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Jerk
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(nameless), on 31 March 2011 - 02:37 AM, said:

I would probably panic and think cancer...

They panicked and told me that it looked like cancer. I thought it was normal, but when they actually saw what it had done to me inside the gastroenterologist said it was one of the worst cases he'd ever seen and asked how I could've ignored that for two years straight.

#99401
31 March 2011 - 02:39 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

Craft aids, on 31 March 2011 - 02:38 AM, said:

You can't weigh 60 pounds and have a giant canser nameless.

Unfortunaly you can, and that would probably be at the bad end of a very long painful road.

#99402
31 March 2011 - 02:40 AM

Scotch
Member

Watch the Eternal Moonwalk for five hours. That one's actually pretty fun.

Don't worry, Dom. I barely passed my senior year and I was barely stressed at all.

Well you're kind of a badass, Jerk.

This post has been edited by Scotch: 31 March 2011 - 02:42 AM

#99403
31 March 2011 - 02:41 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

Jerk, on 31 March 2011 - 02:39 AM, said:

(nameless), on 31 March 2011 - 02:37 AM, said:

I would probably panic and think cancer...

...how I could've ignored that for two years straight.

humor me, how'd you ignore it for 2 years straight, I gave my hand pain not even a year before seeing a doctor.

#99404
31 March 2011 - 02:42 AM

Jerk
Member

(nameless), on 31 March 2011 - 02:40 AM, said:

Craft aids, on 31 March 2011 - 02:38 AM, said:

You can't weigh 60 pounds and have a giant canser nameless.

Unfortunaly you can, and that would probably be at the bad end of a very long painful road.

You don't gain body mass from cancer itself. It's really the body poisoning itself and gradually wastes you away.

#99405
31 March 2011 - 02:42 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

What do the bones in the average 16 year old weigh?

Jerk, on 31 March 2011 - 02:42 AM, said:

(nameless), on 31 March 2011 - 02:40 AM, said:

Craft aids, on 31 March 2011 - 02:38 AM, said:

You can't weigh 60 pounds and have a giant canser nameless.

Unfortunaly you can, and that would probably be at the bad end of a very long painful road.

You don't gain body mass from cancer itself. It's really the body poisoning itself and gradually wastes you away.

If you have a 10 pound canser and stand on a scale, do you wiegh 10 more pounds then you would if the cut out the canser?

#99406
31 March 2011 - 02:43 AM

Domafari
Member

Nice avatar Klaus. :smirk:

#99407
31 March 2011 - 02:44 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

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A barik kata barip pari baribadeebadeebadee standen lan doe
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This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 02:50 AM

#99408
31 March 2011 - 02:44 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

Their is no rule that says cancer has to form a tumor...it usually does, but it certainly doesn't have to.

#99409
31 March 2011 - 02:45 AM

Scotch
Member

You would weigh less, but the point is that the cancer isn't adding to your mass. It's converting it.

#99410
31 March 2011 - 02:45 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

@kalus
That post is no.

Scotch, on 31 March 2011 - 02:45 AM, said:

You would weigh less, but the point is that the cancer isn't adding to your mass. It's converting it.

Right. So that would be 10 pounds that is no longer being used by your body. Your effective body weight would be less then your physical body wieght.

A 30 pound baby with a 20 pound tumor had only 10 pounds of working fleash.

This post has been edited by Craft aids: 31 March 2011 - 02:46 AM

#99411
31 March 2011 - 02:47 AM

Jerk
Member

(nameless), on 31 March 2011 - 02:42 AM, said:

humor me, how'd you ignore it for 2 years straight, I gave my hand pain not even a year before seeing a doctor.

I gave my back pain three weeks, but in my defense I couldn't actually walk without painkillers anymore toward the end. It was like a tumor or something and they just cut it out so now I'm good again.

@ Craft: But that's the thing. Tumors have weight and the cancer that causes them does, but the mass that they take up is compensated for by the consumption of resources by cancer cells.

#99412
31 March 2011 - 02:47 AM

Scotch
Member

@ Craft - Yeah, I suppose so. btw, I came in late. Where is this going again?

#99413
31 March 2011 - 02:50 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

@Jerk: Never a dull moment

#99414
31 March 2011 - 02:51 AM

Jerk
Member

@ Scotch: Are you talking about the current topic or what?

#99415
31 March 2011 - 02:51 AM

Jake
Member

@Craft
Well, I like that idea of him making another personality to comfort him.
But I want him to look vulnerable, not mentally cracking...
I want to show that he's been through alot and that he's experienced more than any boy his age should ever have to deal with in their life, but I also want to show how strong he is by being able to deal with that stress.
You could almost say he's a hero not because he flies around saving lives, but because of the fact that he would so willingly put such an enormous strain on himself for the sake of the people around him... Weither or not they know it.

I want the reader to look at the superheros they see on their cartoons, their comic books, and from all of his or her stories in a new light. I want to take away the image of an unbreakable hero and add on the things that they learn in my story. I want them to see how hard it is for Peter Parker to be in love with Mary Jane and still save the citizens of New York. I want to show the battle wear in Supermans eyes as he once again jumps in the telephone booth to change into his costume. I want to break the image of a hero in my story, and show the realities that come with being one.

#99416
31 March 2011 - 02:51 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Craft aids, on 31 March 2011 - 02:47 AM, said:

Scotch, on 31 March 2011 - 02:45 AM, said:

You would weigh less, but the point is that the cancer isn't adding to your mass. It's converting it.

HAHAHAAHAHA!
I jsut used a baby with a 20 pound tumor as an example!
I am the funnyest kind of monster!
HAHAHAHAAHA!
Oh, me.

#99417
31 March 2011 - 02:52 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

Alright.

I guess your messages are different than mine. Yours are, we should really reexamine our values. (at least, that's what I get from it.)
Mine is, we're all fucked. Might as well go up in a blaze of madness.

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 02:54 AM

#99418
31 March 2011 - 02:53 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

*heavy sigh*

#99419
31 March 2011 - 02:54 AM

Jake
Member

God I'm a slow typer...
Sorry about that long rant.

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 02:57 AM

#99420
31 March 2011 - 02:55 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Yes you are.

#99421
31 March 2011 - 02:57 AM

Scotch
Member

Mine are: We're all fucked. I guess I'll just have a seat, then.

#99422
31 March 2011 - 02:57 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Dr. Klaus, on 31 March 2011 - 02:53 AM, said:

See this?
this is the result of being a writer. He has the compultion to write.

#99423
31 March 2011 - 02:57 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

How often are y'all hittin f5?

And who has the compulsion to write? Me? Him? Both?

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 02:58 AM

#99424
31 March 2011 - 02:57 AM

(nameless)
*heavy sigh*
Member

I;m taking a break

#99425
31 March 2011 - 03:01 AM

Jake
Member

You know Klaus and Craft... If you want, I could let you both write "Fan Fictions" of my story.
You can add on and take away whatever you would want to! You guys can have my idea from my story and make your own!

#99426
31 March 2011 - 03:01 AM

Jerk
Member

Craft aids, on 31 March 2011 - 02:52 AM, said:

I jsut used a baby with a 20 pound tumor as an example!
I am the funnyest kind of monster!

It's alright, but you can do better.

Later, (nameless)

#99427
31 March 2011 - 03:01 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Jake, on 31 March 2011 - 02:51 AM, said:

Jake, you painted the picture of a young boy with no one to help him, more stress then most people feal in a lifetime, and a powerful thirst for love that the poeple he suffers for simply can't fill.

He is meant to be just bairly compensating because the role of super hero that you are trying to be honest about IS mentaly debilitating.

As he is right now he is OK but if one thin happens to chainge his situation even slightly for the worce he will snap. You made him specificaly to be on the edge.

How he snapps or if something helps him hold on will be up to you. If something helps him beleive that the people like him even less, he will need a new sorce of comfort. If his glasses are stepped on by a kid he saves from a buring building, that childs kidnies will be at north and south sides of town. If someone finaly convinced him they love him, he will break down crying and compleatly control their live any way he can.

#99428
31 March 2011 - 03:04 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

Jake, on 31 March 2011 - 03:01 AM, said:

We could also collab. Each contribute to the overall story.

#99429
31 March 2011 - 03:04 AM

Domafari
Member

*Yawn*
Now all i have to do is put final detail on the shoe and i'm done!
...
My art...
Thens theres History and English... ._.

#99430
31 March 2011 - 03:06 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

That's the thing jake, I don't wont to make your story. I want you to make your story and listen and choose to ignore me or not ignore me or make me think you are listening and then stick in a plot twist I didnt see coming or whatever YOU want to do.

#99431
31 March 2011 - 03:07 AM

Jake
Member

@Craft
He is ment to be on the verge of breaking, but I don't know how he will act when he "Snaps".
I don't think he would lose it on somebody though. Right now I'm imagining him flying out into something like a valley or a desert, screaming his head off and sending spells flying in all directions.
As for somebody telling him that they loved him, I don't think he would try to control them. There would be a lot of crying yes, but not controlling.

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 03:17 AM

#99432
31 March 2011 - 03:15 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

#99433
31 March 2011 - 03:15 AM

Jake
Member

@Klaus
That sound like a pretty good idea!

#99434
31 March 2011 - 03:18 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Well jake, you made something on the edge. All people will want to see is you push him over. Really, any nuber of things would be doable but what I have been trying to get out of you, do you or don't you have an idea on how to continue this?

#99435
31 March 2011 - 03:21 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

You could always bring him back after insanity.

Let him wreak havoc, have someone who truly loves him reveal the truth, then he realises and has to undo the damage the evil has done. and people hate him, so he has to remake a name for himself!

Crazy first season of anime there.

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 03:24 AM

#99436
31 March 2011 - 03:24 AM

Jake
Member

Hmmm...
I don't know about sending him over the edge yet. I want the reader to see more into his life before I do something that drastic.
If I do it right in the next chapter, it won't have that big of an impact.

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 03:26 AM

#99437
31 March 2011 - 03:24 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

over the edge could happen about halfway through the series. you'd have six to eight episodes doing other stuff.

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 03:26 AM

#99438
31 March 2011 - 03:26 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Oh yeah jake, this is all talking about stuff later on.

when he is getting close to snapping you should have him just float on his back to class near the roof.

Dr. Klaus, on 31 March 2011 - 03:26 AM, said:

over the edge could happen about halfway through the series. you'd have six to eight episodes doing other stuff.

I think less is more here. I mean, if you can lagitamatly fill that stuff with events, that would be cool but no stalling at any point for the love of god.

#99439
31 March 2011 - 03:28 AM

Jake
Member

@Craft
?
Why?
And don't worry, I'll try to stay away from filler.

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 03:29 AM

#99440
31 March 2011 - 03:28 AM

Domafari
Member

Ugh...
Done...
But so Tired...
I'll just get up earily and finish the other shit...
I... need... sleep...
Night everyone...

(Wheres the tired emotion?)

#99441
31 March 2011 - 03:29 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

So first couple episodes, you get his life, and introduces other characters (love interests, minor and major antagonists, traitors, etc...)
Second section, he starts losing it. Third section, he does lose it and goes crazy.
Big season finale two-parter cliffhanger, he realizes his mistakes, but now he is hated by the people he had originally strove to protect...

NO
SCRAP THAT
THAT'S BATMAN

WHY DOES ALL THE GOOD STUFF HAVE TO BE ALREADY DONE

FUUUU BATMAN I HATE YOU >:O

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 03:31 AM

#99442
31 March 2011 - 03:30 AM

Jake
Member

Good night Dom.

#99443
31 March 2011 - 03:30 AM

Craft aids
That doesn't sound like a rape. That sounds like suprise sex
Banned

Becasue Fuck the rules, I have power and you take me for granted. Plus, this is preaty sweet.
Also, you can show people reacting and even have a scean where he gets called to the princaples office and before walking in he lights his own head on fire or sticks a chunk of ice to his elbo and everyone just tries to ignore it. You know, silently fearing. Mostly, I just want that floating in the hall thing. I have been seeing it in my head and it would be Sooooo~ satisfying.

Dr. Klaus, on 31 March 2011 - 03:30 AM, said:

FUUUU BATMAN I HATE YOU >:O

Because you keep using recycled stuff like having love bring you back from he brink for only the power of love is omnipotent and also you keep ignoring that jake wants to have no such indevidual connection. I do like the idea of a person trying to connect with him but instead he just treats him/her like more gum on his shoes.

#99444
31 March 2011 - 03:35 AM

Jake
Member

@Craft
I don't know about him lighting his head on fire or anything like that. He tends to keep his magic to himself in school.
Like I said, you wouldn't know the difference between him and the other students if he wasn't flying over the streets or saying chants under his breath.
Although he will use his magic in situations like... He drops his pencil and it rolls across the floor. Instead of getting up to get it, he just sends it flying back into his hand through magic.

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 03:41 AM

#99445
31 March 2011 - 03:39 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

Well, do you want a hopeful ending? or a downer? Cuz I can write one hell of a downer.

In retrospect, it's not so like batman. The only connexions are batman being a superhero and him eventually being hated.

This post has been edited by Dr. Klaus: 31 March 2011 - 03:40 AM

#99446
31 March 2011 - 03:40 AM

Jake
Member

@Klaus
I'm a sucker for happy endings.
We already have things like Death Note for sad endings...

This post has been edited by Jake: 31 March 2011 - 03:44 AM

#99447
31 March 2011 - 03:43 AM

Dr. Klaus
Member

I haven't made it through fullmetal yet.
Well, we can do what Tae is doing with BCB.

#99448
31 March 2011 - 03:44 AM

Jerk
Member

Pyrrhic victories are my favorite. See also: Akira.

#99449
31 March 2011 - 03:44 AM

Scotch
Member

I like pointless endings. The type of ending that makes you feel as though it may as well have never happened.

And if you really hate downer endings you'd do very well to watch something like The Mist or The Skeleton Key.

#99450
31 March 2011 - 03:47 AM

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