your drawing from personal experience. keep it up. [/fanboyism]
@meowth
i really am. the way you write the characters is so well done it feels real (aside from the cat part) this feels so authentic it's almost like your drawing from personal experience. keep it up. [/fanboyism]
- #348
- 22 April 2011 - 05:04 AM
- RedJack
- BCI Member
Meowth, on 21 April 2011 - 10:00 PM, said:
@RedJack
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You know the characters better than anybody so you should have some idea as to what Mike might be up to
That isn't entirely true, RedJack. Well, it's true, just not accurate. The reason for that is while she obviously knows the characters better than anyone else, that won't make a difference when it comes to predicting something that I'm writing. She would need to know my perception of the characters, rather than her perception of them.
Hence why I said "Some Idea". As in she would have some idea as to what to expect from people wanting to happen to Mike with her past experience in forums. But then again, this is just what I'm analysing.
And this chapter ain't boring. In fact its building up tension between whether Daisy will upset Mike enough for him to blurt out the truth. You still got the spark of writing good stuff Meowth
This post has been edited by RedJack: 22 April 2011 - 05:41 AM
- #349
- 22 April 2011 - 05:37 AM
- SushiJaguar
- Internet Tough Guy<br>P.S. I roleplay as a medieval furry
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Motherfucker
*epicbrofists Meowth*
*epicbrofists Meowth*
- #350
- 22 April 2011 - 08:01 AM