One complaint :(
- #51
- 12 February 2011 - 06:06 PM
Joobles, on 12 February 2011 - 06:06 PM, said:
I suspect it all ends with Daisy and Tess tied to railroad tracks, making the summer arc foreshadowing Paulo's decision! Sadly, Abbey beats him up and saves Daisy, while Tess... returns to her home planet.
This post has been edited by Kav: 12 February 2011 - 06:21 PM
- #52
- 12 February 2011 - 06:20 PM
As it stands, I want to give you three internets.
- #53
- 12 February 2011 - 06:24 PM
Joobles, on 12 February 2011 - 05:50 PM, said:
<3
- #54
- 12 February 2011 - 08:17 PM
any ways
i love crack theories and the making of them
you never know what's coming around the conner
some one says something and your convinced its the word of god ;D
i still say the world revolves around Augustus :3
- #55
- 12 February 2011 - 08:33 PM
Susan, on 11 February 2011 - 11:43 PM, said:
This Augustus/Alejandro business. This is a high school, not a criminal organization and if Augustus is working with someone for some stupid criminal plot, then that is just completely and utterly retarded.
They are teenagers, not criminal masterminds.
AMEN!!! Tae just needs to write him off(I got a few ideas cough overdose cough raped/murdered cough) and let the high school shenanigans continue.
- #56
- 15 February 2011 - 10:39 PM
- #57
- 15 February 2011 - 11:14 PM
SushiJaguar, on 15 February 2011 - 11:14 PM, said:
"Hey, uh Farva. Whats the name of that restaurant you like with all that goofy shit on the wall and the Mozzarella Sticks?"
- #58
- 15 February 2011 - 11:19 PM
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- 15 February 2011 - 11:20 PM
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- 15 February 2011 - 11:32 PM
- #61
- 15 February 2011 - 11:38 PM
Taeshi, on 12 February 2011 - 06:57 AM, said:
I love theories that are completely wrong~
What I don't like is trying not to word of god because when incorrect theories are muttered multiple times I feel like wanting to set things straight, but part of the fun is seeing people question intentions of characters and what's going to happen.. so when the revelation comes they're surprised!
(though I agree if I ever remade BCB into a shorter more succinct story Augustus would stay and his unexplained reasons would be different. Alejandro would be absolutely rewritten, and if I could, removed entirely. I'm kind of at a point where I have no choice but to work at that, even though I already have plans that aren't as melodramatic and mafia-ridden as people think. )
But on the other hand comedy would mostly disappear in favour of telling the story. So only the small nice bits of humour would remain. SO SO MUCH FOR HUMARS
Basically, "Meet the Boss" is BCB Canon.
- #62
- 16 February 2011 - 12:10 AM
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- 16 February 2011 - 02:52 AM
- #64
- 16 February 2011 - 02:55 AM
- #65
- 16 February 2011 - 11:52 AM
It is hilarious yes, but it's supposed to follow a dramatic and semi comedic story. There's bound to be bad snu snu. I mean ju ju. Well, the both of them.
- #66
- 16 February 2011 - 06:24 PM
CriticalQuit, on 12 February 2011 - 05:58 PM, said:
He is essentially an ordinary street gang leader.
I don't agree. He is a simple raper. Nothing more
On the other hand, in my fanfict I made him as a gang leader... because it was more interesting for what I wanted to write
- #67
- 17 February 2011 - 04:10 PM
Volgrand, on 17 February 2011 - 04:10 PM, said:
That's just how he introduces himself.
"Hello, I'm Alejandro, and I'll be raping you today."
- #68
- 17 February 2011 - 05:46 PM
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- 17 February 2011 - 06:00 PM
- #70
- 18 February 2011 - 01:39 AM
Hen Barrison, on 11 February 2011 - 02:10 PM, said:
Drama is the bitter that offers stark contrast the sweet comedic releif of Bittersweet Candy Bowl
- #71
- 29 January 2013 - 08:39 PM
- #72
- 31 January 2013 - 04:56 PM
>>natural characters
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
sorry i couldn't keep reading if you think those one-note characters are anything but one-note characters
also the fact if you're gonna write something huge, you should use paragraphs. A wall of text can be irritating to read and not encouraging.
- #73
- 31 January 2013 - 05:40 PM
- #74
- 31 January 2013 - 05:47 PM
He's like the failed space heater in a double wide trailer slowly spreading carbon monoxide on Christmas Eve until the entire white trash family is dead.
(Which is, by far, the best thing about Christmas in Texas.)
I meant to add "in a benevolent way," but trailer trash corpses are already pretty great.
- #75
- 05 February 2013 - 12:12 PM
this forum is gay
- #76
- 06 February 2013 - 09:41 AM
















